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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Hrmm, maybe it was another character, then? Or I'm entirely wrong and I'm remembering that scene incorrectly.O. Hinds wrote:
You mean this?The point of that was that it wasn't (or at least Applejack took it not to be) that the bullet was particularly good, it was that the armor wasn't good enough. Hence the Steel Rangers.Kkat wrote:“When that zebra bullet punched through muh brother’s armor an’ pierced his heart, it broke muh heart too.” I could see Applejack’s eyes start to tear. Her voice trembled, but she pressed on. The room was now dead silent except for her.
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No, that's not it... It was definitely a reference to it being 'our/my/their bullet what/that killed him' or words to that effect. If nobody else does I'll try to locate the quote when I have time, but it'll be a while.O. Hinds wrote:You mean this?The point of that was that it wasn't (or at least Applejack took it not to be) that the bullet was particularly good, it was that the armor wasn't good enough. Hence the Steel Rangers.Kkat wrote:“When that zebra bullet punched through muh brother’s armor an’ pierced his heart, it broke muh heart too.” I could see Applejack’s eyes start to tear. Her voice trembled, but she pressed on. The room was now dead silent except for her.
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Yeah, probably just some retard going "wait, this was changed" because they never did specify when.
That's the trouble with everyone insisting on being anonymous as if it really matters and that everyone has to be untraceable.
That's the trouble with everyone insisting on being anonymous as if it really matters and that everyone has to be untraceable.
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That's what I remember as well, but maybe it's from PH and not the original.Sindri wrote:
No, that's not it... It was definitely a reference to it being 'our/my/their bullet what/that killed him' or words to that effect. If nobody else does I'll try to locate the quote when I have time, but it'll be a while.
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Point, it might have come from the records in Trottenheimer's place. My memories of FoE and PH do sometimes get blurred, in which case I owe Kkat an apology. But I still have the impression it was from longer ago than that...Ketchup wrote:That's what I remember as well, but maybe it's from PH and not the original.Sindri wrote:
No, that's not it... It was definitely a reference to it being 'our/my/their bullet what/that killed him' or words to that effect. If nobody else does I'll try to locate the quote when I have time, but it'll be a while.
What amuses me about it is that most of them are laughably easy to trace. Most don't even know what TOR is. Having a screen name and being difficult to find are pretty much entirely unrelated, unless your personal habits make it easy to guess (like how I tend to use some variation on 'Sindri' or 'Suncatcher' when I'm not trying to hide, though I'm hardly the only one using the names). I generally just ignore anything posted as 'anon' or 'anonymous' because they seem to be universally trolls and idiots.Kippershy wrote:That's the trouble with everyone insisting on being anonymous as if it really matters and that everyone has to be untraceable.
Even on 4chan and similar sites, what few scraps of value float up out of the much are always attached to a real screen name.
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looks like we're having a hard time applying Scotch Tape to this Plot Hole...Ketchup wrote:...But was then disturbed by the development of AP rounds that could penetrate powered armor. It's pretty foggy, maybe there are two types of AP rounds?Sindri wrote:Well, except that it was said (or at least strongly implied) that Big Macintosh would have survived his fatal wound if he had been wearing power armor. Applejack was driven to develop the armor specifically by his death.stringtheory wrote:or that AP rounds were just extremely rare, and only given to specialists, like Psalm, until after this pointSindri wrote:and the best way to reconcile what Kkat said about it is that Equestria had developed AP rounds years before the zebras did, and that power armor can stop a normal armor-piercing round from a normal rifle, at least if it isn't to the head.
Aside from that, .50 will penetrate most personal armor, regardless of bullet variety.
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Quotidian, I'm not picking at you alone with either of these, you just had nice wordings of the topics in a single post.
I do agree that the Marauders' interactions with the Ministries, and especially Goldenblood's machinations, get much closer to taking the original over, but I still think this is a better idea than holding everything sacred. Not touching the Mares at all is obviously impossible if we want to see anything of consequence from the war, and leaving the organization as it was would mean even more meddling with the past to use the Mane Six in a way that doesn't feel tired. Sure, having Goldenblood mastermind most of the grand plans is quite a different feel than we got in FoE, but I'd rather have that than force Somber to work according to a very strict blueprint, with very little left to explore.
I don't see it so much as forcing a particular sexual orientation as it is pushing a particular view of sexual orientation, and the Enclave is just a bit more aware of it than we are. After all, just about anything here that's not being made to bring the issue to the foreground describes the ideal couple as heterosexual and monogamous. The greater visibility might be to try to override the seeming estrus push toward finding a stallion over more normal preferences (which is itself interesting), but it sounds like it's more awareness than reprogramming.Quotidian wrote:
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Wait, I thought Glory prefered mares? Also, some interesting ideas about conditioning vs natural sexuality. That kind of makes me a bit uncomfortable. I don't think sexual orientation is something you can have forced into you. I know people try, and I know it messes a lot of people up. Just take a look at Exodus International or all those other "pray away the gay groups".
They're both focused on different groups. Kkat's history was focused around the Ministry Mares, while Somber uses the Marauders. Since the group is never really fleshed out in FoE, the characters are definitely Somber's, and since a lot of their scenes were offscreen and lacking detail, seeing them firsthand does make it feel more like Somber's making them her own than is actually happening.
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Some of the comments on PH I've seen in other places have suggested that Somber's taking too much of Kkat's work over in his fic. That Goldenblood orchestrating everything from behind the scenes sort of ruins the whole vibe of the original, and Psalm killing Pinkie Pie... Well, I'll be honest, I don't know what to think about it. I liked the original, and it does feel a little contrived that Somber's characters are really behind everything, but at the same time, I like PH a lot too, and I can't fault Somber for wanting to weave his creation in with the original.
I do agree that the Marauders' interactions with the Ministries, and especially Goldenblood's machinations, get much closer to taking the original over, but I still think this is a better idea than holding everything sacred. Not touching the Mares at all is obviously impossible if we want to see anything of consequence from the war, and leaving the organization as it was would mean even more meddling with the past to use the Mane Six in a way that doesn't feel tired. Sure, having Goldenblood mastermind most of the grand plans is quite a different feel than we got in FoE, but I'd rather have that than force Somber to work according to a very strict blueprint, with very little left to explore.
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"There's your truth, my truth, and somewhere in the middle the real truth."
Throw in that it happened 200 years ago, was a dramatic, world changing event, government secrets and unrevealed projects, what the general public knew to be "true", what individuals know to be "true", it pretty much comes down to if you're able to come up with something to make it work for you.
I understand not everybody can do that, that they need a set in stone, can not be mess with canon. Me? I'm a laid back guy. Currently I'm cherry picking suggestions made here and putting them into my head canon.
If it helps, while we think history is set in stone, it does change. New discoveries, more information, overlooked details getting the spotlight put on them.
My memory is hazy, but while Applejack was one of the more active Ministry Mares, wasn't there a bunch of deals and plots going on behind her back? And how long was it before/after Big Mac's death did she put her hoof down on those things? Try as she might certain things slipped by her. Why couldn't AP rounds be one of those things?
And once again Psalm did get those rounds from Goldenblood who had his hooves in everything and blah blah blah I hate to use that as a handwave but most of PH has been dealing with stuff he's done and how well he kept certain things hidden and concealed.
Also, I think Dragonslayer rounds could count as AP rounds since they have to punch through dragon scales, but they wasn't widely produced.
Throw in that it happened 200 years ago, was a dramatic, world changing event, government secrets and unrevealed projects, what the general public knew to be "true", what individuals know to be "true", it pretty much comes down to if you're able to come up with something to make it work for you.
I understand not everybody can do that, that they need a set in stone, can not be mess with canon. Me? I'm a laid back guy. Currently I'm cherry picking suggestions made here and putting them into my head canon.
If it helps, while we think history is set in stone, it does change. New discoveries, more information, overlooked details getting the spotlight put on them.
My memory is hazy, but while Applejack was one of the more active Ministry Mares, wasn't there a bunch of deals and plots going on behind her back? And how long was it before/after Big Mac's death did she put her hoof down on those things? Try as she might certain things slipped by her. Why couldn't AP rounds be one of those things?
And once again Psalm did get those rounds from Goldenblood who had his hooves in everything and blah blah blah I hate to use that as a handwave but most of PH has been dealing with stuff he's done and how well he kept certain things hidden and concealed.
Also, I think Dragonslayer rounds could count as AP rounds since they have to punch through dragon scales, but they wasn't widely produced.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
I'm new to this board (just registered today, wewt!) so I
unfortunately don't know how to mark things as spoilers yet, which is a
problem considering this post will include at least a few potential spoilers.
So with that in mind I'll try to make it clear before I start that there will
be spoilers in this post. With that in mind:
**PH CHAP. 54 SPOILERS AHEAD!**
I know this isn't really related to what the previous comments were about,
but I figured now would be as good a time as any to introduce my pet fan theory
as to the possible true identity of the recently revealed Legate Vitiosus. If someone else already put forth this theory
without my knowing, well then I guess I’ll be more than happy to tell it a
second time.
So starting with what we learned in chapter 54, Vitiosus is presented as a
mysterious, rune covered beast of a
zebra capable of some absolutely game breaking feats, including but not limited
to control over the elements, the ability to shrug off an otherwise fatal wound
from BJ’s startmetal sword (which as previously revealed in Hightower is
capable of damaging even the otherwise indestructible soul jars), and the
ability to stop a freaking tank
shell with his bear hooves. So it suffices to say this guy is
presented as a pretty unbeatable warrior.
Now wait a minute, where have we heard about this sort of thing before?
Let’s look back a minute to the first point in the story
where we hear about Legate Vitiosus.
While I couldn’t tell you exactly what chapter this is from, I can say
that the first time anyone mentioned the name Vitiosus was not long after the
first encounter with Lancer, when Sekashi was telling BJ the “funny story”
about how she ended up marked for death by the Remnant. Apparently she was originally one of Vitiosus’
wives, before she found herself alone and dying somewhere in The Hoof. In a desperate
bid to save her life, she made a deal with the stars to save her
life. While her wish was ultimately
granted, the price for her survival was that now her “heart was filled with
doubt,” which lead her to peruse a number of the Remnant’s forbidden texts
regarding the stars before inevitably getting caught. So what does that have to do with Legate
Vitiosus?
Fast forward a couple more chapters to another one of
Sekashi’s “funny stories” (again, I don’t know exactly when this occurred, but
I’m pretty sure it was just after BJ’s second encounter with Lancer at the
museum). In this story, Sekashi makes
mention of a mythical figure in zebra folklore.
According to the legend, there was a zebra that called upon the stars
and demanded that they grant him the power to become an unstoppable force on
the battlefield, capable of shrugging off even the most grievous of wounds and
emerging victorious. While he was
granted his wish and then some, this came at the price that from then on he
would cause death and havoc where ever he went, and would eventually go on to
become the original Proditor.
As noted in the recent flashback where BJ witnessed Shujaa’s
last sacrifice to save Twist, it doesn’t appear as though most zebra legates get an awesome set of superpowers as part of the position. Additionally, if you go ahead and google the
name “Vitiosus”, you’ll find that it can translate as either “defective and
corrupt” or “wicked and depraved ”. Hmm now there's a name to run away from really fast :P
Its worth noting that when this particular “funny story” was being told, it
was probably safe to say most of us readers assumed this was a big hint towards
Rampage’s backstory due to the similarities.
After all, not only is she much faster and stronger than a pony her size
has any right to be, she’s also effectively un-killable, and the stripes seemed
to be a pretty dead giveaway too.
However the events at Hightower effectively joshed that particular theory,
thanks to the revelation that both Rampage and her phoenix talisman were the
product of Rarity’s own experiments in necromancy, just before the bombs
fell. So she couldn’t possibly have any
relation to a figure mentioned in ancient zebra folklore. After Hightower it seemed that the story of
the first Proditor may have been just a simple piece of folklore after all, at least that is until Legate Vitiosus makes his appearance, and demonstrates many of these same traits.
It’s at this point that the various clues start coming together.
When Sekashi bargained with the stars to
secure her own survival, they revealed to her that Legate Vitiosus was in fact
the ancient Proditor of legend.
Naturally more than a little disturbed by her revelation, Sekashi started
pouring over the forbidden texts to confirm the truth. When Vitiosus discovered what she was up to he
was understandably pissed. If
the Remnant were to discover that their “brave leader” was in fact the
legendary Proditor, and that all those amazing powers of his were the result of
a pact with the stars rather than his status as Legate, it would pretty much
destroy his image amongst his followers.
So Vitiosus branded Sekashi a traitor and sent his own son to kill her
in order to prevent the truth from getting out.
Of course if all this is true then it still leaves a number
of questions. Does Vitiosus truly
believe that he is fighting for the good of zebrakind by waging an endless
war against Hoofington, or is this just a cover for a decided less than altruistic
agenda such as claiming the Tokmare’s power for his own?
**END SPOILERS**
Well, regardless of whether or not this crazy fan theory
turns out to be true, 54 was one heck of a chapter. Here’s hoping we won’t have to wait as long
for the next one!
unfortunately don't know how to mark things as spoilers yet, which is a
problem considering this post will include at least a few potential spoilers.
So with that in mind I'll try to make it clear before I start that there will
be spoilers in this post. With that in mind:
**PH CHAP. 54 SPOILERS AHEAD!**
I know this isn't really related to what the previous comments were about,
but I figured now would be as good a time as any to introduce my pet fan theory
as to the possible true identity of the recently revealed Legate Vitiosus. If someone else already put forth this theory
without my knowing, well then I guess I’ll be more than happy to tell it a
second time.
So starting with what we learned in chapter 54, Vitiosus is presented as a
mysterious, rune covered beast of a
zebra capable of some absolutely game breaking feats, including but not limited
to control over the elements, the ability to shrug off an otherwise fatal wound
from BJ’s startmetal sword (which as previously revealed in Hightower is
capable of damaging even the otherwise indestructible soul jars), and the
ability to stop a freaking tank
shell with his bear hooves. So it suffices to say this guy is
presented as a pretty unbeatable warrior.
Now wait a minute, where have we heard about this sort of thing before?
Let’s look back a minute to the first point in the story
where we hear about Legate Vitiosus.
While I couldn’t tell you exactly what chapter this is from, I can say
that the first time anyone mentioned the name Vitiosus was not long after the
first encounter with Lancer, when Sekashi was telling BJ the “funny story”
about how she ended up marked for death by the Remnant. Apparently she was originally one of Vitiosus’
wives, before she found herself alone and dying somewhere in The Hoof. In a desperate
bid to save her life, she made a deal with the stars to save her
life. While her wish was ultimately
granted, the price for her survival was that now her “heart was filled with
doubt,” which lead her to peruse a number of the Remnant’s forbidden texts
regarding the stars before inevitably getting caught. So what does that have to do with Legate
Vitiosus?
Fast forward a couple more chapters to another one of
Sekashi’s “funny stories” (again, I don’t know exactly when this occurred, but
I’m pretty sure it was just after BJ’s second encounter with Lancer at the
museum). In this story, Sekashi makes
mention of a mythical figure in zebra folklore.
According to the legend, there was a zebra that called upon the stars
and demanded that they grant him the power to become an unstoppable force on
the battlefield, capable of shrugging off even the most grievous of wounds and
emerging victorious. While he was
granted his wish and then some, this came at the price that from then on he
would cause death and havoc where ever he went, and would eventually go on to
become the original Proditor.
As noted in the recent flashback where BJ witnessed Shujaa’s
last sacrifice to save Twist, it doesn’t appear as though most zebra legates get an awesome set of superpowers as part of the position. Additionally, if you go ahead and google the
name “Vitiosus”, you’ll find that it can translate as either “defective and
corrupt” or “wicked and depraved ”. Hmm now there's a name to run away from really fast :P
Its worth noting that when this particular “funny story” was being told, it
was probably safe to say most of us readers assumed this was a big hint towards
Rampage’s backstory due to the similarities.
After all, not only is she much faster and stronger than a pony her size
has any right to be, she’s also effectively un-killable, and the stripes seemed
to be a pretty dead giveaway too.
However the events at Hightower effectively joshed that particular theory,
thanks to the revelation that both Rampage and her phoenix talisman were the
product of Rarity’s own experiments in necromancy, just before the bombs
fell. So she couldn’t possibly have any
relation to a figure mentioned in ancient zebra folklore. After Hightower it seemed that the story of
the first Proditor may have been just a simple piece of folklore after all, at least that is until Legate Vitiosus makes his appearance, and demonstrates many of these same traits.
It’s at this point that the various clues start coming together.
When Sekashi bargained with the stars to
secure her own survival, they revealed to her that Legate Vitiosus was in fact
the ancient Proditor of legend.
Naturally more than a little disturbed by her revelation, Sekashi started
pouring over the forbidden texts to confirm the truth. When Vitiosus discovered what she was up to he
was understandably pissed. If
the Remnant were to discover that their “brave leader” was in fact the
legendary Proditor, and that all those amazing powers of his were the result of
a pact with the stars rather than his status as Legate, it would pretty much
destroy his image amongst his followers.
So Vitiosus branded Sekashi a traitor and sent his own son to kill her
in order to prevent the truth from getting out.
Of course if all this is true then it still leaves a number
of questions. Does Vitiosus truly
believe that he is fighting for the good of zebrakind by waging an endless
war against Hoofington, or is this just a cover for a decided less than altruistic
agenda such as claiming the Tokmare’s power for his own?
**END SPOILERS**
Well, regardless of whether or not this crazy fan theory
turns out to be true, 54 was one heck of a chapter. Here’s hoping we won’t have to wait as long
for the next one!
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Welcome! Easiest way to learn formatting and stuff is to click the quote button over somebody else who did it; you'll see what they entered at the top of your reply box.chinman wrote:I'm new to this board (just registered today, wewt!) so I
unfortunately don't know how to mark things as spoilers yet, which is a
problem considering this post will include at least a few potential spoilers.
So with that in mind I'll try to make it clear before I start that there will
be spoilers in this post. With that in mind...
- Spoiler:
- you spoiler box things like this
- title text:
- or like this
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First and foremost, glad to have you on the site!
Secondly, the Spoiler thing is labeled under "Others". Just highlight the text you want to cover, hit "other" and then click "Spoiler".
Got to say, that's a heck of a first post. I'm hesitant to agree with all of it, but it makes a scary amount of sense.
It also brought back to mind something that crossed mine while reading the chapter last night.
Secondly, the Spoiler thing is labeled under "Others". Just highlight the text you want to cover, hit "other" and then click "Spoiler".
Got to say, that's a heck of a first post. I'm hesitant to agree with all of it, but it makes a scary amount of sense.
It also brought back to mind something that crossed mine while reading the chapter last night.
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- Talismans like the phoenix and the ones that grant batwings are Zebra items that ponies later adapted to use though capturing them and study, plus the Black Book. That's probably why the fact he survived the fight doesn't bother me so much. To make one that powerful must take a lot of time and resources to create so there's probably only one the zebras have. It also goes with why they was after the Phoenix talisman. Oh yeah they said it was to prevent Blackjack from getting it, but it would also mean they would then have two powerful, life prolonging, regenerative talisman without having to go through the process of making another one
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WovenTales wrote:
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I don't see it so much as forcing a particular sexual orientation as it is pushing a particular view of sexual orientation, and the Enclave is just a bit more aware of it than we are. After all, just about anything here that's not being made to bring the issue to the foreground describes the ideal couple as heterosexual and monogamous. The greater visibility might be to try to override the seeming estrus push toward finding a stallion over more normal preferences (which is itself interesting), but it sounds like it's more awareness than reprogramming.
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- Fair enough.
To clarify, I'm not angry or anything. It's just that the implications of some of the way sexuality is handled in PH occasionally get my teeth on edge.
WovenTales wrote:
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They're both focused on different groups. Kkat's history was focused around the Ministry Mares, while Somber uses the Marauders. Since the group is never really fleshed out in FoE, the characters are definitely Somber's, and since a lot of their scenes were offscreen and lacking detail, seeing them firsthand does make it feel more like Somber's making them her own than is actually happening.
I do agree that the Marauders' interactions with the Ministries, and especially Goldenblood's machinations, get much closer to taking the original over, but I still think this is a better idea than holding everything sacred. Not touching the Mares at all is obviously impossible if we want to see anything of consequence from the war, and leaving the organization as it was would mean even more meddling with the past to use the Mane Six in a way that doesn't feel tired. Sure, having Goldenblood mastermind most of the grand plans is quite a different feel than we got in FoE, but I'd rather have that than force Somber to work according to a very strict blueprint, with very little left to explore.
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- I'll agree with that last bit. Just retreading ground that Kkat already covered wouldn't make for a very interesting story. But one of the great things about the original was that the Mane Six had a hoof in destroying the world. Their actions had consequence. Weight. What they did helped to bring about the apocalypse, and they weren't grand scheming masterminds. Just ponies that got in too deep over their heads and couldn't see a way out. Goldenblood sometimes feels like a... what's the word for a reverse Mary Sue? He's somehow able to do all of these clever, dastardly things behind the scenes without the Mane Six ever noticing.
Of course, lately we've been getting hints that, no, he wasn't quite as in control of everything as it might seem, so there's that.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
chinman wrote:~snop~
Okay, I like the way you think. And it does make an awful lot of sense. So, first theory is that he is the legendary Eternal Warrior, once cast out and reviled for the destruction he brought, the tribes he destroyed, and his dealings with the Stars. Perhaps, in the last days of the war, Caesar was desperate enough to offer the terrible pariah forgiveness if he served faithfully. And who better to lead the assault against Hoofington, the cursed city of legend from which untold horrors arise and against which untold legions have broken, than the cursed warrior who cannot be defeated? And it certainly explains why Caesar's last order has been kept so faithfully in the long years since the apocalypse; what's two hundred years of death and destruction to one who'd suffered worse for thousands, especially compared to the man who gave his life back?
But in the legend, didn't he have red stripes?
And those books Sekashi studied, the ones so forbidden that she was cast out and hunted for having read them, the ones which allowed her to strike her own terrible bargain with the stars, minor as it may be in comparison to those in the legends? Whose were those exactly?
The ponies managed to create Rampage, a shadow of the Eternal Warrior, in a few short years of fumbling in the dark. What could be accomplished by someone who had access to tomes like the Black Book for years, and who already understood the basis of alchemy and talismans which they had been built on?
Perhaps the Eternal Warrior really is just a legend. Perhaps he went elsewhere long ago, or stayed out of the war. But when the Nightmare rules the nation of your enemies, when they stand poised to twist themselves into reflections of her power, when their terrible spells have the potential to wipe out all zebra life, forging a new legend is almost mandatory, and the price the Stars ask seems so little...
Goldenblood is clever, yes, but we've seen him defeated more often than not, and he was hardly the only one doing monstrous things in the shadows of the Ministries. He was barely directly involved in half of what went on back then, and half of that he was opposing.Quotidian wrote:
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I'll agree with that last bit. Just retreading ground that Kkat already covered wouldn't make for a very interesting story. But one of the great things about the original was that the Mane Six had a hoof in destroying the world. Their actions had consequence. Weight. What they did helped to bring about the apocalypse, and they weren't grand scheming masterminds. Just ponies that got in too deep over their heads and couldn't see a way out. Goldenblood sometimes feels like a... what's the word for a reverse Mary Sue? He's somehow able to do all of these clever, dastardly things behind the scenes without the Mane Six ever noticing.
Of course, lately we've been getting hints that, no, he wasn't quite as in control of everything as it might seem, so there's that.
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Yup that theory isn't without its problems. Probably one of the things I like the most about Somber's work is that you can't always predict where the plot will go. Sometimes the direction the plot takes is heavily telegraphed from the get go, and sometimes it comes screaming out of the left field. Definitely keeps you on your toes.
On another note, wow this board does not like it when you cut and paste onto it. That first post got pretty badly mangled.
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- As an aside it is possible Vitiosus could be dying his coat, but then on the other hand, it does seem equally likely that he's gaining his powers from other sources, such as the a fore-mentioned super talismans. Suppose time will tell.
On another note, wow this board does not like it when you cut and paste onto it. That first post got pretty badly mangled.
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- Chapter 54:
So, my only comment is on the Legate, who is the biggest badass in all of FoE.
Did anyone else instantly think "Holy shit he's pony Mercer"? Because I did.
So I naturally listened to this during the fight.
Now I really want to see their final confrontation...that will be amazing.
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The best part of how badass he was is how badass BJ will apparently have to be when they meet again.
I think I just mildly confused myself with that sentence.
I think I just mildly confused myself with that sentence.
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welcome to the forums , pick one to be your gift if you plan on sticking around: a shotgun, a bottle of whisky, or infinite sanity (I choose sanity, not worth it, should've gone with the shotgun)chinman wrote:Yup that theory isn't without its problems. Probably one of the things I like the most about Somber's work is that you can't always predict where the plot will go. Sometimes the direction the plot takes is heavily telegraphed from the get go, and sometimes it comes screaming out of the left field. Definitely keeps you on your toes.
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As an aside it is possible Vitiosus could be dying his coat, but then on the other hand, it does seem equally likely that he's gaining his powers from other sources, such as the a fore-mentioned super talismans. Suppose time will tell.
On another note, wow this board does not like it when you cut and paste onto it. That first post got pretty badly mangled.
please time all breakdowns to not coincide with anyone else's or the release of a new chapter, though with the creation of the chat thread, the second one doesn't matter as much anymore
also I'd recommend getting an avatar to tell yourself apart from the few other people who don't
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A small part in Chapter 45 was discovered to no longer fit with the desired version of events and has therefore been altered. The altered section is duplicated below to save the reader the trouble of accessing the chapter. Apologies for any formatting problems.
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- “Everything. Everything that could go wrong went wrong. Applesnack and Big Macintosh had been fighting about everything. Big Macintosh refusing to reenlist for a sixth tour. Applesnack’s zebra bigotry bullshit. The weather was crap, and Jetstream was doing more cloud management than keeping an eye out for trouble. Celestia was there. The zebra envoys were there. They had three times as many guards as we’d agreed. Goldenblood warned us to be on high alert for the zebras attempting to kill Celestia; everything was a mess in the 'backchannels', and he had no idea what they were thinking. But the negotiations started. I was out in the field with the Proditors; they could sniff out a mistcloak like nopony could.”
She rose on her hooves and turned to face the grimy, flickering windows. “The talks seemed to be going well at first, but pretty soon there was a sticking point. Something about reparations… I don’t know what. Then suddenly some sort of gas bomb went off in the diplomatic dent, and a bunch of zebra soldiers came out of a hidden tunnel right next to it. Everything went nuts after that.” She closed her eyes, lifting her head. “Applesnack was screaming. Chaos. Big Macintosh stood over Celestia, fending off wave after wave of attacks. Goldenblood was yelling for Celestia to get out of there, but we were all busy fighting. Zebras all over the place. Third Battalion, supposed to be guarding the southeast, wasn't responding; we found out later that a bunch of them were traitors. Finally the Shadowbolts blasted in, the zebras got routed… and Big Macintosh was dead. Bullet through the heart, right at the end.” She hung her head and sniffed, tears rolling down her cheeks. “There wasn’t anything anypony could do. And Psalm… I never saw her after that day except for one time when she was packing up her gear at Miramare. Didn’t say a word. Just… left.”
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- Oh, and Psalm's bullets in 54 have been changed to be armor-penetrating.
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- crazy theory time:
- I think I have a pretty good idea what Project Horizons MIGHT do. From recent flashbacks and key scenes, we've learned that moonstone reacts violently against starmetal, destroying the starmetal and releasing a huge amount of energy.
From what Goldenblood was asking Dr. Horse a chapter or two ago, it's looking more and more like Project Horizons is just a fancy way of saying that they were going to drop the Moon on the EoS in the Core. But as also stated in that scene, such a reaction would not only destroy the EoS, but also decimate the World, quite possibly shattering it.
This seemed like a horrible idea, until I remembered that Flash Industries had unveiled that personal shield tech that was capable of sustaining itself, even after the emitter was disabled, as long as the attacks kept feeding it energy.
So my theory is that Project Horizons shoots the moon, or a sizable chunk of it, into the Core, and then, before the explosion happens, a ramped up version of the FI shield goes up and completely surrounds the core in a sphere of energy. The shield keeps the explosion contained, and the explosion keeps the shield powered. The process goes like that until the energy is spent and all that's left of the core is a large, perfectly circular crater in the ground that quickly gets filled up by sea water while the rest of the world remained untouched.
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Re-enlist, maybe?O. Hinds wrote:
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“Everything. Everything that could go wrong went wrong. Applesnack and Big Macintosh had been fighting about everything. Big Macintosh refusing to reenlist for a sixth tour. Applesnack’s zebra bigotry bullshit. The weather was crap, and Jetstream was doing more cloud management than keeping an eye out for trouble. Celestia was there. The zebra envoys were there. They had three times as many guards as we’d agreed. Goldenblood warned us to be on high alert for the zebras attempting to kill Celestia; everything was a mess in the 'backchannels', and he had no idea what they were thinking. But the negotiations started. I was out in the field with the Proditors; they could sniff out a mistcloak like nopony could.”
She rose on her hooves and turned to face the grimy, flickering windows. “The talks seemed to be going well at first, but pretty soon there was a sticking point. Something about reparations… I don’t know what. Then suddenly some sort of gas bomb went off in the diplomatic dent, and a bunch of zebra soldiers came out of a hidden tunnel right next to it. Everything went nuts after that.” She closed her eyes, lifting her head. “Applesnack was screaming. Chaos. Big Macintosh stood over Celestia, fending off wave after wave of attacks. Goldenblood was yelling for Celestia to get out of there, but we were all busy fighting. Zebras all over the place. Third Battalion, supposed to be guarding the southeast, wasn't responding; we found out later that a bunch of them were traitors. Finally the Shadowbolts blasted in, the zebras got routed… and Big Macintosh was dead. Bullet through the heart, right at the end.” She hung her head and sniffed, tears rolling down her cheeks. “There wasn’t anything anypony could do. And Psalm… I never saw her after that day except for one time when she was packing up her gear at Miramare. Didn’t say a word. Just… left.”
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Plausible. Larger scale than anything ever built before in the Hoof though; just getting the tokomare running in the first place was a monumental undertaking. Unless... what was the time scale on Project Horizons? Because the Core has been putting out constant power, and there are tunnels all over the Hoof with little or no interference, and those industrial sprite bot construction things (can't remember the name right now) could keep building without live input as long as they had a good computer and a steady power supply... that count-up that was approaching ten million, was there anything there indicating it wasn't feedback from an almost-complete network of shield generators?jacky2734 wrote:What do you think?
- crazy theory time:
I think I have a pretty good idea what Project Horizons MIGHT do. From recent flashbacks and key scenes, we've learned that moonstone reacts violently against starmetal, destroying the starmetal and releasing a huge amount of energy.
From what Goldenblood was asking Dr. Horse a chapter or two ago, it's looking more and more like Project Horizons is just a fancy way of saying that they were going to drop the Moon on the EoS in the Core. But as also stated in that scene, such a reaction would not only destroy the EoS, but also decimate the World, quite possibly shattering it.
This seemed like a horrible idea, until I remembered that Flash Industries had unveiled that personal shield tech that was capable of sustaining itself, even after the emitter was disabled, as long as the attacks kept feeding it energy.
So my theory is that Project Horizons shoots the moon, or a sizable chunk of it, into the Core, and then, before the explosion happens, a ramped up version of the FI shield goes up and completely surrounds the core in a sphere of energy. The shield keeps the explosion contained, and the explosion keeps the shield powered. The process goes like that until the energy is spent and all that's left of the core is a large, perfectly circular crater in the ground that quickly gets filled up by sea water while the rest of the world remained untouched.
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My dictionary says that "reenlist" is correct, but thanks for pointing out the diplomatic dent. This was composed in a bit of a hurry.Ketchup wrote:Re-enlist, maybe?O. Hinds wrote:
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“Everything. Everything that could go wrong went wrong. Applesnack and Big Macintosh had been fighting about everything. Big Macintosh refusing to reenlist for a sixth tour. Applesnack’s zebra bigotry bullshit. The weather was crap, and Jetstream was doing more cloud management than keeping an eye out for trouble. Celestia was there. The zebra envoys were there. They had three times as many guards as we’d agreed. Goldenblood warned us to be on high alert for the zebras attempting to kill Celestia; everything was a mess in the 'backchannels', and he had no idea what they were thinking. But the negotiations started. I was out in the field with the Proditors; they could sniff out a mistcloak like nopony could.”
She rose on her hooves and turned to face the grimy, flickering windows. “The talks seemed to be going well at first, but pretty soon there was a sticking point. Something about reparations… I don’t know what. Then suddenly some sort of gas bomb went off in the diplomatic dent, and a bunch of zebra soldiers came out of a hidden tunnel right next to it. Everything went nuts after that.” She closed her eyes, lifting her head. “Applesnack was screaming. Chaos. Big Macintosh stood over Celestia, fending off wave after wave of attacks. Goldenblood was yelling for Celestia to get out of there, but we were all busy fighting. Zebras all over the place. Third Battalion, supposed to be guarding the southeast, wasn't responding; we found out later that a bunch of them were traitors. Finally the Shadowbolts blasted in, the zebras got routed… and Big Macintosh was dead. Bullet through the heart, right at the end.” She hung her head and sniffed, tears rolling down her cheeks. “There wasn’t anything anypony could do. And Psalm… I never saw her after that day except for one time when she was packing up her gear at Miramare. Didn’t say a word. Just… left.”
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Hah! Looks like Blackjack finally caught on about Psalm. I was rereading some of the earlier chapters Saturday night and saw a couple of references that really made this chapter for me: As she's reading a log at the weapons manufacturer Blackjack finds that a "GB" is contrabanding Dragonkiller rounds from Trottenheimer. (as soon as I noticed this I thought to myself "Huh, weren't those the things that were used to attempt to assasinate Celestia? Isn't Psalm Goldenblood's assasin? Isn't she always seeking atonement for some terrible thing?... Ohhhhh, I see!") I guess we see them finally used here. Talk about a Chekkov's gun! Also, before getting the Applejack bobblehead Blackjack reads a journal entry from Hoss, in which discovered Psalm "a black mare [who] snuck in the barn".
Man, Hoss was really awesome in retrospect. You guys remember Hoss, the unburied skeleton from way back in Chapter 2? He directed Marigold's foal, Blackjack's Ancestor, to a nearby stable so that she could survive the megaspells. His final wish provided a moment for Blackjack to do something for others. He would also have offered Psalm a place to belong (while unknowing of the fact that she'd killed his grandson, but I suspect he would have done it anyway), had she stayed around to accept it.
He was just a minor character from way back in the second chapter, but his actions made Blackajack's very existance possible, and have given her strength from her from the beginning of her journey.
Very few simple throwaway characters, especially early on. There is so much foreshadowing in the early chapters that it would make your heads explode. I love this story.
I wonder if Psalm knows she's in the head of the great-great-great grandfoal of the stallion she murdered?
Man, Hoss was really awesome in retrospect. You guys remember Hoss, the unburied skeleton from way back in Chapter 2? He directed Marigold's foal, Blackjack's Ancestor, to a nearby stable so that she could survive the megaspells. His final wish provided a moment for Blackjack to do something for others. He would also have offered Psalm a place to belong (while unknowing of the fact that she'd killed his grandson, but I suspect he would have done it anyway), had she stayed around to accept it.
He was just a minor character from way back in the second chapter, but his actions made Blackajack's very existance possible, and have given her strength from her from the beginning of her journey.
Very few simple throwaway characters, especially early on. There is so much foreshadowing in the early chapters that it would make your heads explode. I love this story.
I wonder if Psalm knows she's in the head of the great-great-great grandfoal of the stallion she murdered?
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So, question. A stupid question, but a question all the same.
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- Was I the only one who hated the legate?
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Kippershy wrote:Icy Shake wrote:O. Hinds wrote:
Ah, thank you. I've not capitalized "moon", though; "Moon" would be appropriate only in the particular case where a culture uses that as the name, while "moon" is generally correct.
I didn't even notice the first instance in the sentence; I was just referring to the second one, which was part of "Nightmare Moon"--I think the broken formatting didn't help there, so I'm sorry about that again.
- Re Kippershy:
I get where you are coming from regarding the final fight. I really do, and I'm not the largest fan of the over-the-top-ness in it. But I understand why it's there. It could have been toned down (say, without the tank round part, or the failed decapitation [on that note, based on my reading I wonder if he's had soul magic of some sort performed on him]), but at this point the power creep has been so substantial that mere action-movie level feats seem like they should be a challenge for Blackjack, and a very real threat to one or more of her friends, but not on a level where it really seems likely she would get her ass handed to her.
On the other hand, I disagree on the Fellowship reference; I felt that it actually seemed very appropriate (the sentiment, certainly, even if it could have been expressed with other words), and that the application to a situation with so many details different added something for me. But I figure that's just another matter of preference.
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Glad I'm not the only one who thought it was a bit OTT.
If it hadn't been for the tank shell and failed decapitation, it wouldn't have been half as bad. Controlling the elements irks me a lot, but I'd be able to let that slide if it was the only thing.
His armour being tough as all fuck and him in general being tough as all fuck would be acceptable.
If he had dodged the 50cal HMG rounds instead of taken them like a pro, it would have been acceptable.
If he was simply extremely strong, resilient, fast and capable of keeping it all going, I could have loved the fight.
Instead, we get an opponent who throws every god damn logical rule out of the fucking train window as you're going 200km/h and says FUCK YOU to Blackjack in an attempt to be an opponent worth her time.
Somber could have handled him a lot better, a hell of a lot better. Instead, he activated godmode cheats and basically made Rampage 2.0
I know she has to deal with an opponent tougher than her and I want her to, but this felt cheap.
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- I feel that i need to rebut you statements about the OTT aspect of the fight a bit. First off, yes it seems Anime-ish, but that's only because anime is really the only thing in today's media that portrays scenes such as this, what with catching tank shells and magic flying around. Secondly, you have to remember that handwaving things with the excuse of "It's magic, i don't have to explain it" is valid.
The tank shell thing, could easily be explained with enchantments on his obviously enchanted armor, and zebras being masters of talismans and essentially solid spells, would have no problem crafting such things. The armor itself, dragonbone, which we can assume by the property of it being from a dragon, is some of the toughest naturally occurring stuff in Equestria. So that covers the "toughness" aspect, now lets go on to the regeneration. Regen and healing talismans are big-time magic, needless to say, but he's one of the top generals, the Caesar's right hoof zebra, and he is made for fighting, so it's logical they would buff him up as much as possible. His job is to win, but more than that, to be an unstoppable dynamo of destruction on the battlefield. The regeneration magic, possible even the original eternal warrior talisman, might be responsible for this.
Lastly the whole commanding the elements thing: Zebra magic has never really seemed to be about abstracts the way almost all pony magic has seemed to be (to me). They work with natural things to form their spells, and the elemental control thing again doesn't seem too far outside of sci-fi/magitech sense to me. So he can call lightning down, okay, so could practically every pegasus, so why can't the zebra? He can basically earthbend, okay we've seen wierder. Would he really have been a worthy opponent for BJ and all of her buddies without this? NOPE!
he might have been worthy of just BJ, if all he had was the staff, his armor, and his regeneration(maybe even toned down), but we must remember, blackjack does have the "i can cut through anything" sword, so armor doesn't mean diddly, and as she pointed out at the start of the fight, she had a friggin tank! even with just rampage's level regen power, that's gonna put you down for a while. Somber was accurately portraying him as one if not THE big bad, and so he had to be able to shrug off everything that the group could throw at him. That being said energy weaponry might have been another story (maybe), but if his role in this chapter was to be basically the juggernaut, then his runes probably included the disintegration ward spell, or something like it.
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On a personal level? He's a dogmatic, murderous, assholish zealot responsible for untold suffering not only from his enemies but from his own followers, and every word he said made me loathe him a little more.Kippershy wrote:So, question. A stupid question, but a question all the same.
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Was I the only one who hated the legate?
As a villain? He's interesting, powerful enough to be a huge threat even in person and at the current power level without having some stupid 'I win' button.
As a story element? He's got an interesting and mysterious background, and his mere presence shakes things up in a big way even if he weren't acting directly against Blackjack and co.
But I get the impression that you're asking less about him and more about his big fight scene. To which I will say that you're probably not the only one to hate it, but you seem to be in the minority this time around. My own thoughts were split pretty evenly between 'holy shit,' 'are you fucking kidding me,' 'that was awesome,' and 'how did he pull that one off, and how would one replicate these results?'
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- Review, or at least the start of said.:
-Well, I've got a splitting headache and can feel my heartbeat in my extremities, so this may not be the full review. Did finally read the chapter, though; had to do... let's see, an essay, a short fiction piece, and a couple of problems about algorithmic complexity (simpler than it sounds), and classes must invariably come first. Oogh, also nauseous and mildly dizzy now. Fun. Anyway, reviewtime! I've read most of the other reviews already, so this may talk to them, in an "academic paper" sort of way.
-One thing: about the "anime" nature of the final fight, I actually got a VERY distinct Warhammer 40k impression. Between the pseudomagic weapon, the "empowered by Caesar" stuff, and the big talk, well... Imperium of Zebra. Oh, and I've no doubt that the whole "empowered" thing is not actually him being empowered by the dead Caesar. Don't trust the bad guy when he says he's unkillable and powered by a dead God-King; it's either to impress the underlings and you, or he's bought into his own hype. It'd be like Blackjack going around saying, "Raa, I'm the Star Maiden, incur my wrath at your own peril! Watch me explode this head with my mind! Shapow! Starpowers, biatch!" Which she might do, honestly, but only while drunk.
-Okay, friggin' ow. This must be what people with hangovers feel like. I no longer find that scene with Scotch Tape waking up Blackjack after a night of merriment so funny. It's still funny, but not as much. Ow. Can't even describe what it feels like: a wire of pulsing, razor-edged pressure threaded from the base of my skull on up to the crown, and then curving down to my right eye.
-Let's see, overall thoughts. I liked it, yeah. It was very entertaining on first readthrough, which is always a good sign. Some bits weren't my favorite, but even White Tomb has a few parts I don't love. Despite the headache, I was engrossed by the material, and liked that you (through the characters) seemed to consciously be chipping away at some of Blackjack's self-damaging thought processes. It was handled very well, and realistically, from my experience. The fight with the hellhounds rocked, I caught some eenteresting plot during the "let's find the redundancy" bit that I am in no condition to poke at, and the final fight was... fine, as far as I responded to it. I ultimately dislike most anime as much as Kipper, I think (though my beefs with it may be different), but, like I said, my brain hitched onto the WH40k train, and I'm a bit more amenable to that brand of silliness. =P I think that some of it seemed a bit much, and am not certain that the story really needs single opponents that can pose as huge a challenge to Blackjack in combat as Deus and Steel Rain once did anymore, but I'm not writing it - I'm not privy to the master plans, in which I continue to trust. Notably, if I was writing it, there'd not be a focus on combat in the first place because I generally don't enjoy writing fight scenes all that much =P so whatevs.
-Ow yeah I'm gonna... sleep or write. Probably sleep. More reviewing later!
EDIT: LOL troll groundskeeping trucks immediately start idling outside my window, screwing around with sand stashes underneath my room the second I finally decide to get some sleep. HA. HA. WHY DON'T I HAVE ANY IBUPROFEN?!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Kippershy wrote:So, question. A stupid question, but a question all the same.
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Was I the only one who hated the legate?
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- Nope. But I would call it a "strong dislike" and not hate. But I have to say, that I felt similar at the introduction of Rampage. The tank-shell scene is imo to much over the top, and the top is very high at this point. Evading the shell should have been enough I think.
The legate is stronger than superman, but I'm sure BJ will find some kind of Kryptonite (maybe Penance with dragonkiller rounds to crack that armor).wikipedia wrote:As originally conceived and presented in his early stories, Superman's
powers were relatively limited, consisting of superhuman strength that
allowed him to lift a car over his head, run at amazing speeds and leap
one-eighth of a mile, as well as an incredibly dense body structure that
could be pierced by nothing less than an exploding artillery shell.
And could we please stop putting everything regarding chapter 54 in spoiler tags? Everpony who visits this thread should have read the chapter by now (I stopped reading this thread the moment the new chapter was announced).
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