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Sindri wrote:aye
guarddogjr wrote:aye
Moodyman90 wrote:Aye
Aonee wrote:Aye!
Elexius wrote:Aye!
TheLastDefender wrote:Aye.
Nightmare Moon wrote:AYE!!!Meleagridis wrote:
Everyone in favour of a Sekashi fan club, say "Aye."
Sekashi, laughing at one of her stories -Mechstation
(can't snip a Majina that cute)
It's agreed, then! Majina never to be snipped. Also, a fan club it is. Third order of business is more fanart. Second is spreading funny stories.
Smiled so hard at all the reaction, I think I broke my face
...What would our first order of business be?
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Restoring Sekas's hearing?
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I don't know, sorry. We're finally making good progress, but we've still got work to do and Somber's mother has been interfering a lot tonight.SyctoHarmony wrote:Hinds, can we expect to see the chapter in the next, say, hour?
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Aye, but Boo and Stronghoof are best-er imo
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Aye - Sekashi fanclub is a fine idea. I actually still need to draw her (in the 5th spot on my to-draw list)Meleagridis wrote:Everyone in favour of a Sekashi fan club, say "Aye."
Sekashi, laughing at one of her stories -MechstationCan't properly express how much I like this (Bottlecap is an awesome character). Can I make that my signature?WavemasterRyx wrote:Cake will save the wasteland!
And of course, feel free, to use it if you'd like.
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similar to Twilight. Close second Fluttershy. The rest are miniscule in
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Meleagridis wrote:
It's agreed, then! Majina never to be snipped. Also, a fan club it is. Third order of business is more fanart. Second is spreading funny stories.
Smiled so hard at all the reaction, I think I broke my face
...What would our first order of business be?
Here, a Sekashi story.
Have you heard her tale of how Ananzi was turned into a spider?
as I recall her saying,
Ananzi was a young zebra stallion who amused God because he was quite resourceful and could wiggle out of problems in unexpected ways. He became God's favorite and because of this became quite boastful.
One day he was swaggering through the forest and caught eye of a ram. He kicked a rock at it and killed it. He realized that this was God's prized ram and knew that God would not forgive him. He looked for someone to blame and got an idea. He tied up the ram and hid it in a tree.
Ananzi then found a spider and directed it to the tree, telling it that the tree was plentiful fruit and he was willing to share if the spider would help him knock them down. When Ananzi and the spider started shaking the tree the ram fell out. Ananzi started screaming and yelling saying the spider had killed god's ram. the spider was so confused he could not say a word.
So Ananzi ran to God and told him that the spider had killed his prized ram, tied it up in the ropes it spun and hid it in the tree. At first God was very angry at the spider, but then God's wife asked him how the small spider could have killed and gotten the much larger ram into the tree. God realized that Ananzi was tricking him and grew furious with Ananzi. God pushed Ananzi back down to earth. Ananzi fell so hard that he broke into many pieces and became a spider.
Ananzi did not learn his lesson for he continued playing tricks on unsuspecting zebras until a young filly got the better of him, but that is another story.
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I keep getting high Rainbow Dash on that quiz... when I'm more of a Rarity. Still, I was high in everypony except Twilight and Fluttershy.
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Will we be seeing a new chapter tonight? Sweetie Belle
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I don't even remember what this is referring to. Was it one of the gangs in the Arena?O. Hinds wrote:Somber's back early and we are brushing now!
In related news, we have removed "a dozen pegasi and earth ponies around a banner of a yellow satellite dish on a black field. All of them wore the dashite brand, even the earth ponies. I wondered if Psychoshy was originally from them." from Chapter 25.
"Sekashi's Storytime". Aye!Meleagridis wrote:Everyone in favour of a Sekashi fan club, say "Aye."
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PHCC, it is my pleasure to announce to you that Chapter 44 is at long last live!
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What about captain Thrush story time? I wanna hear her drunken river tales.SilentCarto wrote:
"Sekashi's Storytime". Aye!
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And now the thread dies for about 2 hours, and then explodes in a burst of light and kills the entire site in the fallout.
I'm ready
I'm ready
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O. Hinds wrote:PHCC, it is my pleasure to announce to you that Chapter 44 is at long last live!
YESSS! *hugs*
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Yes.SilentCarto wrote:
I don't even remember what this is referring to. Was it one of the gangs in the Arena?
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...O. Hinds wrote:PHCC, it is my pleasure to announce to you that Chapter 44 is at long last live!
...
shit.
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Welp, this is gonna be fun haha.
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Tomorrow, the epicness retrieving process of reading PH shall commence.
I plan on sleeping tonight before a 4-day weekend.
I plan on sleeping tonight before a 4-day weekend.
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I'm glad you guys were able to get it finished Hinds - my sincere thanks to you, Bronode, Snipehamster, and Somber for all your hard work. *hugs you all*
I really wish I could read it tonight... *sighs*
I really wish I could read it tonight... *sighs*
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So much for productivity! Time to break out the metal and the coffee.
(Thanks for making the time to get this one out to us, editors and author!)
(Thanks for making the time to get this one out to us, editors and author!)
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Am I the first one to actually have made a post after having read the new chapter?
I guess I'll keep it spoiler-free. Nah, screw it.
I guess I'll keep it spoiler-free. Nah, screw it.
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- Blackjack managed to fall asleep! Yay! And even more, she had a good dream. That's gotta mean something big. Also, glad to see she's getting over the Seahorse, but I still get the feeling like there's gonna be hell to pay when Glory finds out... Either way, looking forward to that.
Also, how the heck did Steel Rain get through the shield? Did BJ forget to close it or something?
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So, I just read the chapter and felt the irresistible compulsion to comment.
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- When Glory finds out about Black Jack and Stygius it's gonna be ugly, and didn't Black Jack already get her implant removed? Oh man, I think I see where this is going. It looks like it's going to hurt. A lot. Poor Glory.
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Freaking.... Somber, I know that some people are ridiculously impatient, but if it took an entire month for a chapter of PH to come out, I would be completely fine with it. Every chapter is literally novella length. The only reason to complete chapters so fast is basically because, sometimes, you can.
In other words, you're both extremely capable and absolutely insane.
In other words, you're both extremely capable and absolutely insane.
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another great chapter(arent they all?). I was so happy for blackjack to *ahem* gain control of herself, i literally started clapping. i like happy blackjack. Also Stygius is now on an equal level with Boo(aka they are the greatest things since sliced bread).
Good job Somber, good job
νυχτερίδ πόνυ = bat pony in greek
Good job Somber, good job
νυχτερίδ πόνυ = bat pony in greek
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One small note: unless you're confirming it (in which case yay, thank you!), that translation is only as accurate as some fiddling around with Google Translate and the Greek Wikipedia could make it. Accuracy is not guaranteed.NoodleNugget wrote:another great chapter(arent they all?). I was so happy for blackjack to *ahem* gain control of herself, i literally started clapping. i like happy blackjack. Also Stygius is now on an equal level with Boo(aka they are the greatest things since sliced bread).
Good job Somber, good job
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Fuck yeah, chapter 44. Time to show this fourm what real posting looks like.
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- "Mares and Stallions" The ingredients required to make even more mares and stallions. It is a complex cycle.
"Red Eye's slave empire might be able to do it, but then the old horrors would just be replaced by new ones." Red Eye was working for a utopia, built on the backs of broken slaves. Ubjugate the common mare, for the good of all. Sounds kinda familiar to me. Personally I think that Red Eye had the best plan, then Pip and her crazy dreams of GOE activating had to come and fuck everything up for everyone! Sure, it worked out for now, but how long will this peace last? Ponies are still a destructive race, and have all the leftover weapons to prove it. But if Mr. Evil Meteor is dead/gone/exploded/Blackjack'd, will that all change? Will ponies become a peaceful and nonviolent race? Or will they pull a Final Fantasy 6 and slowly erase all magic from the land? Ooh, I love choices.
"No wonder I’d taxed Happyhorn’s therapy machines to their absolute limit." When a machine that was built to fix minds says that your mind is fucking scary and unfixable, that's pretty bad. I mean, damn girl, you need to take a few chill pills. Or if you don't have those try a chill strip. You put it on your tounge, it dissolves, ya chill. Tia knows everypony in the wasteland could use a couple thousand.
"And I’d killed an innocent filly." Which time? The first, or how about the second? What about all of them in 99? Maybe the brotherhood had fillies in the battleship, you can't know that. And I'm pretty sure that fertility implant has stopped a few fillies from existing, if you want to get political. Or is this about the pink one? Eh, pink ones generally shouldn't survive anyway. Too colorful, no good as camoflauge. Let natural selection sort em out, right? But no, you gotta be fuckin MORAL. Ugh.
"But two weeks ago, when I faced the Reapers in Megamart, I hadn’t tried to tear them apart like I had the Thunderhead pegasi in Yellow River." I retract my previous statement about morality. Because that was some fucked up shit. Bloody hell BJ, I can understand the whole murder and steal their souls with a space sword part, but chopping off a wing and leaving for dead? Now that is fucked up. Death can be mercy too, don't forget that. Hopefully the playback of her shooting that mare in the legs and leaving to die jolted her out of that. Oh god, I think I'm developing feelings. Dammit Somber, what have I said about making me feel things? I don't like it. It makes fluid leak out of my eyeballs. That can't be healthy. You are killing me Somber.
"No. Even before that, when I’d pulled that stunt with LittlePip…" To be fair, that was pretty fucking awesome. See, it's different when we are dealing with awesome. Awesome is okay when no one (barring some ghouls and guards) die. And when you get Pip readdicted to mind altering drugs. And end up having a lesbian foursome. It just struck me that this is a very odd story. Technicolor equine foursomes in the middle of a 50s style post appocalyptic magical kingdom. What drugs conceived this?
"Big and black, but a rock." Big, black and hard, eh? Hehe, ladies... Why don't we make that foursome a fivesome?
"Was there anything more soothing and civilizing than enough hot water to submerge yourself in?" No. Those are the marks of civilization in my mind. That and grocery stores. If you don't have to go out and hunt/grow your food and can summon water of any temperature almost instantly, you are in the civilized world. Congrats.
"I’d have killed for a block of soap, but just cleaning myself off helped to keep me stable." Soap? They had soap in 99? Where did they get the components for it? ...Did they also have glue? Maybe the excess bodies weren't fed into the food processors right away.
"The ghoul scavenger in Brimstone’s Fall… Candlewick’s ass grab… was I even safe to be around males?" Yeah, one rape. Granted, it was a fairly traumatic and severe rape but it was only one. Think about P-21. He has been raped. Multiple times. You had it easy. You came back to life! With robo parts!
"Assertive: yes. Respected: would be nice. Berserk… no." Berserk gives you respect. How many people are going to disrespect a crazy cyberbitch? Not many, and shortly after that, none at all. Because they will be dead. Because you murdered them. Good job, I'm so proud! *sniff*
"I had to admit that, if I’d been given a choice, I’d have had my normal limbs back." Christ, this is kind of what pisses me off about most Lyra fics. Bitch wants hands, not magic. Goddamn, magic is fucking awesome. Who needs hands when you can just grab shit with telekinesis. I'd be happy with no spells, too. Pip demostrated the power and flexibility of telekinesis quite well. That blood blade spell is genius! Perhaps it could be modified in certain ways. Could you move around the blood in someones body? If so, it might be possible to hemorrhage part of their brain and kill them instantly. No mare should have that power. Hell knows I'd abuse the shit out of it. Now BJ has the best of both worlds and more. Not only are they super metal hands, but they also regenerate. While her magic isn't back to max power yet, it will be soon. Then she will be unstoppable. Like anything was stopping her now. Except those dirty morals.
"I still could feel pleasure; hell, it was the last remaining thing I had that was unquestionably organic." Define organic. Maybe they could install a pleasure chip in your brain that gives off pleasure chemicals. Would that still be organic? It would cause pleasure of some kind. Would certainly make fun time more interesting.
"If I were to get physical with a stallion, who would it be? P-21?" This mental image entertains me to no end. Just the sheer level of awkward/tenseness. Teehee, I love it.
"That curdled the buttery feelings churning in my nethers." Mm, more mental imagery. Good thing mind reading hasn't happened yet, otherwise some government agency would get really weird all of a sudden.
"Surely I should be hating myself one way or another right now?" Based on your previous mentalities and behaviors, this would be par for the course. But that is booooring. Just start lopping off heads and making a neckalace. No regets. Now that is interesting. Let's see how far down the ladder you can go.
"Vertical pupils cut through yellow irises, coming to points like a dragon’s." Cat eyes. Glowing cat eyes. Radcats. Dire Radcats. Oh boy.
"I’d never seen a monsterpony like this before" Alright, guessing game time, because I like drawing things out. Shadow Pony? Dragon pony? One of the many different pony types from Dwarf Fortress mods? Uh, some kinda taint/rad pony?
"Of course, that did nothing for the part of my mind that was screaming and making my nethers clench." First she goes crazy and now she becomes crazy horny. Is there no end to the surprises that lurk within Blackjack?
"I was just taking a bath with a… very… very… nice stallion." Is this happening? Are we going there? Somber, I had no idea. I mean, I had a small idea after the rape scene, but ya know.
"Sweet Celestia, was he… but I didn’t even know his name, not to mention species!" Oh, come on. It'll be an adventure! Kinda. Or a surprise. Like a surprise birthday party. You like surprises right? Actually, probably not after this last month + x weeks.
"No doubt I’d be angsting like crazy for this later, but for right now I just let it go." Hell, even if you weren't crazy you would still angst. 'I cheated on Glory, oh nooooo.' Feh. You cheated on her with Pip anyway.
"No, rutting was off the table and I’d smash him if he tried." Aww, lame. Blackjack is really high strung at the moment. The saying goes that you shouldn't stick your dick in crazy, but goddamn does BJ need to get laid. Badly.
"Stygius" Like the owl. Or the river. Or dark stuff. Interesting. Something tells me he will be important. Why else would you be building up a lot of characterization for him?
“You thought I was… I was too sexy to be dangerous?” Haha, this guy is fucking awesome. Look like a boss, kill some meat for you to devour and maybe fuck a few bitches on the way home. Seems like a full life, this guy has it made.
The batpony blinked, then wrote ‘Luna’s guards’. Pffff. I already knew that. I would've thought something more interesting. Perhaps a breed/race name. Unless Luna's Guards is the name of the race. Seems kinda lame. That would be like if we started calling ourselves the Alexandarians for Alexander the Great or something.
"Then he pointed betwixt my legs and tapped his stomach." Betwixt, look at Somber being all fancy with his synonyms. Better be careful, or you may start to develop sesquipedalian loquaciousness.
"He glanced at my posterior, then grinned and struck a noble pose." Yeah. Rampage just lost her spot as best PH pony. This guy is amazing.
"The lecture was accompanied by her pointing at me and then smacking him upside the head." Wifey. Ugh.
"He sighed, grabbed his chalk, and scribbled ‘Twin sister.’" Oh. Unless they are into that. Twins could probably do some freaky shit to eachother.
"Tenebra" Latin for darkness. Kinda. Something like that. Do they have latin in Equestria? Probably something close, after Twi named the Pinkus Pieicus. Or whatever. It's been over a year since I've seen any season 1 episodes, cut me some slack.
“Look… Stygius… I have issues. Balefire bomb-sized issues." Don't sell yourself short. This is at least Pink Cloud level on the scale of fucked-up-itude.
"Hell yes, roared part of my mind. Maybe not, murmured another part." Don't listen to the hell yes part, it is boring. And angry. I thought you didn't want to be super angry anymore? And just think, threesomes with him and Glory. Any time you want!
"Wait… I froze as I felt myself turning red as he looked at me with a smile that was way too cocky… erm… smug, for my liking." This might be the greatest chapter of PH yet. Bravo.
Intermission time, since it's like 4 AM. I hereby request that Wavemaster or someone else draw Stygius with a 'dat ass' face.
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Well, I "finished" this just in time for when I needed to get to bed to be ready for the stupid dentist visit tomorrow... Forgot fine-print stuff (probably) so I'll add that in tomorrow as soon as I can.
But I hope this is close to what you guys wanted for the propaganda poster, as I said, I don't really do propaganda...
http://wavemasterryx.tumblr.com/post/23219548005
But I hope this is close to what you guys wanted for the propaganda poster, as I said, I don't really do propaganda...
http://wavemasterryx.tumblr.com/post/23219548005
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Somber, you know how we keep saying that we don't mind that you take more time than you plan to get these things out? We mean it. If you can keep the schedule, good. If you need to push the release back, great! It just means that the chapter is that much better than it would otherwise have been. Likewise, don't worry about length; I said this before, but it only gets too long when you start forcing more than the story needs (and you have never once done so) or when you start burning out. This chapter may have been able to been told in less words, but it wouldn't be the Project Horizons we love, or the Somber we all, I believe, regard as one of the best writers within or beyond the fandom. Thank you for creating this...to call it a "story" would be doing it a disservice. This masterpiece.
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- Yeah, Glory's going to be furious. Looking at it from a 99 mentality there may be nothing wrong, but Blackjack (and P21, I guess, but the male mindset is a bit different) is the only one that has it. I would have thought that she'd have figured that out by now, but thinking back on it, I don't remember it coming up. She did need this chapter, though. The Seahorse is still going to haunt her, but she's learned that she's stronger than that particular specter. (And besides, Stygius is cute! Now he just needs to find something to shoot Blackjack with...)
On a lighter note, that dream really showed just how simply all this could have been avoided. (Yes, I am aware of the irony of a "lighter note" involving the attempted and partially successful massacre of a group of refugees.) We may never know what exactly happened at Littlehorn, but if any pony there had been like Blackjack, we would still be looking at sunshine and carefree foals. Might have been a bit difficult if the zebras had actually been attacking, and either way it's difficult to jump into what is cutting people up before your eyes, but it's still just a small trigger that sent the boat crashing over the waterfall, and Equestria wasn't quite as resilient as Blackjack.
Finally, "What I’d found was Goldenblood the pony." I began this story almost resenting his inclusion; the OIA wasn't something I understood the point of, and it messed with my view of the world. I have since come to see that it was a helpful, if not completely perfect, addition, though I still felt that Goldenblood was breaking my suspension of disbelief slightly too much. This chapter has reversed all that. He's still not one of my favorite characters—I can't forget everything he's done—but he's just another casualty of war, just a few years ahead of his time. He's as much of the history of the wasteland as the ministries (well, more so than the MOA) were.
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Alright just finished the chapter. I'll just put my thoughts behind a spoiler tag.
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- I'm a little upset with what Bj did, But I guess it is better that she is able to control it then kill every male that so much as looks at her wrong. Still I feel really bad for Glory and I really really hope that this doesn't ruin their relationship. Blackjack is going to have to do some serious explaining and apologizing to Glory and hope that everything is going to be okay.Now that I got that out of the way I'm glad that you did put that scene in. Because it was great to see that Blackjack is able to conquer her in demons and(at least to me) she was able to reassure her self that she is truly in love with Glory. Now that that's out of the way on to the rest of my thoughts on the chapter.
First off I love Stygius, he is very sweet, if not a little creeperish but sweet nonetheless, Plus him being a descendant of the the Lunar Guard just makes him awesome by default. I really like your take on what the Lunar Guard really was a, badass group of batponies. and I like how you had the two different stories for the origin of the batponies(but I've always been a sucker for the origins of mythological creatures and just history in general so I may have a bit of a biases.)
Next up, Golden Blood's house, That would explain how the dealer knew where a place Bj could sleep was. What I'm wondering is did the M.o.M. has access to Chronomancy? I can how that would be perfect for preserving a top priority crime scene such as GB's house. but that still unsettles me at how much power Pinkie had at her hooves.
Bj finally got some sleep and no nightmares this time. Thank Luna she was able to get some deserved sleep! This is a shot in dark here but, I'm going to assume that Blackjack was taking Psalm's place during the dream/memory.
Your take on how NMM came to be is simply incredible! Awesome that moonrocks seem to be indestructible and can destroy starmetal.
So that's how GB hurt Fluttershy by saying some other mare's name during his climax. It makes a lot sense seeing as how Fluttershy is incredibly sensitive. And the GB working late with an unknown female really doesn't help any kind of explanation he could of possibly had.
Then Steelrain shows up with five rangers and they now work for the Harbingers? This just keeps getting weirder and weirder by the second.
I absoulutely loved this chapter this has to be one of the best yet! I cannot thankyou enough, Somber, for creating such a masterpiece. And many thanks to the amazing editing team for brushing and making this awe inspiring story all polished up and pretty for everypony to enjoy!
Again I would love to thank you all and I cannot wait to what you have in store for our heroine next.
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Oh. I say, you're right; I'm rather ashamed for not noticing that. Very interesting… I'll have to check with Somber to see if it's a mistake, just a name that whoever names batponies thought sounded nice, or… significant.Jeremyrush wrote:"Tenebra" Latin for darkness.
Of course, I probably won't be able to tell any of you the answer I get.
Hahahaha! What do you think of that, Bronode, eh? You might have gotten Somber to give the metric system to Fancee, but there's not much argument you can make about this, is there?Jeremyrush wrote:after Twi named the Pinkus Pieicus
…Though I'm not sure that Bronode will see this message, actually.
Oh, but he already did that, if you catch my meaning.WovenTales wrote:And besides, Stygius is cute! Now he just needs to find something to shoot Blackjack with
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Hey, don't look at me; the joke was Somber's idea!
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Yes, but will it count? I'm not going to consider the application to join the party formalized until some piece of metal travels at high speed along a flight path that originates close to Stygius and passes through whatever passes for Blackjack's flesh. Though it might be interesting to see the differing dynamics of the only companion to not point a gun (metal sort) at her...nah, let's test that with somepony else.O. Hinds wrote:Oh, but he already did that, if you catch my meaning.WovenTales wrote:And besides, Stygius is cute! Now he just needs to find something to shoot Blackjack with
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Hey, don't look at me; the joke was Somber's idea!
Honestly, though, I'm sure Somber has a plan already, and it's probably many times better than anything I can come up with. And if that plan involves our new favorite batpony leaving, well, I might not be as immediately happy, but I'm sure the narrative will work out better for it.
Edit @guarddogjr: That is an amazing signature. I just wish that I had thought of doing the same early enough that using something similar would be more than a poor imitation.
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