[GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
...I don't think that I have headcanon about the show, actually. The show just supplies material for headcanons about individual fan things.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Speaking of canon, or at least Fallout Equestria canon, perhaps you kind bronies could help clear this up for me - is the Battle for Shattered Hoof Ridge where Big Macintosh died, or were those events separate? The Fallout Equestria Wiki says they're different, but I'm not so sure.
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There's the Battle of Shattered Hoof Ridge, which took place where you think it does (Shattered Hoof Ridge), and there's Shattered Hoof, the rock-breaking penitentiary named for the battle. This last is where Diamond Tiara died and was part of the domain of Mr. Topaz.
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Here's that audio drama I mentioned. It's COOL:
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I listened to that yesterday. Absolutely fantastic.
Somber is a genius and so is Pinkie! I'm re-reading the memory orb flashback between Pinkie and Rainbow - she asked an old groundskeeper to meet an astropony and her kid! Hoss, Marigold and Tarot! Fanastic!
But why would Pinkie send bobby pins to Braeburn? A future gift for Littlepip?
Somber is a genius and so is Pinkie! I'm re-reading the memory orb flashback between Pinkie and Rainbow - she asked an old groundskeeper to meet an astropony and her kid! Hoss, Marigold and Tarot! Fanastic!
But why would Pinkie send bobby pins to Braeburn? A future gift for Littlepip?
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The main thing that I can't get over is just how fantastic the music is. That Hay Ms. Derpy cover has been on a loop for the last two days, and the Eileen Monty song is fantastic.Caoimhe wrote:Here's that audio drama I mentioned. It's COOL:
Also, Scorch has the voice of a sexylicious angel.
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Ok, so I finally finished reading PH and I'm up to date, so I'm no longer afraid of spoilers.
But this thread is so long I'm not going to read it grom the start.
So sorry if this ad been asked, but...
Again, sorry if you already discussed that, I looked for it briefly and didn't find it.
But this thread is so long I'm not going to read it grom the start.
So sorry if this ad been asked, but...
Hardware malfunction during sexy times with P-21 and Glory?Pinkie Pie wrote:Then she blinked. “Oh. I guess I just did.” She rubbed her eyes and looked away. “Dawn wasn’t lying, but just because somepony does something bad doesn’t mean they’ve stopped being your friend. And sometimes, if two babies are determined to fight, sometimes you have to take away what they’re fighting over. Oh. And congratulations,” she said, then shook her head.
Again, sorry if you already discussed that, I looked for it briefly and didn't find it.
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Short answer is we don't know what she's talking about, though pregnancy is heavily implied. One would guess its Glory and P-21's the father (or it could be Prince Splendid), but who knows. Anyway another can of worms will be opened for Blackjack very soon.Adalbertus wrote:Ok, so I finally finished reading PH and I'm up to date, so I'm no longer afraid of spoilers.
But this thread is so long I'm not going to read it grom the start.
So sorry if this ad been asked, but...Hardware malfunction during sexy times with P-21 and Glory?Pinkie Pie wrote:Then she blinked. “Oh. I guess I just did.” She rubbed her eyes and looked away. “Dawn wasn’t lying, but just because somepony does something bad doesn’t mean they’ve stopped being your friend. And sometimes, if two babies are determined to fight, sometimes you have to take away what they’re fighting over. Oh. And congratulations,” she said, then shook her head.
Again, sorry if you already discussed that, I looked for it briefly and didn't find it.
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Well, the story is approaching it's finale phase. At this point it's about a week before the battle at SPP hub, so whatever is going to happen, it's going to happen soon. Because I am assuming that the conclusion of PH will be more or less correlated with the conclusion of FoE... and knowing Blackjack it will be blowing up everything :P
Or... since I already found quite few similarities between this story and Mass Effect, Blackjack will take over the Core :D
As for pregnancy theory, I guess it could be Glory... in which case, will it be a mix of P-12 and original Glory, or RD? :P
Or... since I already found quite few similarities between this story and Mass Effect, Blackjack will take over the Core :D
As for pregnancy theory, I guess it could be Glory... in which case, will it be a mix of P-12 and original Glory, or RD? :P
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Short answer: we don't know.Adalbertus wrote:As for pregnancy theory, I guess it could be Glory... in which case, will it be a mix of P-12 and original Glory, or RD? :P
Long answer go check out the rather humorous discussion on that topic back on page 9.
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I hate reading through discussion forum posts. I get lost there.
Ok, so the right answer is, we don't know. I'll stick with that.
And in that case I'll wait for the next chapter to join in on the discussion :P When will that be? <_<
Ok, so the right answer is, we don't know. I'll stick with that.
And in that case I'll wait for the next chapter to join in on the discussion :P When will that be? <_<
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Hopefully sooner rather than later, considering Somber said she had 20 pages written on Wednesday and was hoping to have enough to brush this weekend, but since we haven't heard anything...Adalbertus wrote:And in that case I'll wait for the next chapter to join in on the discussion :P When will that be? <_<
Also, the human whose mind Somber rides around in is unemployed so that probably given him/her plenty of time to write, but it does mean that he's sort of low on money, so despite what he says about not wanting to live off of charity, feel free to throw some money at him.
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I wish I could help, but I don't have too much money to spare... and by that I mean, I probably earn less than whatever the lowest income in USA is <_<
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Full time minimum wage earnings per year in the USA is about $15.000, so google's converter says that's about €11.100, so you tell me.Adalbertus wrote:I wish I could help, but I don't have too much money to spare... and by that I mean, I probably earn less than whatever the lowest income in USA is <_<
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~10.700 euro (before the taxes) so it's actually pretty close, I'm actually a little bit surprised. <_<
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On the Superman thing, I'll be brief and say it depends on the writer and the story. I can't see the Superman of Superman for All Seasons or All-Star Superman going that direction, and even the one of Kingdom Come went tyrannical not because of the loss of an individual, but because of the breakdown of the entire super hero system.
Anyway, I read through chapter twenty nine today, and for the first time I read as the Goddesses intended: with plenty of Wild Turkey at my side.
On an unrelated note, part of the chapter got me thinking about griffins. Is there a word, either in general or merely among the brony fandom, for a group of griffins? A quick search hasn't found a general answer, apart from suggestions of "pride" or "flock" (though it turns out a flock of eagles is a "convocation"). If there isn't one already, should one of those be used, or what do you think a good melding of the two would be? So far, the best I've come up with is "coronation of griffins," as a proud gathering [one replete with pomp and circumstance] that also incorporates their being a combination of the classical king of the beasts and king of the birds.
Anyway, I read through chapter twenty nine today, and for the first time I read as the Goddesses intended: with plenty of Wild Turkey at my side.
- Chapter Twenty Nine Running Thoughts:
- Well, we get to some good internal stuff right off the bat:
I want to do the right thing. Isn’t that simple? It should be. It’s supposed to be! There are rules; you follow them. There are choices; you consider them and then make the right choice. Then you live with the consequences.
From the very beginning, Project Horizons focuses on the inadequacy of just following the rules. One of Blackjack's key character flaws, at least early on, is that she doesn't really consider the options very deeply. This is mitigated by the fact that she has a pretty good moral intuition, but not completely. The only one that really holds true within the context of the story is the need to live with the consequences of the actions you choose to take—or not to take. But of course that's the point, isn't it? The world isn't one where you can rely on others to define the right way to act, and people don't always want that responsibility for themselves; nevertheless, they must choose how they will act, whether on that basis or some other, and that will define not only the world around them, but who they are as well.
Helping those ponies against the ghouls the other day.
I honestly wasn't expecting that to be mentioned again. I'm kind of glad it was, but it's still looking like there's not going to be much in terms of grappling with the fact she almost didn't.
I want a frigging carrot thrown my way and a pat on the head and a ‘Good job, Blackjack’ for once.
This, I think, is a good encapsulation of one of Blackjack's key traits, but especially ties in with something Somber recently mentioned regarding her relationship with her mother, and how it's contributed to both her guilt complex and the related belief that she's the world's ultimate screwup (there I believe in chapter one, but more as subtext than really spelled out). Of course, that may likewise be tied to her being the "s" in her and Glory's D/s sexual relationship, which suggests to me that we may be able to add some minor Oedipal tendencies to her bag of mental abnormalities.
Not much we could do about that besides breathe through our mouths and made the best time we could.
The advice I was always given was this: breathe through your nose, as you're going to smell it either way, and that way at least you don't taste it, too.
Slowly, I crept through the rubble-choked gap between two buildings. The rain pattered off the spongy beams and decaying masonry underhoof, but besides that, silence. There was nothing on the other side of the gap except another row of decaying homes and the dark outline of a large building beyond them.
...A building that moved…
I ducked out of sight as it growled long, low, and deep. I didn’t know what it could be; I didn’t want to know. I just didn’t want it to come this way. I backed carefully away as it growled and squealed for a moment… then growled again. Could it hear us? Smell us? It rumbled as it moved… but its rumbles were growing softer.
Some great scenery here, and I like how it sets the stage for the tanks later on. Also, dollars to donuts this is the start of the reveal that Scotch isn't over the fear of machines just because her memories were removed. [Well, I guess I lost that one, unless she announces so later.]
I thought of the Marauders… Goldenblood… Princesses… Ministry Mares…. I glanced up at the picture of Rarity with her shopping bag. A spark, and the world swirled away.
That's actually a pretty clever way of doing access security on this one.
“Blackjack’s been naughty!” Scotch Tape fell over laughing. I went as red as the stripes in my mane. Dear Luna, I was sore! How could I be sore? I hadn’t done anything!
“I… it wasn’t me! They were… and it was… I-“ I finally lost the capacity to speak altogether and just stammered hopelessly, incapable of explaining.
I find this a little odd, coming from Scotch and Blackjack. I guess I can see it from Scotch, as a reaction to Blackjack's loss of control (hypocritical though that would be—*ahem* bed wetter *ahem*), but it's always seemed like Blackjack is very open and unashamed regarding sexuality. Again, it could be over the loss of control, but that seems inconsistent with her apparent defense on that basis.
Oh, well at least this is acknowledged, but I'm still not sure of the why. And Scotch wasn't, at least initially, reacting to Blackjack stumbling over herself; that hadn't happened yet.
And suddenly, I wanted to go back in time, find whatever pony had discovered this valley and thought ‘Lets live here!’, and throw buckets of ice at her head.
Chapter eleven: “The first Equestrian explorers to reach the Hoofington -bzzzzzzzt- ley were an expedition led by Prince Blueblood the Third. According to his highly questionable memoirs, he faced cannibalistic zebra pigmies, a swarm of highly territorial -kzzzt- griffins, and one ursa major. Despite his ardent claims, no proof has ever been found to substantiate -bzzt-. Upon his return to Canterlot, -kraaapop- denied his claim to the entire region, giving him a small part of the upper river valley as reward for his discovery.”
Blackjack's memory must not be great (surprise!), because I bet she'd derive great pleasure from doing that to him, especially given he seems to share some of the baser character traits of his descendent.
I levitated two hunting rifles, but two centuries in the wet had made them poor clubs, let alone firearms.
It's refreshing to see this used right: it amazes me how often writers fail to use "let alone" and "if not x" correctly.
I’d always wondered about it, but it seemed to summarize the picture perfectly: Schmuck.
Yiddish confirmed as existing in Project Horizons (if it wasn't already). But that raises the question: what would Equestrian Jews believe, and what would their history be?
Okay, right now, I was really missing a super-strong striped mare.
Has Rampage ever tried suicide through Enervation?
Rushing into the manager’s office, I looked at the terminal. The menu didn’t offer much hope. Sales figures, inventory, employee hours, messages… then I spotted, at the bottom, ‘store functions’. I scrolled down to it and clicked.
>Store automation: On
>Lights: On
>Ambiance: On
>Coffee Machine: Warning. Critical failure!
That got a real smile out of me.
The Enervation scene was both quality horror and worked well as a way of giving just hints of where the Envervation rings come from and why they were made, beyond the simple fact that they are big contributors to the problem.
She was literally dancing on her hooves.
And "literally," too? You're spoiling me.
“Look, there’s a really simple way to resolve this.” Both blinked at me; I supposed that Blackjack as the voice of reason was a little surprising. “I’ll trot up there and say hi. If they shoot at me, we’ll know that they’re bad ponies.” Like that scavenger near the MASEBS tower? I winced inwardly. “Um, if they shoot at me a lot while shouting about how they’re going to rape me or eat me or fuck me up… then we know they’re bad ponies,” I amended.
And here we kind of tie back in to the introspection at the start of the chapter. Glory's plan to just avoid them is the simplest and safest. P-21 seems to want to be confrontational, but more to the point sees doing nothing as an unacceptable option, should they be raiders, which is of course his standard response. Blackjack's answer is the good synthesis of these, but the one with the highest chance of strongly bad consequences for her in particular. Of course, at this point even more than many others, she has reason to think that she has little to lose, so if the cost of doing the right thing—by not attacking without provocation while not leaving a threat to others remain—is her life, it's not a particularly dear one. And that's before considering her guilt complex and bipolar depression.
“And you’re right; if they’re all cannibals or something, then we’ve got an obligation to prevent them from hurting anypony else. So, do either of you have an alternative?”
Ah, but the key question is why you have an obligation to do so. Rules specifying such don't exist in the Wasteland, at least absent someone to enforce them. And I'd bet that even there you wouldn't think that it would apply to everyone, just those with the capability to effect a response and have a good chance of walking away.
“I’d welcome you, but I’m afraid you’re going to have to leave here, Miss Security. You have no business being here and no right to judge us.”
Well, that would be more true before the return to 99. As for business there, it wasn't her fault she missed that the bridge was broken. Well, a hundred feet is pretty long. Maybe it was foggy.
“You killed my son just now out there, Security. And you’ve killed my daughters. You’ve destroyed my home. Just like that. Was it hard for you? Did you even work up a sweat when you came and judged us?”
During the run-up to the 1860 presidential election, Lincoln made a speech at Cooper Union which, in part, responded to the position of slave interests that if the Northerners voted Republican, they would break the Union, making secession the fault of anti-slavery advocates. He said: "That is cool. A highwayman holds a pistol to my ear, and mutters through his teeth, 'Stand and deliver, or I shall kill you, and then you will be a murderer!' "
Yeah. This reminds me of that. And you don't want to be the kind of person who does that.
His forehooves had been blown off. Blood was painted across his face. He stared up at me, tears running down his cheeks. “I tried… I really tried...” he whimpered. “I didn’t let them die, Blackjack. Please. Please believe me.”
This brought tears to my eyes. It's important, first, that P-21 reacted so even for the treatment of mares. But even more, there's his desperation that Blackjack, in particular, beleive he did all he could to save them. Which, I think, matters so much to me because of course she would believe that; he didn't even need to say anything and she never would have considered that he didn't try. It's a short and subtle reminder of just how much they rely on each other, and the importance he attaches to Blackjack as the idea of what a good pony is.
Afterwards, I had to do something for the bodies, but I was at a loss. The slavers were carrion, but their victims deserved… something! Ponies weren’t exactly flammable… there wasn’t any ground suitable for burial. The thought of dumping them into the river chilled me even more, but it might be the only thing we could do.
Then Lacunae stepped forward and her horn glowed. “What are you doing?” I asked softly.
“What a Goddess should,” she answered, and the first body lifted in her magical grip and started floating higher and higher over the river. A red light atop the massive war wall surrounding the Core grew brighter and brighter, and then a beam struck the body. For a few seconds a star burned over the river before the ash was scattered.
Then another star. Another. Another…
Another…
Lacunae was gracious enough to tend to the fallen slavers as well. She was a better pony than I.
And now we've gone to full-on crying. First, this is a beautiful scene visually. But more so, it's a reminder that gods ought to be good as well as powerful, with kindness and mercy particularly important. Interestingly, we see that Blackjack seems to operate on the system that only the living can be forgiven, which in its way makes sense—it's the basic stance of the religion I grew up with, after all. Moreover, it highlights the relative shortcomings of the Goddess to the pieces of her Unity, given freedom, and indeed the mortals of the Wasteland. Oh, and, of course, Blackjack is not a good pony.
They ought to rename Dash ‘Blackjack’, then.
Funnier, given, you know. But it seems that Dash has cooled down a bit these last couple centuries.
Of course it exploded! Everything spontaneously explodes around me! Pipes! Vertibucks! Mares! Hell, I made Deus explode twice!
I don't know if she ever said it out loud, but if not, this could be the source of her Joke.
“He’s a male. You know Flashers like to play with them before finishing them off,” Radishes commented. I gave an inward groan. Doesn’t anypony just have normal sex in this place?
*ahem* Rape was your idea of "normal" heterosexual sex until a few weeks ago.
Of course he was. Because he was just like me. Smarter, way too serious, but just like me.
Is she really only now seeing that?
Would we have had cyber alicorn dragon hybrids fighting alongside sentient megaspells against giant zebra-shaped robots?
Is anything in Blackjack dragon based? Because that's the only thing that doesn't pretty decently fit a description of her post-ressurection (Cyber? Obviously. Alicorn? Sure, if not entirely. Sentient megaspell? You bet. And we have zebra-shaped robots, but not giant ones, yet, as far as I can remember.)
We moved over to the elevator as I watched her… him... damn, where’d he learn to walk like that?... walk down towards the meeting with a casual step.
Well, at a guess I'd say from watching mares like his life depended on it. Because it did.
- Chapter Twenty Nine Overall:
- What's there to say about this chapter? Well, from an ongoing thread standpoint, we're not yet seeing just how bad Scotch still is despite the removal of her memories. P-21's phantom pain is being cranked up, setting the stage for his failure of Scotch. Lacunae demonstrates the characteristics so lacking in the Goddess. P-21 shows that he cares for the oppressed, even if it's based on sex and the roles are flipped relative to Stable 99. We're introduced to the Enervation rings, and Roseluck's connection to them. Likewise, Cognitum and Smilin' Jack and the Wasteland game. Also, bondage, and Glory's affinity thereto. [Okay, that last one isn't an introduction, but it is more obvious than in the past.]
We see that Rainbow Dash is, out of the Ministry Mares, the one who appears to try hardest and care most about maintaining their bond (hardly a surprise, given her Element and general character).
There's some pretty good comedy at various points, too, and oh, that cliffhanger.
But I think the core of the chapter is Fallen Arch, and the narration at the start of the chapter that primed the reader for it. It's one of Blackjack's major failures, and P-21's as well. That failure reveals, particularly to Blackjack, just how alike she and P-21 are. To the reader, P-21's abject desperation that Blackjack know he tried to save the slaves highlights his dependency on her as a symbol of goodness for him. All the while, it eats on her as well. It focuses us on the precarious balancing act she's playing, trying not to harm those who aren't harming others, while making sure no one does hurt others, and still needing to preserve herself and her friends.
Now, the monologue at the start of the chapter got me wondering about what exactly Blackjack is trying to accomplish. Yes, there is the relatively simple level that she wants, with ponies just not making life shit for one another. But I feel like she must have in mind some system, even if that idea isn't fully formed or conscious, that would enable that to happen. And given her background and general traits, I think that that may amount to creating a world where ponies can (pretty much) be good simply by following the rules, and having the rules enforced. I guess I'm trying to think about what would be required for her to be a good pony, which she wants above almost everything else, but which would allow her not to need to make difficult decisions, which she has generally hated to do. That's not to say I think she's an authoritarian, at least not consciously; she's seen how badly that can go. Basically, I think that Blackjack hates having responsibility for her own life and her own choices, but knows that, in the Wasteland, abdicating that responsibility to the status quo would be worse than the decisions she would make. The problem is, she compares the results not to a baseline where she isn't there, but one in which she does everything perfectly (or things go better than even that), which eats her up inside.
So, is Project Horizons about the terrifying fact that we make our own choices and need to live with the consequences? That even decisions made with the best of intentions and with the best information available don't lead reliably to good outcomes? Something else related, or unrelated?
- Chapter Twenty Nine (Mostly) Editing Matters:
- I checked my PipBuck again. My eyes kept drifting to that
Only one space after the period.
A deep, reverberating roar blasting through the rain sent all of us diving for cover; frogs, leeches, and ponies alike.
I'd suggest replacing the semicolon with a comma or colon.
either it was too far away to register or it
There are two spaces between "away" and "to."
one face to the next. I didn’t see one spark
Only one space after the period.
The rain had no indication of letting up;
I think this should be "gave no indication": it is BJ and co. that had no indication the rain would let up.
had been some sort of food shop. Empty Dash inhalers, used
Three spaces after the period.
the bowl fills up. The higher you go,
Only one space after the period.
outflow pipes constantly emptying into it . Without
Space between "it" and the period.
wearing some kind of strange leather hood. A caption was written at
Three spaces after the period.
this is Vanity, so it should be okay… come on…
I think there should only be one space after the first ellipsis, or "come" should be capitalized.
Goldenblood… Princesses… Ministry Mares…. I glanced up at the picture of Rarity with her
Only need four dots after "Ministry Mares," but those should be followed by two spaces.
Okay… not quite what I was expecting.
Only need one space after this ellipsis.
his sword through Roses’ heart.
"Roses's"
A few minutes of satisfaction at the most followed by the scandal of a century and the utter disintegration of my career and reputation.
Should this be "scandal of the century"?
They were… and it was… I-“
Second hyphen for dash.
‘Silverstar Sporting Supplies.’
Period to outside of quotation marks.
‘Our founder,’ read the caption.
I think this should have the comma outside the quotation marks. I figure it reads like this:
Our founder
Sharing and caring is for suckers.
So I almost wonder if "founder" should be capitalized and there should be double-quotes inside the single quotes, giving:
Our Founder
"Sharing and caring is for suckers."
As the literal caption, though centered and possibly with a line break in the founder's quotation.
‘Wasteland, a game of western horror.’
In this context, I think "western" should be capitalized.
As ‘millions of ponies,’ you could ignore it.
But turn one of those millions into ‘Bro,’ and suddenly I was sniffing and rubbing my eyes.
Comma to outside of quotation marks.
Wait… a little pink pony clicked on a lightbulb in my mind.
Only one space after ellipsis, or "a" should be capitalized.
The lights flicked off one after the next, then music crackled and went silent.
I think this should be "one after another," but it could just be a variant on the idiom I've not heard.
There were just heaps of ruined clothes and other litter, but I kept walking Kept walking
Missing period after "walking."
teleport him outside to reopen the door. Scotch Tape was looking
Three spaces after the period.
The bigger concern was the broken bridge that had once forded the river.
"Forded" isn't quite the right word here; the more general "crossed" or the more bridge-specific "spanned" would work better.
the first fifty feet was completely open.
"were completely open"?
“Well, lets go say hello…”
"let's"
I walked towards the settlement with Taurus’ rifle beside me.
"Taurus's"
‘Fallen Arch’ appeared in my E.F.S.’ navigation
"E.F.S.s' "
They stared at each other as I stood there with rain dripping off Taurus’ barrel.
"Taurus's"
The plan now was simple: kill every last one of these fuckers before they could get to another deton- shit!
Second hyphen for dash.
keeping the rain off him. Scotch Tape was being violently
Only one space after the period.
the only guns I’d seen that were bigger had been Deus’ cannons and Gun.
"Deus's"
but P-21 didn’t say a word. He just kept
Only one space after the period.
gun/grenade launcher --seriously, how was anypony supposed to survive that thing?-- opened up with a line of explosive death.
Symmetrical spacing around dashes.
Luna’s mandate to research a ‘lets all hug’ spell.
"let's"?
and that ratty book from Rivets’ ancestor.
"Rivets's"
“Yeah. It’s a peck more responsibility than just applebuckin, that’s fer sure.”
"applebuckin' "
Well, then, I guess I’d better get back to Cloudsdayle… or something.”
30: We’d already lost Cloudsdayle.
"Cloudsdale"
we’ll all be together again.” Twilight Sparkle said
Quotation should end with comma, not period.
He had two power-armored pegasi troopers with him,
"pegasus troopers"
and then opened. A moment later, they
and immediately felt my mane start to crawl. The reception room was polished marble,
Only one space after the period.
So they didn’t like the word ‘weapon’? Surprise surprise. “What about-“
Second hyphen for dash.
The bed was the biggest thing for Glory and I to take cover behind,
"Me," not "I," unless it's an instance of her wrongly using the "right" form as is sometimes the case.
He scowled at me. “How dare you-”
Second hyphen for dash.
starting to distort. Golden seemed to be
wild barrage of red. The floor began to sag
the myriad blasts. I could do nothing
but scream. Nothing but watch as that
force grew more and more. I felt something in
my shoulder give. Tears ran down my
dangled at my side. I wondered if it
even worked anymore. I looked at her,
Only one space after the period.
horrible moment, staring into her eyes.... feeling her hoof upon mine.... and
Ellipses should only have three dots.
On an unrelated note, part of the chapter got me thinking about griffins. Is there a word, either in general or merely among the brony fandom, for a group of griffins? A quick search hasn't found a general answer, apart from suggestions of "pride" or "flock" (though it turns out a flock of eagles is a "convocation"). If there isn't one already, should one of those be used, or what do you think a good melding of the two would be? So far, the best I've come up with is "coronation of griffins," as a proud gathering [one replete with pomp and circumstance] that also incorporates their being a combination of the classical king of the beasts and king of the birds.
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Ah, thank you very much as always.Icy Shake wrote:On the Superman thing, I'll be brief and say it depends on the writer and the story. I can't see the Superman of Superman for All Seasons or All-Star Superman going that direction, and even the one of Kingdom Come went tyrannical not because of the loss of an individual, but because of the breakdown of the entire super hero system.
Anyway, I read through chapter twenty nine today, and for the first time I read as the Goddesses intended: with plenty of Wild Turkey at my side.
- Chapter Twenty Nine Running Thoughts:
Well, we get to some good internal stuff right off the bat:
I want to do the right thing. Isn’t that simple? It should be. It’s supposed to be! There are rules; you follow them. There are choices; you consider them and then make the right choice. Then you live with the consequences.
From the very beginning, Project Horizons focuses on the inadequacy of just following the rules. One of Blackjack's key character flaws, at least early on, is that she doesn't really consider the options very deeply. This is mitigated by the fact that she has a pretty good moral intuition, but not completely. The only one that really holds true within the context of the story is the need to live with the consequences of the actions you choose to take—or not to take. But of course that's the point, isn't it? The world isn't one where you can rely on others to define the right way to act, and people don't always want that responsibility for themselves; nevertheless, they must choose how they will act, whether on that basis or some other, and that will define not only the world around them, but who they are as well.
Helping those ponies against the ghouls the other day.
I honestly wasn't expecting that to be mentioned again. I'm kind of glad it was, but it's still looking like there's not going to be much in terms of grappling with the fact she almost didn't.
I want a frigging carrot thrown my way and a pat on the head and a ‘Good job, Blackjack’ for once.
This, I think, is a good encapsulation of one of Blackjack's key traits, but especially ties in with something Somber recently mentioned regarding her relationship with her mother, and how it's contributed to both her guilt complex and the related belief that she's the world's ultimate screwup (there I believe in chapter one, but more as subtext than really spelled out). Of course, that may likewise be tied to her being the "s" in her and Glory's D/s sexual relationship, which suggests to me that we may be able to add some minor Oedipal tendencies to her bag of mental abnormalities.
Not much we could do about that besides breathe through our mouths and made the best time we could.
The advice I was always given was this: breathe through your nose, as you're going to smell it either way, and that way at least you don't taste it, too.
Slowly, I crept through the rubble-choked gap between two buildings. The rain pattered off the spongy beams and decaying masonry underhoof, but besides that, silence. There was nothing on the other side of the gap except another row of decaying homes and the dark outline of a large building beyond them.
...A building that moved…
I ducked out of sight as it growled long, low, and deep. I didn’t know what it could be; I didn’t want to know. I just didn’t want it to come this way. I backed carefully away as it growled and squealed for a moment… then growled again. Could it hear us? Smell us? It rumbled as it moved… but its rumbles were growing softer.
Some great scenery here, and I like how it sets the stage for the tanks later on. Also, dollars to donuts this is the start of the reveal that Scotch isn't over the fear of machines just because her memories were removed. [Well, I guess I lost that one, unless she announces so later.]
I thought of the Marauders… Goldenblood… Princesses… Ministry Mares…. I glanced up at the picture of Rarity with her shopping bag. A spark, and the world swirled away.
That's actually a pretty clever way of doing access security on this one.
“Blackjack’s been naughty!” Scotch Tape fell over laughing. I went as red as the stripes in my mane. Dear Luna, I was sore! How could I be sore? I hadn’t done anything!
“I… it wasn’t me! They were… and it was… I-“ I finally lost the capacity to speak altogether and just stammered hopelessly, incapable of explaining.
I find this a little odd, coming from Scotch and Blackjack. I guess I can see it from Scotch, as a reaction to Blackjack's loss of control (hypocritical though that would be—*ahem* bed wetter *ahem*), but it's always seemed like Blackjack is very open and unashamed regarding sexuality. Again, it could be over the loss of control, but that seems inconsistent with her apparent defense on that basis.
Oh, well at least this is acknowledged, but I'm still not sure of the why. And Scotch wasn't, at least initially, reacting to Blackjack stumbling over herself; that hadn't happened yet.
And suddenly, I wanted to go back in time, find whatever pony had discovered this valley and thought ‘Lets live here!’, and throw buckets of ice at her head.
Chapter eleven: “The first Equestrian explorers to reach the Hoofington -bzzzzzzzt- ley were an expedition led by Prince Blueblood the Third. According to his highly questionable memoirs, he faced cannibalistic zebra pigmies, a swarm of highly territorial -kzzzt- griffins, and one ursa major. Despite his ardent claims, no proof has ever been found to substantiate -bzzt-. Upon his return to Canterlot, -kraaapop- denied his claim to the entire region, giving him a small part of the upper river valley as reward for his discovery.”
Blackjack's memory must not be great (surprise!), because I bet she'd derive great pleasure from doing that to him, especially given he seems to share some of the baser character traits of his descendent.
I levitated two hunting rifles, but two centuries in the wet had made them poor clubs, let alone firearms.
It's refreshing to see this used right: it amazes me how often writers fail to use "let alone" and "if not x" correctly.
I’d always wondered about it, but it seemed to summarize the picture perfectly: Schmuck.
Yiddish confirmed as existing in Project Horizons (if it wasn't already). But that raises the question: what would Equestrian Jews believe, and what would their history be?
Okay, right now, I was really missing a super-strong striped mare.
Has Rampage ever tried suicide through Enervation?
Rushing into the manager’s office, I looked at the terminal. The menu didn’t offer much hope. Sales figures, inventory, employee hours, messages… then I spotted, at the bottom, ‘store functions’. I scrolled down to it and clicked.
>Store automation: On
>Lights: On
>Ambiance: On
>Coffee Machine: Warning. Critical failure!
That got a real smile out of me.
The Enervation scene was both quality horror and worked well as a way of giving just hints of where the Envervation rings come from and why they were made, beyond the simple fact that they are big contributors to the problem.
She was literally dancing on her hooves.
And "literally," too? You're spoiling me.
“Look, there’s a really simple way to resolve this.” Both blinked at me; I supposed that Blackjack as the voice of reason was a little surprising. “I’ll trot up there and say hi. If they shoot at me, we’ll know that they’re bad ponies.” Like that scavenger near the MASEBS tower? I winced inwardly. “Um, if they shoot at me a lot while shouting about how they’re going to rape me or eat me or fuck me up… then we know they’re bad ponies,” I amended.
And here we kind of tie back in to the introspection at the start of the chapter. Glory's plan to just avoid them is the simplest and safest. P-21 seems to want to be confrontational, but more to the point sees doing nothing as an unacceptable option, should they be raiders, which is of course his standard response. Blackjack's answer is the good synthesis of these, but the one with the highest chance of strongly bad consequences for her in particular. Of course, at this point even more than many others, she has reason to think that she has little to lose, so if the cost of doing the right thing—by not attacking without provocation while not leaving a threat to others remain—is her life, it's not a particularly dear one. And that's before considering her guilt complex and bipolar depression.
“And you’re right; if they’re all cannibals or something, then we’ve got an obligation to prevent them from hurting anypony else. So, do either of you have an alternative?”
Ah, but the key question is why you have an obligation to do so. Rules specifying such don't exist in the Wasteland, at least absent someone to enforce them. And I'd bet that even there you wouldn't think that it would apply to everyone, just those with the capability to effect a response and have a good chance of walking away.
“I’d welcome you, but I’m afraid you’re going to have to leave here, Miss Security. You have no business being here and no right to judge us.”
Well, that would be more true before the return to 99. As for business there, it wasn't her fault she missed that the bridge was broken. Well, a hundred feet is pretty long. Maybe it was foggy.
“You killed my son just now out there, Security. And you’ve killed my daughters. You’ve destroyed my home. Just like that. Was it hard for you? Did you even work up a sweat when you came and judged us?”
During the run-up to the 1860 presidential election, Lincoln made a speech at Cooper Union which, in part, responded to the position of slave interests that if the Northerners voted Republican, they would break the Union, making secession the fault of anti-slavery advocates. He said: "That is cool. A highwayman holds a pistol to my ear, and mutters through his teeth, 'Stand and deliver, or I shall kill you, and then you will be a murderer!' "
Yeah. This reminds me of that. And you don't want to be the kind of person who does that.
His forehooves had been blown off. Blood was painted across his face. He stared up at me, tears running down his cheeks. “I tried… I really tried...” he whimpered. “I didn’t let them die, Blackjack. Please. Please believe me.”
This brought tears to my eyes. It's important, first, that P-21 reacted so even for the treatment of mares. But even more, there's his desperation that Blackjack, in particular, beleive he did all he could to save them. Which, I think, matters so much to me because of course she would believe that; he didn't even need to say anything and she never would have considered that he didn't try. It's a short and subtle reminder of just how much they rely on each other, and the importance he attaches to Blackjack as the idea of what a good pony is.
Afterwards, I had to do something for the bodies, but I was at a loss. The slavers were carrion, but their victims deserved… something! Ponies weren’t exactly flammable… there wasn’t any ground suitable for burial. The thought of dumping them into the river chilled me even more, but it might be the only thing we could do.
Then Lacunae stepped forward and her horn glowed. “What are you doing?” I asked softly.
“What a Goddess should,” she answered, and the first body lifted in her magical grip and started floating higher and higher over the river. A red light atop the massive war wall surrounding the Core grew brighter and brighter, and then a beam struck the body. For a few seconds a star burned over the river before the ash was scattered.
Then another star. Another. Another…
Another…
Lacunae was gracious enough to tend to the fallen slavers as well. She was a better pony than I.
And now we've gone to full-on crying. First, this is a beautiful scene visually. But more so, it's a reminder that gods ought to be good as well as powerful, with kindness and mercy particularly important. Interestingly, we see that Blackjack seems to operate on the system that only the living can be forgiven, which in its way makes sense—it's the basic stance of the religion I grew up with, after all. Moreover, it highlights the relative shortcomings of the Goddess to the pieces of her Unity, given freedom, and indeed the mortals of the Wasteland. Oh, and, of course, Blackjack is not a good pony.
They ought to rename Dash ‘Blackjack’, then.
Funnier, given, you know. But it seems that Dash has cooled down a bit these last couple centuries.
Of course it exploded! Everything spontaneously explodes around me! Pipes! Vertibucks! Mares! Hell, I made Deus explode twice!
I don't know if she ever said it out loud, but if not, this could be the source of her Joke.
“He’s a male. You know Flashers like to play with them before finishing them off,” Radishes commented. I gave an inward groan. Doesn’t anypony just have normal sex in this place?
*ahem* Rape was your idea of "normal" heterosexual sex until a few weeks ago.
Of course he was. Because he was just like me. Smarter, way too serious, but just like me.
Is she really only now seeing that?
Would we have had cyber alicorn dragon hybrids fighting alongside sentient megaspells against giant zebra-shaped robots?
Is anything in Blackjack dragon based? Because that's the only thing that doesn't pretty decently fit a description of her post-ressurection (Cyber? Obviously. Alicorn? Sure, if not entirely. Sentient megaspell? You bet. And we have zebra-shaped robots, but not giant ones, yet, as far as I can remember.)
We moved over to the elevator as I watched her… him... damn, where’d he learn to walk like that?... walk down towards the meeting with a casual step.
Well, at a guess I'd say from watching mares like his life depended on it. Because it did.
- Chapter Twenty Nine Overall:
What's there to say about this chapter? Well, from an ongoing thread standpoint, we're not yet seeing just how bad Scotch still is despite the removal of her memories. P-21's phantom pain is being cranked up, setting the stage for his failure of Scotch. Lacunae demonstrates the characteristics so lacking in the Goddess. P-21 shows that he cares for the oppressed, even if it's based on sex and the roles are flipped relative to Stable 99. We're introduced to the Enervation rings, and Roseluck's connection to them. Likewise, Cognitum and Smilin' Jack and the Wasteland game. Also, bondage, and Glory's affinity thereto. [Okay, that last one isn't an introduction, but it is more obvious than in the past.]
We see that Rainbow Dash is, out of the Ministry Mares, the one who appears to try hardest and care most about maintaining their bond (hardly a surprise, given her Element and general character).
There's some pretty good comedy at various points, too, and oh, that cliffhanger.
But I think the core of the chapter is Fallen Arch, and the narration at the start of the chapter that primed the reader for it. It's one of Blackjack's major failures, and P-21's as well. That failure reveals, particularly to Blackjack, just how alike she and P-21 are. To the reader, P-21's abject desperation that Blackjack know he tried to save the slaves highlights his dependency on her as a symbol of goodness for him. All the while, it eats on her as well. It focuses us on the precarious balancing act she's playing, trying not to harm those who aren't harming others, while making sure no one does hurt others, and still needing to preserve herself and her friends.
Now, the monologue at the start of the chapter got me wondering about what exactly Blackjack is trying to accomplish. Yes, there is the relatively simple level that she wants, with ponies just not making life shit for one another. But I feel like she must have in mind some system, even if that idea isn't fully formed or conscious, that would enable that to happen. And given her background and general traits, I think that that may amount to creating a world where ponies can (pretty much) be good simply by following the rules, and having the rules enforced. I guess I'm trying to think about what would be required for her to be a good pony, which she wants above almost everything else, but which would allow her not to need to make difficult decisions, which she has generally hated to do. That's not to say I think she's an authoritarian, at least not consciously; she's seen how badly that can go. Basically, I think that Blackjack hates having responsibility for her own life and her own choices, but knows that, in the Wasteland, abdicating that responsibility to the status quo would be worse than the decisions she would make. The problem is, she compares the results not to a baseline where she isn't there, but one in which she does everything perfectly (or things go better than even that), which eats her up inside.
So, is Project Horizons about the terrifying fact that we make our own choices and need to live with the consequences? That even decisions made with the best of intentions and with the best information available don't lead reliably to good outcomes? Something else related, or unrelated?
- Chapter Twenty Nine (Mostly) Editing Matters:
I checked my PipBuck again. My eyes kept drifting to that
Only one space after the period.
A deep, reverberating roar blasting through the rain sent all of us diving for cover; frogs, leeches, and ponies alike.
I'd suggest replacing the semicolon with a comma or colon.
either it was too far away to register or it
There are two spaces between "away" and "to."
one face to the next. I didn’t see one spark
Only one space after the period.
The rain had no indication of letting up;
I think this should be "gave no indication": it is BJ and co. that had no indication the rain would let up.
had been some sort of food shop. Empty Dash inhalers, used
Three spaces after the period.
the bowl fills up. The higher you go,
Only one space after the period.
outflow pipes constantly emptying into it . Without
Space between "it" and the period.
wearing some kind of strange leather hood. A caption was written at
Three spaces after the period.
this is Vanity, so it should be okay… come on…
I think there should only be one space after the first ellipsis, or "come" should be capitalized.
Goldenblood… Princesses… Ministry Mares…. I glanced up at the picture of Rarity with her
Only need four dots after "Ministry Mares," but those should be followed by two spaces.
Okay… not quite what I was expecting.
Only need one space after this ellipsis.
his sword through Roses’ heart.
"Roses's"
A few minutes of satisfaction at the most followed by the scandal of a century and the utter disintegration of my career and reputation.
Should this be "scandal of the century"?
They were… and it was… I-“
Second hyphen for dash.
‘Silverstar Sporting Supplies.’
Period to outside of quotation marks.
‘Our founder,’ read the caption.
I think this should have the comma outside the quotation marks. I figure it reads like this:
Our founder
Sharing and caring is for suckers.
So I almost wonder if "founder" should be capitalized and there should be double-quotes inside the single quotes, giving:
Our Founder
"Sharing and caring is for suckers."
As the literal caption, though centered and possibly with a line break in the founder's quotation.
‘Wasteland, a game of western horror.’
In this context, I think "western" should be capitalized.
As ‘millions of ponies,’ you could ignore it.
But turn one of those millions into ‘Bro,’ and suddenly I was sniffing and rubbing my eyes.
Comma to outside of quotation marks.
Wait… a little pink pony clicked on a lightbulb in my mind.
Only one space after ellipsis, or "a" should be capitalized.
The lights flicked off one after the next, then music crackled and went silent.
I think this should be "one after another," but it could just be a variant on the idiom I've not heard.
There were just heaps of ruined clothes and other litter, but I kept walking Kept walking
Missing period after "walking."
teleport him outside to reopen the door. Scotch Tape was looking
Three spaces after the period.
The bigger concern was the broken bridge that had once forded the river.
"Forded" isn't quite the right word here; the more general "crossed" or the more bridge-specific "spanned" would work better.
the first fifty feet was completely open.
"were completely open"?
“Well, lets go say hello…”
"let's"
I walked towards the settlement with Taurus’ rifle beside me.
"Taurus's"
‘Fallen Arch’ appeared in my E.F.S.’ navigation
"E.F.S.s' "
They stared at each other as I stood there with rain dripping off Taurus’ barrel.
"Taurus's"
The plan now was simple: kill every last one of these fuckers before they could get to another deton- shit!
Second hyphen for dash.
keeping the rain off him. Scotch Tape was being violently
Only one space after the period.
the only guns I’d seen that were bigger had been Deus’ cannons and Gun.
"Deus's"
but P-21 didn’t say a word. He just kept
Only one space after the period.
gun/grenade launcher --seriously, how was anypony supposed to survive that thing?-- opened up with a line of explosive death.
Symmetrical spacing around dashes.
Luna’s mandate to research a ‘lets all hug’ spell.
"let's"?
and that ratty book from Rivets’ ancestor.
"Rivets's"
“Yeah. It’s a peck more responsibility than just applebuckin, that’s fer sure.”
"applebuckin' "
Well, then, I guess I’d better get back to Cloudsdayle… or something.”
30: We’d already lost Cloudsdayle.
"Cloudsdale"
we’ll all be together again.” Twilight Sparkle said
Quotation should end with comma, not period.
He had two power-armored pegasi troopers with him,
"pegasus troopers"
and then opened. A moment later, they
and immediately felt my mane start to crawl. The reception room was polished marble,
Only one space after the period.
So they didn’t like the word ‘weapon’? Surprise surprise. “What about-“
Second hyphen for dash.
The bed was the biggest thing for Glory and I to take cover behind,
"Me," not "I," unless it's an instance of her wrongly using the "right" form as is sometimes the case.
He scowled at me. “How dare you-”
Second hyphen for dash.
starting to distort. Golden seemed to be
wild barrage of red. The floor began to sag
the myriad blasts. I could do nothing
but scream. Nothing but watch as that
force grew more and more. I felt something in
my shoulder give. Tears ran down my
dangled at my side. I wondered if it
even worked anymore. I looked at her,
Only one space after the period.
horrible moment, staring into her eyes.... feeling her hoof upon mine.... and
Ellipses should only have three dots.
On an unrelated note, part of the chapter got me thinking about griffins. Is there a word, either in general or merely among the brony fandom, for a group of griffins? A quick search hasn't found a general answer, apart from suggestions of "pride" or "flock" (though it turns out a flock of eagles is a "convocation"). If there isn't one already, should one of those be used, or what do you think a good melding of the two would be? So far, the best I've come up with is "coronation of griffins," as a proud gathering [one replete with pomp and circumstance] that also incorporates their being a combination of the classical king of the beasts and king of the birds.
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so, snipehamster left the editing team
"Snipehamster -- 11/3/13 -- Due to internal disagreements, I’ve resigned from the editing team. Ownership of this document has been passed to Somber."
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Wasn't that a while ago?
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considering this was marked for today i would guess there have been issues in the past that have led up to this point
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Euro dating method (DD/MM/YYYY), broseph. You just got real lucky seeing it today.
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Yep.Caoimhe wrote:Euro dating method (DD/MM/YYYY), broseph. You just got real lucky seeing it today.
Kippershy wrote:Nope, it's just in British format.
11/3/13 is March 11th.
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The reason this makes us laugh is you don't realize that Cloudsville splits threads when they exceed 34 pages, and this thread here is the tenth or twelfth split (conservatively) since we started posting here.Adalbertus wrote:But this thread is so long I'm not going to read it grom the start.
And we started posting here because we overflowed the maximum comment count on the Equestria Daily project horizons post and hard locked it. Twice.
Basically, it does seem like pregnancy is the explanation, but unclear as to who. It could be Blackjack, who trusts an implant that frankly might not work properly with all her cyborging, if it's even still inside her and not scooped out along with the parts they replaced. She might have toxin filters that assess the implant's anti pregnancy chems as hostile and filter them, or hormone control circuits that ignore or override the implant's effect.Hardware malfunction during sexy times with P-21 and Glory?
I don't recall if Glory had an implant or not in the first place, since she always figured her gayness made that kind of unnecessary. If she did have one, the Dash body could have affected that, even if the killing joke didn't directly.
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These days that would end up on Maury, but it's really the same difference. Rampage would be in the audience just to stir up the drama more haha.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
This is the 23rd thread. Each thread has 991 posts, so in total there have been 22,173 posts in the [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion thread. Of course, many of those posts were completely off topic, which eventually prompted the creation of the [Officail!] Project Horizons Comment Crew Chat thread. thread. Coincidentally, the chat thread is on its 23rd iteration, and has at time of writing a total of 22,832 posts. And just for completeness's sake, before EqD accidentally shuffled the old Blogger comment system somewhere inaccessible on its servers, there were three comment archives completely filled to their capacity of 5,000 comments, for another total of 15,000 comments. And another 478 + 4 comments in the newer Intense Debate system.FeatherDust wrote:this thread here is the tenth or twelfth split (conservatively) since we started posting here.
Also, the crazy theorist wants to say that perhaps there is no pregnancy... yet!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Nope, they're the same.Evilgidgit wrote:Speaking of canon, or at least Fallout Equestria canon, perhaps you kind bronies could help clear this up for me - is the Battle for Shattered Hoof Ridge where Big Macintosh died, or were those events separate? The Fallout Equestria Wiki says they're different, but I'm not so sure.
“From the tales I have been told, peace was what was hoped, but there could only be peace if Nightmare Moon was removed. Unfortunately, the ponies sent the wrong Princess to Shattered Hoof Ridge.”
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Correct me if I'm wrong but didn't Glory say something about a serf being raped in the society and how it occurred in the enclave too?Chapter 60 wrote:just trying to keep from being robbed, raped, or ripped in two.
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Sort of.Last wrote:Correct me if I'm wrong but didn't Glory say something about a serf being raped in the society and how it occurred in the enclave too?Chapter 60 wrote:just trying to keep from being robbed, raped, or ripped in two.
“Consensual! When you control every part of a pony’s life, where precisely does consent come into it?” he spat at her, making her back up as he trotted over to me.
So it wasn't as cut and dried as gun to her head, but rather a potential coercion by abuse of authority. I say "potential" because it's hard to judge that kind of case -- it's possible that she really had taken a shine to one of the overseers, or was deliberately trying to sleep her way to better living conditions. Or maybe it was exactly what P-21 thought. (This is why workplace romance is usually a really bad idea.)
The passage you're thinking of is:
“Oh yeah? Do your supervisors force workers to fuck them?” P-21 asked as he rounded on her.
“Some do, yes. And when they’re caught, they’re punished,” Glory answered him plainly.
So obviously the Enclave at least has rules against that sort of thing. However....
Grace turned even redder before she looked me boldly in the eye. “If that’s the case, he’ll be stripped of his authority."
So does the Society, it would seem.
While rape still exists in these situations, in the Society and Enclave, there's at least a base coat of civility and security involved, and the workers theoretically have some sort of recourse. That might be a slim comfort, but it's better than what raiders would do. Which, I admit, is a bit like saying it's better to get shot through the leg than the heart. It's still abominable, but the wasteland seems to excel in offering you the choice of which grade of 'horrible' to expose yourself to.
...anyway, the residents of Thunderhead aren't working at farming settlements.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Ch. 55 wrote:“Are you okay?” Eclipse asked as she knelt beside him. He glanced up in time to see the glittering mesh descend down and land firmly atop her inky head. Suddenly the machine let out a massive mechanical shriek, and the screens went wild.
Ch. 26 wrote:A housing burst apart as the metallic guts spilled out, rearranging themselves and creeping towards us. Green lightning flickered and danced along the writhing mechanical surfaces as they formed claws and tendrils.
“GIVE IT TO ME!” those thousand voices screamed at once.
That was a face… the machines were forming a massive pony face! It was slowly pushing out of the machinery as if the gargantuan monster was being birthed from the equipment. Green light blazed from its eyes as it opened its mouth and vomited dozens of electrical cables that crackled and snaked towards us.
Huh... I wonder...Ch. 26 wrote:Spell Matrix 7> Details: Come to Life Spell. ERROR. Data Corrupted.
P.S. In that first quote, there should be a comma after "suddenly".
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At 26p. It's a big horrible chapter. I don't want to split it in two. I want the Thunderhead arc over with and then into the Core and Finale.... uuugh...
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