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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
I liked chapter 64 quite a lot. Awesome job on it Somber.
I've always wanted to write what I thought as I read through it, like some here do, so why not try this chapter? Never done it before so it'll probably suck.
Anyways...
If I remember right, 63 ended with Rampage diving at Blackjack only to bounce off her, landing in a heap on the floor. The attempted tackle barely phasing "Two Tonne Tessie".
I've always wanted to write what I thought as I read through it, like some here do, so why not try this chapter? Never done it before so it'll probably suck.
Anyways...
If I remember right, 63 ended with Rampage diving at Blackjack only to bounce off her, landing in a heap on the floor. The attempted tackle barely phasing "Two Tonne Tessie".
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- "...less than six blocks away from the wreck of the Hurricane"“Bwackjack’s a powah hog,”
Ha!“What else is here?”“Worse things. Much worse,”"Think… Horizon Labs…”
Ooh, this should be good
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I'm seriously liking their banter.
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Solaris? Wasn't that Pink Eyes?
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Just like Blackjack to walk right into a trap“Damn upgrades! Stop repairing yourself!”“I can’t help it! They’re automatic!”
snrk!
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Nice description on that...'thing'!
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It seems that "yonic" is my "new word of the day""...and the puckered orifice drawing the silver wire began to let the silver metal slip out, dripping unctuous ammonic juice. Foot by foot, I pulled away from the grasping protrusion. Two feet. Five. Ten. I was burning energy like mad, anything to get away from that thing."
Appears this thing is an experienced angler
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Wow, wasn't expecting quite that sudden a turnaround. Very nicely done. And the moonstone makes sense.
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When a quick sequence happens I often re-read it right after to make sure I have it straight in my head before moving on. My first impression was that Boo came to help Blackjack and the pendant hanging around her neck came close to the wire resulting in the fireworks. But upon re-reading it seems that she had it in her mouth? Like she expected it to do something? ...Wat? "Lucky" doesn't even begin to describe that. Might as well just say "A wizard did it".“This was the pendant they wore when they were working in the Tokomare. It kept them from getting sick.”
Ah, that's why Boo isn't pudding. Is that also the secret to Blackjack's resistance? I'm sure she has at least one or two moonstones rattling around her saddlebags from her travels“Say, Blackjack... I dare you to eat it.”
Heh, was not expecting that one“Rambleberry in the haircut, two cups please.”
Now that was an awesome cool bit. Read through it several times.
Seems to me that when Blackjack was "high on the moon" she was able to see things as they truly are. The dozens of shadowy souls in Rampage, the countless lives the city is a grave to, Echo, not as The Dealer, but as himself (dunno about the thorn collar tho), the six ministry mare figurines, all pieces of Rarity's soul, the struggle between flesh and metal.
But a few things really stood out to me."My eyes drifted over to Boo. Her strings glistened as they were tugged. From above, the shadowy thing manipulating the puppeteer’s crossbars peered back at me and raised a finger to its lips."
Raised a finger, not a hoof. Off the top of my head I can only think of one that might be able to do something like that and has fingers. Which reminds me of the previous scene with the medallion in Boo's mouth. As well as her famous luck.
I also noticed“Blackjack? You don’t look so good,” Rampage said, a filly painted in blood with a crowd of shadows behind her.
Rampage as a filly...
If my guess about seeing things as they truly are is right, was that filly the most recent recipient of the Phoenix Talisman? Is that why she reverts to that age when disintegrated? A clue that Rampage is a real pony rather than an amalgam personality of the other souls inside her?"...and my chest starting singing..."
Does she have something else in there other than augments? That could be bad, or good ...or nothing.
Singing is better than screaming though...probably
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The dream/memory was nice, I liked it.“One really shouldn’t nibble on pure, condensed spirit energy, Blackjack.”“It seemed like it almost… recognized you.”
Neat
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The pregnancy is messing with her big timeWhat else was the Core going to throw at me? Hurricanes?
It already did that, but it got wedged between a couple of buildings...
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I like the O.I.A. liaisons getting a deeper look. One thing I really like about Somber's writing is the lack of, for the most part, simplistic 'black and white/all or nothing' perspectives.“An inch,”
Is that...?“An inch,” Trottenheimer said quietly. “It is small and it is fragile, but it is the only thing worth having.”
Ah, so many great scenes in that. One of my favouritesHorse blinked, bafflement crossing his face. It seemed to be causing him physical pain, as if the confusion had lodged in his cranium and couldn’t make it out again. “Wha… how… who…” Horse sputtered as Trottenheimer walked slowly out the door.
Hah! I love doing that to the jerks of the world. They think they have me over a barrel, no choice but to accept their demands, "It's this or nothing! There's no other way!" I respond with, "I choose nothing, it seems the better option." Yeah, getting nothing is hard, but it's better than submitting to their dominance. And often they're also getting nothing if I don't accept. When others think they're entitled to badly unequal arrangements in their favour, it's best not to deal with them at all.
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Wow, I was wondering why the enervation seemed so weak in the Core. Turns out isn't. Without the pendants it only takes seconds to kill.
Wait. If the enervation kills so quickly without protection, why was Boo ok when Blackjack took hers and ran off down the hall to stick it down the mutant's throat? The puppeteer doesn't really need it? Or can make do without it for short periods? Ten feet or so isn't far enough?Down below me, in the office foyer, surrounded by a half-dozen prone ponies. Hah! I knew that Rampage…would be talking with Steel Rain, who was now in fancy, sparkling silver armor?
I'm really not sure what to make of that. There were several bodies around her, so it wasn't completely friendly. Did he offer her something? If he did I bet it was chocolate. That's what she really wants, right?
Oh, and is Steel Rain's fancy new silver armour really armour? Just six days ago he was near death, with his only salvation being Cognitum.“Good. Once she’s disabled, remove her wings and legs and secure her for transport."
Ouch!"Cognitum can’t keep the swarmers suppressed forever,”
Doesn't have anywhere near as much control over things as it first appeared“Such a precious little bundle…” the unicorn crooned, lifting the colt up. One eye glowed a faint red, and wires ran down the side of his face to disappear into the swaddling. He stared right at me, and my gut gave a twinge… and then I started screaming as I fled.
Ah, I love that about this story. If something look great, just scratch the surface to find the disturbing
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Again, nice imagery with the golden city. As well as Blackjack going all moonbat crazy.
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Yet again, loving the descriptions of the environment. The messed up buildings, the heart of the Core with the ruined ministry buildings, walking through the wreckage.Then the pit came to us.The scream was in every bit of myself, and even the song in my chest wasn’t enough to drown it out completely.
So it seems to be a good thing, but I really can't place the cause of it."IT WAS YOU WHO TOUCHED MY DREAMS."
Kinda makes me think of Blackjack's dream of future Hoofington after destroying the Celestia."SHE AND HER CREATOR BOTH!"
Horse of course“Takes one to know one,” a voice muttered sarcastically in my ear.“Oh yes. Sooo appealing...” that voice drawled sarcastically. “That’s enough of that.”Then there was a flash...
Sssshhhhhhhhhh!“Any truth to this ‘Eater’ nonsense, Amadi?” From the shadows stepped the oddly tattooed zebra I’d seen in the Tokomare below. His lips were curled in a blissful smile. “None whatsoever. Just superstition and nonsense.”
Oooh, reminds me of an overly complicated conspiracy theory I had about the overall plot.As my sight refocused, I oriented myself and found that I was still standing; it seemed my body didn’t need to lie down when unconscious.
This is something I also really enjoy. All the little "differences from organic to mechanical" details that have been sprinkled throughout the story. They really draw me into the emotions of how the augments aren't all they're made out to be.
"I really wish I could still x""Or give me EC-1101, and I’ll trot out and beat Cogs"“Leave me with EC-1101."
This could go in a bad direction, and I really, really, reallllly hope it doesn't.The Legate looked at me, and his lips spread in a slow smile in the shadow of the dragon’s maw. “Maiden. It is good to see you again.”
Wasn't expecting him. This guy really likes showing up out of nowhereBut the Legate wasn’t looking at Rampage either. His amber eyes stared right past both of us... at Boo.
Sweet!I glared at the zebra, and then I heard Boo say, quite calmly and clearly, “It’s no fun when you spoil
the ending, oh eternal one.”“It’s time for you to die, Discord!”“Well then. If you insist...” She lowered herself onto all four hooves, grinning back at the striped stallion with her lone fang gleaming. “Ante up.”
Squeeeeeee! Me likey that ending!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Well its not really something we can verify. To be fair, its entirely possible he can control Flux in some way. However, he's been trapped in a star metal prison for over 200 years so we never get to really see...WavemasterRyx wrote:While this is true, as far as I know he never demonstrated an ability to control Flux after it was drained from him, it merely carries his inherently chaotic nature. The real drastic changes to Boo did only start to occur after Discord was freed.Scienza wrote:
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She was born of Discord's essence, and so the amount of influence that he might have had on her development is unknown, especially when you consider that one of the most likely explanations for her "specialness" is minute exposure to Flux through contact or ingestion of contaminated food or water.
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Huh. Okay, thanks. Just wondering, since BJ has been out of the stable for, what, five months now? But then Equestria seems to have an extended spring/summer and attenuated autumn/winter. Or at least that's how it goes in the show.O. Hinds wrote:Fallout: Equestria wrote:Spike watched us with amusement, waiting for Calamity to dry himself before answering. “Well, that’s when the ponies of Ponyville would clean up the winter so that spring could start properly.” As he looked at us, I could see it dawning on him that none of us had the slightest clue what he was talking about. Two of us were from Stables and had never experienced a winter. Calamity had been an outcast long enough to have been through a few, but only wild winters that wrapped themselves up on their own. The pegasi had long stopped aiding the passing of the seasons.
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When Twist surfaced in Ch. 34, she was desperate to know if Peppermint was hurt. While she's not named, I strongly suspect that Peppermint is the person that lived with Twist and Shujaa in Ch. 50, which Shujaa thought Twist should say goodbye to but also jokingly referred to as a "feral beast".WavemasterRyx wrote:I wonder what happened that I have absolutely no idea who Peppermint is...
Given that we saw Twist's skeleton in Miramare Crater, I suspect that Rampage's body is Peppermint and that Peppermint herself was some kind of cross-clone between Twist and Shujaa. This explains why Rampage has Twist's hair but Shujaa's stripes, why she reverts to a filly of a specific age after disintegration, and why she has no memory prior to waking up in Miramare Crater with the Phoenix Talisman in her chest.
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Well, he told her "no augments," and she seemed to agree. I suspect the armor is kind of a mobile hospital bed, possibly related to the MP-47/A Prototype Medic Power Armor.Boing wrote:Oh, and is Steel Rain's fancy new silver armour really armour? Just six days ago he was near death, with his only salvation being Cognitum.
It's related to the vision.Boing wrote:So it seems to be a good thing, but I really can't place the cause of it.The scream was in every bit of myself, and even the song in my chest wasn’t enough to drown it out completely.
And another comes, one with a song like that within the traveler, fighting the scream without and fostering the song within, and she raises me to her lips and… bites me…
The "song within" is likely why she's immune to Enervation.
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- Silly Zebra Story about Recent Characters:
- Once, there was a silly zebra who thought that secrets were more important than anything. He built four walls of wood around his secret so that nobody could see it. But other zebras saw the walls and they asked him what was behind them. "Nothing," said the silly zebra, "I just like to sit on my walls where I feel mighty and strong." This enchanted the other zebras, who wanted to feel mighty and strong as well. So they started building their own wooden walls. The silly zebra panicked, for if their walls were taller than his they could peer over and see his secret. This would not do. He raced and built his wall taller until there were no more trees to make wood, so no zebra could make their walls taller than his. "I am sorry, my friends," He lied, "But I really enjoy being so high up, so I work very hard." Other zebras grew jealous, and still wanted to have tall walls, so they took the sands and made sandstone blocks from them. Again, the silly zebra panicked and raced to build his walls taller than any other. He used up all of the sand to make walls so tall the other zebras looked like ants down below. But the other zebras still wanted to have a wall as tall as his, so they began to mine the stone from deep within the earth. Again, the silly zebra built faster than them, taking so much stone that his walls could no longer be seen from the ground. When he was done, giant walls covered the land but his remained the tallest. The other zebras had only one stone left between them and could never hope to have a wall as tall as his. So instead of building with it, they threw it in resentment at the silly zebra's massive walls. The heavy stone at the top began to shake, and the weak wood and sandstone all began to crumble. The silly zebra's tower collapsed, falling onto the other walls, which fell onto smaller walls, which fell onto smaller walls, until the smallest walls fell onto homes and homes onto wells. Soon there was nothing left but the silly zebra's secret. He was so ashamed that he fled into the plains. So quickly did he leave that he failed to see the other zebra's shameful secrets, once hidden behind their great walls, were as exposed as his.
I think he’s just confirmed to have come from Canterlot. 200 years prior to this conversation, Discord would have been getting a Pink Bath if Golden hadn’t spirited him away.Luminous Lead wrote:Lego confirmed pre-war AND parley to a plot to bump Disco off? Looks like Goldie did some good after all, keeping him out of the way.Ch 64 wrote:“You were supposed to die two centuries ago, but Goldenblood spirited you away. You should have died when Blackjack freed you, but you hitched along in that empty vessel.” The Legate pointed a hoof at the mare. “It’s time for you to die, Discord!”
Would the Starkatteri that he jacked the technique from have access to starmetal?O. Hinds wrote:Ooh, wonderful idea! In the absence of better information, I'm going to headcanon this.Ryx wrote:Rampage saying Moon Dust is made with a tiny bit of actual moonstone makes me wonder if that's how Snips made the temporary talismans to get into the prison, with condensed Moon Dust...
SilentCarto wrote:Well, he told her "no augments," and she seemed to agree. I suspect the armor is kind of a mobile hospital bed, possibly related to the MP-47/A Prototype Medic Power Armor.Boing wrote:Oh, and is Steel Rain's fancy new silver armour really armour? Just six days ago he was near death, with his only salvation being Cognitum.
MPA: "Listen up, you little puke! You are now wearing MP-47/A Prototype Medic Power Armor! You take care of me, and I'll take care of you."
SR: "Did my armour just... speak?"
MPA: "Consorting with a stripe! Why I aughta rip you a new one! Take me off this instant and download me into the nearest Gutsy-class soldier so I can kick your ass!"
SR: "No. She is going to be very... helpful in the upcoming turmoil.
MPA: "I'd rather be disassembled than work with a stripe sympathizing, Goddess damned self satisfied pink coated-"
SR: "And she's not even a zebra."
MPA: "Oh that's okay then."
MPA: "Broken leg detected! ...Too bad we're out of Med-X."
SR: "Nnnng... yes, well, maybe if you hadn't used every syringe we had in the span of five minutes- urk!"
MPA: "Heh."
MPA: "Sweet Celestia! Look at how many eyes that thing has!"
SR: "I'm more concerned about the mouths- AUGH! My leg!"
MPA: "Pansy! Take a shot of Vitamin M and keep running!"
SR: "You said we were out of-"
MPA: "I say a lot of things, and if you ever want to hear more you are going to MOVE YOUR ASS! Watch the flank, hostile tendrils at seven o'clock!"
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The way he said it made me think he meant that he started the super weapon search with the intent to save the good guys, but got Eater influenced during the search and wound up designing a planet-smasher under an insane mindset.SilentCarto wrote:Surely that couldn't have been Goldie's intent, though. I mean, how do you accidentally crash the Moon into the Earth? I took "went too far" to mean it's supposed to go blam, not BLAM.
No, Legate didn't explicitly say he was the one who should have killed Discord back then, he just said Disco should have died twice. I read that with the implication "But now it's my turn, and that means you're proper f***ed."Luminous Lead wrote:Lego confirmed pre-war AND parley to a plot to bump Disco off? Looks like Goldie did some good after all, keeping him out of the way.Ch 64 wrote:“You were supposed to die two centuries ago, but Goldenblood spirited you away. You should have died when Blackjack freed you, but you hitched along in that empty vessel.” The Legate pointed a hoof at the mare. “It’s time for you to die, Discord!”
That said, Discord did call him "eternal one", so confirmation that the Legate is the immortal warrior from zebra legend. Nice to have that out in the open and unspoilered at last...
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I'm getting huge Choir vibes off of it. Since that was the first link connecting moonstone and starmetal, it would seem that it's related.SilentCarto wrote:It's related to the vision.Boing wrote:So it seems to be a good thing, but I really can't place the cause of it.The scream was in every bit of myself, and even the song in my chest wasn’t enough to drown it out completely.
And another comes, one with a song like that within the traveler, fighting the scream without and fostering the song within, and she raises me to her lips and… bites me…
The "song within" is likely why she's immune to Enervation.
I think that Silver Stripe stuck a chunk of starmetal into BJ's upgrades.
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:DMeleagridis wrote:
- Silly Zebra Story about Recent Characters:
Once, there was a silly zebra who thought that secrets were more important than anything. He built four walls of wood around his secret so that nobody could see it. But other zebras saw the walls and they asked him what was behind them. "Nothing," said the silly zebra, "I just like to sit on my walls where I feel mighty and strong." This enchanted the other zebras, who wanted to feel mighty and strong as well. So they started building their own wooden walls. The silly zebra panicked, for if their walls were taller than his they could peer over and see his secret. This would not do. He raced and built his wall taller until there were no more trees to make wood, so no zebra could make their walls taller than his. "I am sorry, my friends," He lied, "But I really enjoy being so high up, so I work very hard." Other zebras grew jealous, and still wanted to have tall walls, so they took the sands and made sandstone blocks from them. Again, the silly zebra panicked and raced to build his walls taller than any other. He used up all of the sand to make walls so tall the other zebras looked like ants down below. But the other zebras still wanted to have a wall as tall as his, so they began to mine the stone from deep within the earth. Again, the silly zebra built faster than them, taking so much stone that his walls could no longer be seen from the ground. When he was done, giant walls covered the land but his remained the tallest. The other zebras had only one stone left between them and could never hope to have a wall as tall as his. So instead of building with it, they threw it in resentment at the silly zebra's massive walls. The heavy stone at the top began to shake, and the weak wood and sandstone all began to crumble. The silly zebra's tower collapsed, falling onto the other walls, which fell onto smaller walls, which fell onto smaller walls, until the smallest walls fell onto homes and homes onto wells. Soon there was nothing left but the silly zebra's secret. He was so ashamed that he fled into the plains. So quickly did he leave that he failed to see the other zebra's shameful secrets, once hidden behind their great walls, were as exposed as his.I think he’s just confirmed to have come from Canterlot. 200 years prior to this conversation, Discord would have been getting a Pink Bath if Golden hadn’t spirited him away.Luminous Lead wrote:Lego confirmed pre-war AND parley to a plot to bump Disco off? Looks like Goldie did some good after all, keeping him out of the way.Ch 64 wrote:“You were supposed to die two centuries ago, but Goldenblood spirited you away. You should have died when Blackjack freed you, but you hitched along in that empty vessel.” The Legate pointed a hoof at the mare. “It’s time for you to die, Discord!”Would the Starkatteri that he jacked the technique from have access to starmetal?O. Hinds wrote:Ooh, wonderful idea! In the absence of better information, I'm going to headcanon this.Ryx wrote:Rampage saying Moon Dust is made with a tiny bit of actual moonstone makes me wonder if that's how Snips made the temporary talismans to get into the prison, with condensed Moon Dust...SilentCarto wrote:Well, he told her "no augments," and she seemed to agree. I suspect the armor is kind of a mobile hospital bed, possibly related to the MP-47/A Prototype Medic Power Armor.Boing wrote:Oh, and is Steel Rain's fancy new silver armour really armour? Just six days ago he was near death, with his only salvation being Cognitum.
MPA: "Listen up, you little puke! You are now wearing MP-47/A Prototype Medic Power Armor! You take care of me, and I'll take care of you."
SR: "Did my armour just... speak?"
MPA: "Consorting with a stripe! Why I aughta rip you a new one! Take me off this instant and download me into the nearest Gutsy-class soldier so I can kick your ass!"
SR: "No. She is going to be very... helpful in the upcoming turmoil.
MPA: "I'd rather be disassembled than work with a stripe sympathizing, Goddess damned self satisfied pink coated-"
SR: "And she's not even a zebra."
MPA: "Oh that's okay then."
MPA: "Broken leg detected! ...Too bad we're out of Med-X."
SR: "Nnnng... yes, well, maybe if you hadn't used every syringe we had in the span of five minutes- urk!"
MPA: "Heh."
MPA: "Sweet Celestia! Look at how many eyes that thing has!"
SR: "I'm more concerned about the mouths- AUGH! My leg!"
MPA: "Pansy! Take a shot of Vitamin M and keep running!"
SR: "You said we were out of-"
MPA: "I say a lot of things, and if you ever want to hear more you are going to MOVE YOUR ASS! Watch the flank, hostile tendrils at seven o'clock!"
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Hehe! Very cute!Meleagridis wrote:
- Silly Zebra Story about Recent Characters:
Once, there was a silly zebra who thought that secrets were more important than anything. He built four walls of wood around his secret so that nobody could see it. But other zebras saw the walls and they asked him what was behind them. "Nothing," said the silly zebra, "I just like to sit on my walls where I feel mighty and strong." This enchanted the other zebras, who wanted to feel mighty and strong as well. So they started building their own wooden walls. The silly zebra panicked, for if their walls were taller than his they could peer over and see his secret. This would not do. He raced and built his wall taller until there were no more trees to make wood, so no zebra could make their walls taller than his. "I am sorry, my friends," He lied, "But I really enjoy being so high up, so I work very hard." Other zebras grew jealous, and still wanted to have tall walls, so they took the sands and made sandstone blocks from them. Again, the silly zebra panicked and raced to build his walls taller than any other. He used up all of the sand to make walls so tall the other zebras looked like ants down below. But the other zebras still wanted to have a wall as tall as his, so they began to mine the stone from deep within the earth. Again, the silly zebra built faster than them, taking so much stone that his walls could no longer be seen from the ground. When he was done, giant walls covered the land but his remained the tallest. The other zebras had only one stone left between them and could never hope to have a wall as tall as his. So instead of building with it, they threw it in resentment at the silly zebra's massive walls. The heavy stone at the top began to shake, and the weak wood and sandstone all began to crumble. The silly zebra's tower collapsed, falling onto the other walls, which fell onto smaller walls, which fell onto smaller walls, until the smallest walls fell onto homes and homes onto wells. Soon there was nothing left but the silly zebra's secret. He was so ashamed that he fled into the plains. So quickly did he leave that he failed to see the other zebra's shameful secrets, once hidden behind their great walls, were as exposed as his.
Umm... Vitamin M is Motrin (ibuprofen), not Morphine.Meleagridis wrote:MPA: "Pansy! Take a shot of Vitamin M and keep running!"
SR: "You said we were out of-"
MPA: "I say a lot of things, and if you ever want to hear more you are going to MOVE YOUR ASS! Watch the flank, hostile tendrils at seven o'clock!"
Military life is fairly physical, so it tends to involve a lot of untreatable injuries like strains, sprains, bumps, bruises, and overextensions. As such, military doctors tend to prescribe heavy doses of conventional analgesics for generic aches and pains to see if they will heal on their own. And, of course, most other treatments also call for painkillers of some sort, so...
I don't think I understand what you're proposing. Why do you think the passage was describing anything other than tremendous external Enervation exposure?Scienza wrote:I'm getting huge Choir vibes off of it. Since that was the first link connecting moonstone and starmetal, it would seem that it's related.
I think that Silver Stripe stuck a chunk of starmetal into BJ's upgrades.
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That makes sense, except that I believe Blackjack was mentioned as to having enervationumity before that. If I'm remembering correctly, it was mentioned in both Brimstones Fall, and Flank. I'm probably wrong though, my memory is extremely selective.swicked wrote:If I were a gambler, I'd wager on her immunity being from Discord. He can clearly shield Boo (who might not usually be affected anyway, lacking a soul and thus subject more to the corpse preservation effect rather than the liquified pony one) and himself from it, even when severely weakened. Discord's Kiss was identified as an actual perk, so it had to of done something.
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Wellll... cyberization made her resistant, but she was still materially affected by it. The immunity seems to have cropped up gradually over time; immediately after being kissed, "my chest began to burn painfully" from the Enervation in the tunnels beneath Hippocratic. BJ said,Silver136 wrote:That makes sense, except that I believe Blackjack was mentioned as to having enervationumity before that. If I'm remembering correctly, it was mentioned in both Brimstones Fall, and Flank. I'm probably wrong though, my memory is extremely selective.
It hurt, but it was a distant hurt, and instead of passing out I felt a faint ringing in my ears.
A day and several chapters later, at Yellow River,
I look the opportunity to wash the blood off my face. It didn’t seem to come off though, no matter how much I scrubbed. Then I noticed the mirror; there was a nick below my horn that kept bleeding. It was taking its sweet time healing, but with all the Enervation in the room…
The kiss doesn't seem to have had a noticeable effect on her Enervation vulnerability. I tend to think her increasing immunity is more related to her pulling herself together after her long night and the stint at Happyhorn -- making her a better conduit for Harmony.
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You say "just" like being the chosen champion of the stars is no big deal.swicked wrote:Could it be a combination of all three? I really don't think just being "harmonious" would be enough to not get melted nine times out of ten.
I'm not saying anyone could resist Enervation that way, but I also think that just being the chosen of the stars is not enough. The stars gave her a pitcher, but it's her responsibility to fill it.
That's what I think, anyway.
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swicked wrote:...so, what, you think starmetal would protect against starmetal? Even if it was powered, all it would do is create MORE enervation, not cancel it out. Enervation is all the exact same frequency of magic, resonating with the EoS, so it never does anything except bolster itself.Scienza wrote:I think that Silver Stripe stuck a chunk of starmetal into BJ's upgrades.
Honestly, I'm not entirely sure where I was going with that. It made sense when I posted it.
The "song within" business is really Choir-y though.
Ch. 32 wrote:I felt… it felt like my insides were moving! Like my tainted guts were trying to crawl right out my throat! I fought for one moment and then puked on the inside of my helmet. It wasn’t bad compared to what followed at the other end.
And worst of all, I wanted to join that scream. It scratched at my throat.
There's a connection there. It's the first time that we encounter moonstone or flux in its pure form (not as taint exposure), and certainly the first time we seem how they interact with starmetal.
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The Choir's "song" was still just screaming, no matter what they called it. In every one of BJ's out-of-hp experiences, "songs" and "singing" have referred solely to the power of Harmony. And don't forget:Scienza wrote:The "song within" business is really Choir-y though.
And another comes, one with a song like that within the traveler, fighting the scream without and fostering the song within, and she raises me to her lips and… bites me…
I mean, unless you're suggesting that Marigold's "song within" was the same as Nightmare Moon "bearing the scream"...
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Are you implying that screaming isn't the most beautiful form of singing, Silent?
Anyway, I think it's all just to do with varying frequencies of magic and... stuff and things. Varying notes = varying frequencies and whatnot. With pony magic being across a wide spectrum and working best when harmonious and stuff, I guess.
Anyway, I think it's all just to do with varying frequencies of magic and... stuff and things. Varying notes = varying frequencies and whatnot. With pony magic being across a wide spectrum and working best when harmonious and stuff, I guess.
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Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
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Huh, I don't think that theory's actually been posted, though it's highly likely that I could be wrong. It sounds very plausible though! Anyway, welcome! Hope you stick around with the rest of us mad people!The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
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Really? It has to have come up at some point. In any case, I'm in full agreement, and have thought that this was implicit since at least Snips.stringtheory wrote:Huh, I don't think that theory's actually been posted, though it's highly likely that I could be wrong. It sounds very plausible though! Anyway, welcome! Hope you stick around with the rest of us mad people!The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
Anyway, Truth, welcome to the forum, should you choose to stick around!
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I can barely remember any of the theories which get floated around here, mainly because I have nothing meaningful to contribute to them. Like I said, it's highly likely that someone's already brought it up and I simply don't remember. Or that like you said, it's so obvious it's implicit by now.Icy Shake wrote:Really? It has to have come up at some point.
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Hey, before you all go agreeing or whatever, let me finish this post where I'm gonna argue that that's completely wrong and stuff please.
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ThisShouldBeGood.jpgDerpmind wrote:Hey, before you all go agreeing or whatever, let me finish this post where I'm gonna argue that that's completely wrong and stuff please.
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Ooh, is someone gonna bring up Descartes' animal spirits? I love when that happens.
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The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
Yeah, well, that's just like, your opinion man.
Enervation is the magical effect of the EoS's power to make any and all magic resonate at its singular wavelength. Its effects on life is usually deadly, (sometimes it twists life into seriously messed up monsters,) and we know that it sucks souls of the dead straight into it. If Blackjack's soul was separated from her body, then what would keep her soul from being sucked out?
We've seen two ways to counter Enervation. Moonstone is a direct counter to the EoS's super-complicated spell/song, but there's also Harmony. We've seen throughout the story ponies working together in harmony resists the effects of Enervation, especially in some settlements around the hoof. Chapel is extremely close to the core but it's also completely Enervation free. Harmony is also what the stars used to defeat the EoS a bazillion years ago. Basically, Friendship (and similar stuff) is Magic, and it's too magically magic with all the souls singing with each other for Enervation to break up easily.
I think that throughout the story, Blackjack has been slowly building up Harmony within herself. Some combination of being blessed by the stars, working so hard to redeem herself, helping so many ponies and helping ponies work together, and begin pregnant (the latest chapter has the moonstone talking about the building song inside BJ, so it might just be mostly being pregnant) has built her up to the point where she's practically immune. Basically, I think it's the absolute opposite of what you're saying.
Boo is not a soulless anything. Even if you believe she was little more than an animal when we first met her, being at the level of an animal would qualify her for having a soul in this ~verse. Before Discord was freed, Boo even went so far as to save BJ's life. Her protection from Enervation is as simple as having Discord inhabiting her body. We know that flux was used in the silver bullets to separate moonstone and starmetal, so Discord can easily resist Enervation just fine. Also, she's too cute and loving and calling her soulless is cruel, you meaniepants.
The Goddesses weakness to Enervation is simple: She had many souls connected within her, but they were all marching to her one tone. Absolutely no Harmony in any part of her except Lacunae, and the Goddesses tune wasn't anything near the smothering, all-consuming power of the EoS.
I think the story's been hopeful throughout everything, and at the end doom and gloom will be defeated.
Inspirational heavy mahogany (pirate) music.
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Well... except that we have direct evidence of what it's like to be de-souled.The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
From Ch. 50:
Then the pheonix talisman came into view along with a torrent of blood. The knife tumbled from her hooves as she screamed and tore it from her own flesh. The pain vanished, replaced by a terrible numbness.
And Snips says in Ch. 49:
“So, when the curse went off, I was able to pull you back and put you in your body,” he said with a nervous smile.
So since BJ isn't experiencing that numbness and isn't... well... dead, her soul must still be where it's supposed to be.
I prefer distilled spirits.Overlong Analysis Cobalt wrote:Ooh, is someone gonna bring up Descartes' animal spirits? I love when that happens.
Well said.Derpmind wrote:I think that throughout the story, Blackjack has been slowly building up Harmony within herself. Some combination of being blessed by the stars, working so hard to redeem herself, helping so many ponies and helping ponies work together, and begin pregnant (the latest chapter has the moonstone talking about the building song inside BJ, so it might just be mostly being pregnant) has built her up to the point where she's practically immune. Basically, I think it's the absolute opposite of what you're saying.
I'll see your Dread Pirates and raise you a Mighty Pirate!Derpmind wrote:Inspirational heavy mahogany (pirate) music.
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Welcome to the forum!The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
Enervation is a magic which specifically targets life and the soul.
Blackjack's increased immunity to enervation is caused by the separation of her body and soul. Blackjack became partially immune to enervation after her first death and only became fully immune after Snips cast his spell on her in Hightower. Boo is immune to enervation because she is an artificial construction and never had a soul in the first place.
This also contributed to the late Goddess's weakness to enervation, as she was a collective of many souls.
I thought this had been heavily enough hinted toward, but it appears otherwise.
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Welcome!The Truth wrote:I've made an account just to post this.
On an unrelated note, did the zebra mystic blow powdered moonstone into Big Daddy's eyes?
Ch. 25 wrote:“He fed me some crock about the Hoof being surrounded by evil spirits and that they were drawn here by a great and terrible wrong. Figured he was talking about the Core. Then he blew some glowing sand in my eyes and said it would give me the sight of the sun. The old kook took off after that.” He took a deep breath. “I don’t know exactly what he did... being I don’t have a horn on my noggin... but ever since then, I’ve been able to look at ponies and see them for who they really are. It’s how I know Sanguine’s a crooked snake who’s going to kill me someday. And it’s how I know the Reapers will be good in Brutus’s hooves when he does.”
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Hm, interesting idea.
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Huh. Interesting theory. But, given zebra alchemy, it could just as easily be a "conventional" magical compound. Or an alchemical compound that involves moonstone, who knows?Scienza wrote:On an unrelated note, did the zebra mystic blow powdered moonstone into Big Daddy's eyes?Ch. 25 wrote:“He fed me some crock about the Hoof being surrounded by evil spirits and that they were drawn here by a great and terrible wrong. Figured he was talking about the Core. Then he blew some glowing sand in my eyes and said it would give me the sight of the sun. The old kook took off after that.” He took a deep breath. “I don’t know exactly what he did... being I don’t have a horn on my noggin... but ever since then, I’ve been able to look at ponies and see them for who they really are. It’s how I know Sanguine’s a crooked snake who’s going to kill me someday. And it’s how I know the Reapers will be good in Brutus’s hooves when he does.”
I wonder how Sanguine's going to manage to off Big Daddy now... or was that more prediction than prophecy?
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Maybe it's more long-term, like one of the things he worked on at Hippocratic will end up offing the Big D. Exploding PB&J perhaps?SilentCarto wrote:
I wonder how Sanguine's going to manage to off Big Daddy now... or was that more prediction than prophecy?
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