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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Just a reminder to all the new folks on lately
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Exodus Hero wrote:I honestly thought that was an axe for a good long while and kept staring at it wondering why she was holding an axe until it hit me that it was a flag.
Ironically, one of my iterations of my namesake character used an axe as their weapon of choice.SilentCarto wrote:If your axe flaps in the breeze, you're doing it wrong.
Just sayin'.
But indeed, it's supposed to be a flag, not a bendy axe. A flag with Somber's cutie mark, and silver highlighting added to the edges of the cloud, because of symbolism that honestly I'm a bit dodgy on whether it's true or not...
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So I looked at the PH page on TV tropes today and HOLY FUDGE-MACKERAL, IT'S HUGE!
Take a few seconds to scroll to the bottom. It's basically the same size as the FoE entry. (Both are around 12,000 words according to the wordcount in Microsoft Word.)
Take a few seconds to scroll to the bottom. It's basically the same size as the FoE entry. (Both are around 12,000 words according to the wordcount in Microsoft Word.)
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This is pretty relevant to PH, so I'm posting it here, but it's not directly related.
Margaret Atwood's writing a serialized novel called Positron. I'm reading it. It's pretty dang good so far. How's it related to PH? Well, the setting's quite reminiscent of one of a Stable, actually, one of those "make a better society" experiments that just isn't quite on. It's got some themes of 99 specifically, too - check it out if you're in the mood, the segments aren't too long and there are like three out. It's cheap, too.
Anyway, another thing - Somber, if you like publishing serially, it's potentially becoming a thing again.
Margaret Atwood's writing a serialized novel called Positron. I'm reading it. It's pretty dang good so far. How's it related to PH? Well, the setting's quite reminiscent of one of a Stable, actually, one of those "make a better society" experiments that just isn't quite on. It's got some themes of 99 specifically, too - check it out if you're in the mood, the segments aren't too long and there are like three out. It's cheap, too.
Anyway, another thing - Somber, if you like publishing serially, it's potentially becoming a thing again.
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You know, it just hit me.
- Spoiler:
- Littlepip is a descendant of the Apple family.
AFAIK, Blackjack is descended from Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh, with Marigold as a surrogate mother for the foal.
Which means... hahahah! Blackjack got liquored up and kissed her distant cousin on the mouth!
Actually, that's not fair. I think every pony in Equestria must be related to the Apples, somehow. They really, really got around.
That must be why ponies are so damned hard to kill. They're like those invincible inbreds from Wrong Turn.
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So I'm-a-browsing through the Hightower arc and I notice Blackjack gets a security footage blackout when she unseals Eternity from a terminal. Does anyone else remember the other instances of the camera things (which I'm assuming are related to the spy program in her head)? Were these always triggered by... interaction with technology? Use of EC-1101? Any connection?
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Train I'm also pretty sure that they... consummated their friendship in 34/35, going on what Homage implies. Guess we can add incest to that list Tytan made.
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Downloaded Skill wrote:Train I'm also pretty sure that they... consummated their friendship in 34/35, going on what Homage implies. Guess we can add incest to that list Tytan made.
This just got very disturbing.
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Minor error in Chapter 46:
“Buck up, soldier! Equestria wasn’t won by bellyaching!” Cerberus said he floated beneath the doorway.
He said he floated beneath the doorway, so floated beneath the doorway should really be in quotation marks.
“Buck up, soldier! Equestria wasn’t won by bellyaching!” Cerberus said he floated beneath the doorway.
He said he floated beneath the doorway, so floated beneath the doorway should really be in quotation marks.
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Ah, thank you.Meleagridis wrote:Minor error in Chapter 46:
“Buck up, soldier! Equestria wasn’t won by bellyaching!” Cerberus said he floated beneath the doorway.
He said he floated beneath the doorway, so floated beneath the doorway should really be in quotation marks.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Their respective stables were probably significantly more incestuous than any sex the two protagonists may or may not have had.Exodus Hero wrote:Downloaded Skill wrote:Train I'm also pretty sure that they... consummated their friendship in 34/35, going on what Homage implies. Guess we can add incest to that list Tytan made.
This just got very disturbing.
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Granted any Stable that lasted long enough probably reached the point where you was lucky if whoever you ended up with wasn't any closer then being a third or second cousin on either side of the family.
And short of a Stable that quite literally only had one family, Stable 2 was probably the most inbred since it's stated in story most of the ponies that was in there was Apple family members. Granted that could just mean ponies who are only related by name alone rather than genetics but still.
That said, and this is going from my horrible memory, there wasn't much stock taken in Littlepip's heritage to the point where if anybody cared she may be the direct decedent of Applejack it didn't pop up in story. Or it was over shadowed by Velvet being Sweetie Bell's decedent.
So as far as kissing cousins, it's way less squicky than the royal families of Europe at one point in history.
And short of a Stable that quite literally only had one family, Stable 2 was probably the most inbred since it's stated in story most of the ponies that was in there was Apple family members. Granted that could just mean ponies who are only related by name alone rather than genetics but still.
That said, and this is going from my horrible memory, there wasn't much stock taken in Littlepip's heritage to the point where if anybody cared she may be the direct decedent of Applejack it didn't pop up in story. Or it was over shadowed by Velvet being Sweetie Bell's decedent.
So as far as kissing cousins, it's way less squicky than the royal families of Europe at one point in history.
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Moodyman90 wrote:
...So as far as kissing cousins, it's way less squicky than the royal families of Europe at one point in history.
Key example, Cesare and Lucrezia Borgia.
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Since Mel mentioned an error, I thought I'd chip in, too:
When I proofread documents, I catch everything.
- Chapter 1:
- [It was mostly recycled food chips and old drink bulbs, though I liked to pretend that some of the open bottles on the dresser were some sort of fermentation experiment…. Maybe a pet?]
Ellipsis followed by a period and then a capitalized sentence. Possible fixes:
[some sort of fermentation experiment. Maybe a pet?]
[some sort of fermentation experiment… maybe a pet?]
[A mare could dream… My horn glowed white as my magic lifted my uniform from one of the heaps.]
Double-spaced and capitalized sentence after ellipsis. To fix, either replace the ellipsis with a period, or decapitalize the sentence that follows.
[In theory, I was supposed to discourage this kind of thing. However, it fucking sucked being the mare who was suppose to discourage this kind of thing.]
Typo: "suppose" > "supposed"
[and a lot of the security mares got really...enthusiastic about it]
No space after ellipsis.
[All the way back to the legendary Card Trick, the one who’d carved ‘Security: we save ponies’ above the entrance to the security level.]
Since this is a motto, they'd probably capitalize it as though it were a title, as in: 'Security: We Save Ponies'.
[“So, there I was, pondering and bemoaning my fate, when I remembered a certain vision of angelic equinity whose magic far outshines my own and who’s kindness and generosity would surely compel her to free me from my predicament!” I said, grinning ear to ear as I fluttered my eyes at Midnight.]
Typo: "who's" > "whose"
[“Ohhh! Ohhh! Pick me! Can I do it?” Daisy asked with a grin, waiving her hoof in the air. Gin Rummy did not share her humor.]
I can see it now; Daisy, in effect, forfeited her hoof. It flew off and smacked Marm in the head.
*ahem*
Typo: "waiving" > "waving".
[The recycling systems were all found down here, as were the the magical generators that kept everything going.]
Typo: "the the" > "the"
[And one more thing I could do with telekinesis: with a another thought, I triggered my PipBuck’s ‘Stable-Tec Assisted Targeting System’.]
Typo: "a another" > "another"
[Stable-Tec! Going outside! This was huge! Epic! A real game changer! With Stable-Tec here, all the Overmare and Rivet’s ponyshit didn’t matter. Maybe I wouldn’t have to be security anymore. Maybe…]
Typo: "Rivet's" > "Rivets'" OR "Rivets's"
[Then she was on top of me, drawing a rusty carving knife from a sheathe at her shoulder.]
Typo: "sheathe" > "sheath"
[Then there was the resounding sound of a gunshot in the halls. and a hoof-sized hole appeared in his chest.]
Might want to remove that period.
[“It’s pretty reliable death in here, Mom. Erm… I mean… miss head security mare… ma’am…” I fumbled, blushing a little.]
As this is a title, each word should be capitalized.
[Hell, I didn’t even have a weapon. “It’s me,”I said, encouraged by the lack of gunfire.]
Missing space between the dialogue and the tag.
[I watched in horrified fascination at his head detached completely and he dropped like a sack of meat.]
Typo: "at" > "as"
[What? I shook my head; this was Marmalade, after all. “Nevermind. Is it transferred?”]
Unless this is a reference to the Nirvana album, "Nevermind" should be two words, but I suppose this one's optional.
[A minute later, the desk closed behind us as another impact reverberated through the stable. We moved down hall to a second door, and I used the code again.]
Should be "down the hall".
* * * * * * *
Some other things I noticed:
- Lots and lots of ellipses. Some are three periods, as in "...", whereas the vast majority are the special ellipsis character "…" that MS Word barfs out automatically when you put a space after three periods. Both types number 293 in total, or an average of one every 77 words. Some are fine. Others, in my opinion, reduce the impact and mar the flow of the text. Some ellipses don't have spaces after them, while a couple others are followed by capitalized sentences.
- Double hyphens, as in "--", are used in place of em dashes.
- Sentences are double-spaced and in some cases triple-spaced. They are occasionally single-spaced, especially in the case of dialogue/action tags, but not always. It would be better to stick with one kind of sentence spacing, but most readers won't be able to tell the difference.
- A few completely discretionary grammar, word usage and style issues; when you consider the identity of the narrator, it's not all that odd to see a narrative that's short a few syllables every now and then. You can't make the prose too flowery or too accurate, or else Blackjack ceases to be Blackjack.
But, I decided to skip all that in favor of pointing out the more obvious errors, because otherwise, not only would this post be downright labyrinthine, but the formatting in the rest of the chapters would have to be updated to match. A nightmarish task, by any measure.
* * * * * * *
There were a lot of things I loved about this chapter. The foreshadowing. The increasing severity of the rule violations Blackjack calls out, from class C, to B, to A. The irony inherent in the motto "we save ponies". The contrast between the way Blackjack minces words with P-21 and how Daisy comes out of practically nowhere with Marmalade in tow and bluntly reduces him to "missing penis". The introduction of Deus and EC-1101. The way Blackjack unknowingly guesses the real name of her nemesis. It's fantastic.
When I proofread documents, I catch everything.
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Ah, thank you.Train Dodger wrote:Since Mel mentioned an error, I thought I'd chip in, too:
- Chapter 1:
[It was mostly recycled food chips and old drink bulbs, though I liked to pretend that some of the open bottles on the dresser were some sort of fermentation experiment…. Maybe a pet?]
Ellipsis followed by a period and then a capitalized sentence. Possible fixes:
[some sort of fermentation experiment. Maybe a pet?]
[some sort of fermentation experiment… maybe a pet?]
[A mare could dream… My horn glowed white as my magic lifted my uniform from one of the heaps.]
Double-spaced and capitalized sentence after ellipsis. To fix, either replace the ellipsis with a period, or decapitalize the sentence that follows.
[In theory, I was supposed to discourage this kind of thing. However, it fucking sucked being the mare who was suppose to discourage this kind of thing.]
Typo: "suppose" > "supposed"
[and a lot of the security mares got really...enthusiastic about it]
No space after ellipsis.
[All the way back to the legendary Card Trick, the one who’d carved ‘Security: we save ponies’ above the entrance to the security level.]
Since this is a motto, they'd probably capitalize it as though it were a title, as in: 'Security: We Save Ponies'.
[“So, there I was, pondering and bemoaning my fate, when I remembered a certain vision of angelic equinity whose magic far outshines my own and who’s kindness and generosity would surely compel her to free me from my predicament!” I said, grinning ear to ear as I fluttered my eyes at Midnight.]
Typo: "who's" > "whose"
[“Ohhh! Ohhh! Pick me! Can I do it?” Daisy asked with a grin, waiving her hoof in the air. Gin Rummy did not share her humor.]
I can see it now; Daisy, in effect, forfeited her hoof. It flew off and smacked Marm in the head.
*ahem*
Typo: "waiving" > "waving".
[The recycling systems were all found down here, as were the the magical generators that kept everything going.]
Typo: "the the" > "the"
[And one more thing I could do with telekinesis: with a another thought, I triggered my PipBuck’s ‘Stable-Tec Assisted Targeting System’.]
Typo: "a another" > "another"
[Stable-Tec! Going outside! This was huge! Epic! A real game changer! With Stable-Tec here, all the Overmare and Rivet’s ponyshit didn’t matter. Maybe I wouldn’t have to be security anymore. Maybe…]
Typo: "Rivet's" > "Rivets'" OR "Rivets's"
[Then she was on top of me, drawing a rusty carving knife from a sheathe at her shoulder.]
Typo: "sheathe" > "sheath"
[Then there was the resounding sound of a gunshot in the halls. and a hoof-sized hole appeared in his chest.]
Might want to remove that period.
[“It’s pretty reliable death in here, Mom. Erm… I mean… miss head security mare… ma’am…” I fumbled, blushing a little.]
As this is a title, each word should be capitalized.
[Hell, I didn’t even have a weapon. “It’s me,”I said, encouraged by the lack of gunfire.]
Missing space between the dialogue and the tag.
[I watched in horrified fascination at his head detached completely and he dropped like a sack of meat.]
Typo: "at" > "as"
[What? I shook my head; this was Marmalade, after all. “Nevermind. Is it transferred?”]
Unless this is a reference to the Nirvana album, "Nevermind" should be two words, but I suppose this one's optional.
[A minute later, the desk closed behind us as another impact reverberated through the stable. We moved down hall to a second door, and I used the code again.]
Should be "down the hall".
* * * * * * *
Some other things I noticed:
- Lots and lots of ellipses. Some are three periods, as in "...", whereas the vast majority are the special ellipsis character "…" that MS Word barfs out automatically when you put a space after three periods. Both types number 293 in total, or an average of one every 77 words. Some are fine. Others, in my opinion, reduce the impact and mar the flow of the text. Some ellipses don't have spaces after them, while a couple others are followed by capitalized sentences.
- Double hyphens, as in "--", are used in place of em dashes.
- Sentences are double-spaced and in some cases triple-spaced. They are occasionally single-spaced, especially in the case of dialogue/action tags, but not always. It would be better to stick with one kind of sentence spacing, but most readers won't be able to tell the difference.
- A few completely discretionary grammar, word usage and style issues; when you consider the identity of the narrator, it's not all that odd to see a narrative that's short a few syllables every now and then. You can't make the prose too flowery or too accurate, or else Blackjack ceases to be Blackjack.
But, I decided to skip all that in favor of pointing out the more obvious errors, because otherwise, not only would this post be downright labyrinthine, but the formatting in the rest of the chapters would have to be updated to match. A nightmarish task, by any measure.
* * * * * * *
There were a lot of things I loved about this chapter. The foreshadowing. The increasing severity of the rule violations Blackjack calls out, from class C, to B, to A. The irony inherent in the motto "we save ponies". The contrast between the way Blackjack minces words with P-21 and how Daisy comes out of practically nowhere with Marmalade in tow and bluntly reduces him to "missing penis". The introduction of Deus and EC-1101. The way Blackjack unknowingly guesses the real name of her nemesis. It's fantastic.
When I proofread documents, I catch everything.
- Spoiler:
- "Nevermind" and the end-sentence ellipses are stylistic choices (and I'm not actually sure that either is incorrect).
The number of ellipses isn't my department.
Bronode knows some Gdocs wizardry to turn em dashes written with double hyphens into solid em dashes, but I don't know it (and it's not that important; while it would be good to have stylistic consistency, the writing is still valid and the meaning clear).
Non-double-spaced sentences are typos, I'm afraid.
I'm glad that you enjoyed rereading it. :)
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Only thing I know about ellipses is that it's best to stick to just three dots and three dots alone if you're going to use them at all.
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Correct, an ellipse only has three dots and there's no reason to put another period after one.Moodyman90 wrote:Only thing I know about ellipses is that it's best to stick to just three dots and three dots alone if you're going to use them at all.
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stringtheory wrote:Correct, an ellipse only has three dots and there's no reason to put another period after one.Moodyman90 wrote:Only thing I know about ellipses is that it's best to stick to just three dots and three dots alone if you're going to use them at all.
True, but if you are using the ellipsis to indicate omitted words immediately following the end of a sentence ending with a period (which, admittedly, is not the usage here), then there is reason to put an ellipsis following a period, still getting you four consecutive dots—though it could look different depending on whether you use one or two spaces following a period and whether the ellipsis is made manually (with or without internal spacing) or if an ellipsis character is used (for instance, "[word]. . . . [New sentence]" vs. "[word]. . . . [New sentence]").
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True, though like you said, that isn't the usage here.Icy Shake wrote:stringtheory wrote:Correct, an ellipse only has three dots and there's no reason to put another period after one.Moodyman90 wrote:Only thing I know about ellipses is that it's best to stick to just three dots and three dots alone if you're going to use them at all.
True, but if you are using the ellipsis to indicate omitted words immediately following the end of a sentence ending with a period (which, admittedly, is not the usage here), then there is reason to put an ellipsis following a period, still getting you four consecutive dots—though it could look different depending on whether you use one or two spaces following a period and whether the ellipsis is made manually (with or without internal spacing) or if an ellipsis character is used (for instance, "[word]. . . . [New sentence]" vs. "[word]. . . . [New sentence]").
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The board actually collapses multiple consecutive spaces into one, so your 'vs' there looks the same on both sides.Icy Shake wrote:it could look different depending on whether you use one or two spaces following a period and whether the ellipsis is made manually (with or without internal spacing) or if an ellipsis character is used (for instance, "[word]. . . . [New sentence]" vs. "[word]. . . . [New sentence]").
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FeatherDust wrote:The board actually collapses multiple consecutive spaces into one, so your 'vs' there looks the same on both sides.Icy Shake wrote:it could look different depending on whether you use one or two spaces following a period and whether the ellipsis is made manually (with or without internal spacing) or if an ellipsis character is used (for instance, "[word]. . . . [New sentence]" vs. "[word]. . . . [New sentence]").
Curses—foiled again!
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Oh crap, I just remembered. You know how we were talking about a theme song for Blackjack? This one makes my eyes well up with tears every single time I hear it.
I had this one playing on a custom MP3 radio station mod in Fallout 3. It's like a punch in the gut when you approach the outskirts of Old Olney and this starts playing. You mercilessly slaughter a few Deathclaws with your giant arsenal, and then, when you look upon the corpses of a few innocent genetically-engineered animals that just wanted to be left the hell alone, you wonder, what the hell is it all for, anyway?
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I had this one playing on a custom MP3 radio station mod in Fallout 3. It's like a punch in the gut when you approach the outskirts of Old Olney and this starts playing. You mercilessly slaughter a few Deathclaws with your giant arsenal, and then, when you look upon the corpses of a few innocent genetically-engineered animals that just wanted to be left the hell alone, you wonder, what the hell is it all for, anyway?
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The board preserves the spaces just fine. It's a feature of HTML thats removing them.FeatherDust wrote:The board actually collapses multiple consecutive spaces into one, so your 'vs' there looks the same on both sides.
You can use to create multiple spaces. And you should also use … for the proper ellipsis character. (... vs. …)
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Train Dodger wrote:Oh crap, I just remembered. You know how we were talking about a theme song for Blackjack? This one makes my eyes well up with tears every single time I hear it.
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I had this one playing on a custom MP3 radio station mod in Fallout 3. It's like a punch in the gut when you approach the outskirts of Old Olney and this starts playing. You mercilessly slaughter a few Deathclaws with your giant arsenal, and then, when you look upon the corpses of a few innocent genetically-engineered animals that just wanted to be left the hell alone, you wonder, what the hell is it all for, anyway?
Angels of Light are an amazing band, actually they're a side project of my brother and I's favourite band, Swans. I think I actually posted one of the tracks here saying it'd be a good PH tune. How about that?
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...in fallout 2, there were intelligent deathclaws and, per the fallout bible, once those died off, the rest are just animals.
Do you also feel guilty about bloat flies? Rad roaches? Giant scorpions and Yao guai?
It's Fallout. I feel a little bad for everything. In the end we still have to shoot them in the head, but doesn't mean we can't feel sorry for them Excepting radroaches. They're... they're giant cockroaches. I'm pretty sure insects got the long straw during the apocalypse, the best lot. Then again, they wouldn't really have high standards.
One of the Fallout Bible people was asked about Goris and the other potentially alive intelligent deathclaw. I can't remember his exact quote, but it was something along the lines of, "He died, along with every other talking animal, plant, and silly, ridiculous thing in Fallout 1 and 2." Which I thought was hilarious.
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Man, I felt bad for radroaches. It was like... I'm walking along, sledgehammer in hand, and I see a few roaches. They're worth negligible experience, and I'm not so starved that roachmeat's lookin' appetizing. But the poor blighters see me, and some teeny tiny irradiated cluster of nerves that has the dubious honor of being called "brain" decides that the human strolling along the waterfront would make a good meal. So, y'know... one or two swings later, and there's a lot of roach goop splattered everywhere. I can't not feel bad for 'em - they had better chances of survival when they just scrambled for the nearest hole in the wall upon seeing a human. Truly, the roach's is a cruel lot.
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We've made a relatively minor change to Chapter 39:
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"“He was sentenced to execution… after being mentally rendered by MoM’s finest interrogators, of course. That was when he finally cracked. He screamed and railed about conspiracies and deception as he was dragged away. I wasn’t there, but I heard that he was ranting about Horse and the Ministry Mares and ancient zebra plots and Nightmare Moon. Completely spit his bit. I would have given a hoof to see it myself,” Sanguine chuckled, grinning at the memory before he sighed and added, “Unfortunately, the very next day, the bombs fell and the pink cloud consumed Canterlot.”"
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"“He was sentenced to execution… after being mentally rendered by MoM’s finest interrogators, of course. That was when he finally cracked. He screamed and railed about conspiracies and deception as he was dragged away. I wasn’t there, but I heard that he was ranting about Horse and the Ministry Mares and ancient zebra plots and Nightmare Moon. Completely spit his bit,” Sanguine chuckled, grinning at the memory before he sighed and added, “Unfortunately, I had an important meeting on the same day of the execution and couldn't find a way to get out of it and attend. The meeting didn't end up mattering anyway; the bombs fell the very next day.”"
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Indeed, looking up at the song's lyrics, I could see it fit as a theme song of sort for BlackJack.Train Dodger wrote:Oh crap, I just remembered. You know how we were talking about a theme song for Blackjack? This one makes my eyes well up with tears every single time I hear it.
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I had this one playing on a custom MP3 radio station mod in Fallout 3. It's like a punch in the gut when you approach the outskirts of Old Olney and this starts playing. You mercilessly slaughter a few Deathclaws with your giant arsenal, and then, when you look upon the corpses of a few innocent genetically-engineered animals that just wanted to be left the hell alone, you wonder, what the hell is it all for, anyway?
- lyrics:
- Here she comes dressed in white
Her mouth is filled with flames
Her skin is black, her fingers trace
The diamonds in her veins
Here she comes down from the sun
To wash this country clean
Comes down for us, down from the dust
To murder what remains
Here she comes now dressed in red
To heal this ruined race
I know somewhere, where there's a god
He's lying at her feet
And we'll walk freely through the mountains and the trees
And we'll breathe deep again where the air is pure and clean
And we will drink freely from the milk of our revenge
And we will break down the prison gates that keep you in
So please show no pity as we come up from the ground
And please remember as you kill us and cut us down
That time will not wash clean the bloody face of history
And someone will breathe here again and they will hate you for what you leave
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I hope he doesn't have much say in said bible, because in my opinion, the overall silliness of Fallout's setting along with its (more often than not dark) humor is what makes the games work for me.Meleagridis wrote:One of the Fallout Bible people was asked about Goris and the other potentially alive intelligent deathclaw. I can't remember his exact quote, but it was something along the lines of, "He died, along with every other talking animal, plant, and silly, ridiculous thing in Fallout 1 and 2." Which I thought was hilarious.
I mean, if I want gritty post-apocalyptic I'll play Metro 2033 or Stalker.
Fallout in my opinion is meant to be silly.
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First time poster here, I just wanted to ask if I'm the only one who thinks Rampage needs a tumblr or something? She's so damn awesome. I'm no artist, however. :(
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