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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
The fire wasn't actually prewar, was it? Are you thinking of something else?Meleagridis wrote:Can anyone recall if there was any reference in the story to pre-war Hoofington? Other than the fire and the ancient zebra cults, is there any mention of it?
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O. Hinds wrote:
The fire wasn't actually prewar, was it? Are you thinking of something else?
Right, right. Zebras did that. Simply forgot. Perhaps what I should be asking about is Hoofington before the fire, specifically.
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Project Horizons Index Page wrote:Chapter 52 - Reunions [Coming Soon]
“I put two and two and two together and it added up to Matilda!”
To save folk the trouble of looking it up, the quote is from Pinkie after she finds Matilda for Cranky.
Who did we conclude we'd be seeing again? Because I get the feeling it's time for some sort of reunion.
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@meleagridis
I'm guessing Glory's parents.
I'm guessing Glory's parents.
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We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
- Spoiler:
- Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.
The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”
“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
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i love the lift raising and lowering its hilarious
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O. Hinds wrote:We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
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Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
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- PH Ch 39 wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and knocked it end over end down the slope. I didn’t stop though, driving the elevator all the way down till it crunched the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug. I raised the lift and lowered it several times, listening to it crunch a little bit more. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
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Perplexing indeed.scootayay wrote:O. Hinds wrote:We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
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Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.Changed parts are bold for your convenience. That change is actually damn interesting and probably threw all the previous speculations about the cyberdaemon off by a mile.
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PH Ch 39 wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and knocked it end over end down the slope. I didn’t stop though, driving the elevator all the way down till it crunched the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug. I raised the lift and lowered it several times, listening to it crunch a little bit more. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Ketchup wrote:Perplexing indeed.scootayay wrote:O. Hinds wrote:We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
- Spoiler:
Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.Changed parts are bold for your convenience. That change is actually damn interesting and probably threw all the previous speculations about the cyberdaemon off by a mile.
- Original:
PH Ch 39 wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and knocked it end over end down the slope. I didn’t stop though, driving the elevator all the way down till it crunched the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug. I raised the lift and lowered it several times, listening to it crunch a little bit more. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
if the sentinel is below the lift wouldn't you say pushed up rather than pushed down...?
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The only pre-fire info I can think of is that Twist owned a candy shop that burned along with the rest of the city, and Psalm lived there with her.Meleagridis wrote:Right, right. Zebras did that. Simply forgot. Perhaps what I should be asking about is Hoofington before the fire, specifically.
Not mine! Well, it wanting "life" is perhaps interesting, but I don't think it's particularly telling. It doesn't really indicate whether the Cyberdaemon was previously alive and needs EC in order to be restored, or if it was never alive in the first place and needs EC to gain some new spark that it considers "life". I'm glad to see I'm correct that the Cyberdaemon was in charge of the bot army, though.scootayay wrote:Changed parts are bold for your convenience. That change is actually damn interesting and probably threw all the previous speculations about the cyberdaemon off by a mile.
I like that it suggests we're about to learn more about the Cyberdaemon!
I don't know what you mean. The lift, descending, is shoving the ultra-sentinel downslope beneath it.Admiral Stoic Rum wrote:if the sentinel is below the lift wouldn't you say pushed up rather than pushed down...?
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Well, we've reconvened for today and are planning to meet again on Friday. Hopefully we'll get it finished then but, if not, there's one last opportunity on Sunday before the new work week.
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hmm i will have much to do then
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Eeeeee!O. Hinds wrote:Well, we've reconvened for today and are planning to meet again on Friday. Hopefully we'll get it finished then but, if not, there's one last opportunity on Sunday before the new work week.
If you finish Friday night, Saturday will be so full of pony.
Aw, who am I kidding? Every day is full of pony for me.
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TVTropes blocks image hotlinking. Here, have one that you can use!CalamityWhen wrote:
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O. Hinds wrote:We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
- Spoiler:
Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.
The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”
“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
(Not as if we needed it, but) Cybie confirmed as tear-jerking villain.
Picking a theory out of a hat... rather than being a sucked-up brain from a pre-war character, it was developed from brilliant minds (probably in one of the Projects- what's left now?) and needs EC1101 to complete itself. Maybe?
I'm still leaning towards Horse getting more than he bargained for, honestly. Especially since Cybie seems to be constantly getting the short end of the stick.
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SilentCarto wrote:TVTropes blocks image hotlinking. Here, have one that you can use!CalamityWhen wrote:
Huh. It was working for at least a few minutes after I posted it... Dang.
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Cybie is now Pinocchio.Meleagridis wrote:O. Hinds wrote:We have made a minor change to Chapter 39:
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Somber wrote:“I am through playing around!” I shouted as I shoved the wagon over the edge. The munitions crates tumbled into the wildly spraying energy and blew. I didn’t even flinch from the shrapnel as I drove the lift straight into the flaming bot. It raised its burning front wheels before the lift collided and began shoving it back down the slope.
The electronic eyes of the sentinel blazed a sudden, intense green and its speakers released a screech of feedback and static as it lifted a leg feebly. Then it shrieked, “GIVE IT TO ME! GIVE ME LIFE!”
“Oh, I’m going to give it to you alright...” I muttered at the insane robot, then crushed the Ultra-Sentinel like a bug against the bottom of the ramp. Then I raised the lift and lowered it several times till the shriek silenced completely. Finally, as we started back up again, I took the missile launcher from P-21, trotted to the edge, and fired it into the sparking wreckage. As the lift rose, I tossed the spent launcher down after it.
(Not as if we needed it, but) Cybie confirmed as tear-jerking villain.
Picking a theory out of a hat... rather than being a sucked-up brain from a pre-war character, it was developed from brilliant minds (probably in one of the Projects- what's left now?) and needs EC1101 to complete itself. Maybe?
I'm still leaning towards Horse getting more than he bargained for, honestly. Especially since Cybie seems to be constantly getting the short end of the stick.
I have no real theories of my own on the subject. If I'm interpreting your post correctly, you think Horse is Cybie? That would be interesting.
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(Sorry for slacking reply on the "official thread", stuff been going on)
Just a random thought of the week: How many foals do you think Rampage has lost? (biological) going time wise, it ought to be at least ~5. The one she had and killed with Priest not included.
Just a random thought of the week: How many foals do you think Rampage has lost? (biological) going time wise, it ought to be at least ~5. The one she had and killed with Priest not included.
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Well when she was found in the crater she was a blank personality so it's possible that she had a couple until she broke free. The one she had with priest probably was the first one after that. I think after that she was just too afraid to get near any kids.Kattlarv wrote:(Sorry for slacking reply on the "official thread", stuff been going on)
Just a random thought of the week: How many foals do you think Rampage has lost? (biological) going time wise, it ought to be at least ~5. The one she had and killed with Priest not included.
I hope they eventually resolve her mental problems.
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Huh? Do we have some indication that she had any pregnancies (complete or not) from her time as a sex slave? Or are you talking about before she woke up in the crater..?Kattlarv wrote:Just a random thought of the week: How many foals do you think Rampage has lost? (biological) going time wise, it ought to be at least ~5. The one she had and killed with Priest not included.
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That's cuz your computer had it cached. It wasn't really working, just... sorta looked like it was.CalamityWhen wrote:Huh. It was working for at least a few minutes after I posted it... Dang.
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@Kim
'course you'd have to calculate the possibilities of multiple fetuses in a single pregnancy and whether or not she vaporized herself during any of them and... Yeah, I don't think that any normal female baby making cycle-thingy whatever you call it applies to Rampage.
'course you'd have to calculate the possibilities of multiple fetuses in a single pregnancy and whether or not she vaporized herself during any of them and... Yeah, I don't think that any normal female baby making cycle-thingy whatever you call it applies to Rampage.
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Safeguard, safeguard, safeguard!
:)
(I used the Safeguard system because the previous time I sent up the Somber Signal was just a demonstration for people who didn't know what it looked like.)
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(I used the Safeguard system because the previous time I sent up the Somber Signal was just a demonstration for people who didn't know what it looked like.)
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Anybody else think that looks like a turd?O. Hinds wrote:
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Darn timezones, its 2 AM here and it'll take hours to put out my thoughts and read the chapter.
Now I've got a chapter of 2 stories to read.
Now I've got a chapter of 2 stories to read.
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Wow, the new chapter came out just in time for the new episode. Freaky.
Anyways, O.Hinds, if you read this, could you put a link to the PH Chapter Hub in your sig? It would make navigating to it far easier.
Anyways, O.Hinds, if you read this, could you put a link to the PH Chapter Hub in your sig? It would make navigating to it far easier.
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Well, cervix, won't be any time to read that for a while...
Also: *Whine* Why do stuff rarely ever bother to go my way? Just had 4, possibly 5 now things happen the exact opposite I wanted this week, all of them major...
@EP: (Rampage) Really bad time to reply but: As Rampage shown possibility to have a foal with Priest, it indicates she is fertile. It could be something she only somehow randomly recently got, but if going logic wise, when she was used as a cum dumpster (as no indication was given she ever had to service mares if I recall), given a equines cycle, if I recall it right, she ought to have had quite steady miscarriages around ~2 times a year as I doubt they'd put her "on mares" or pull her out of work during her heat. Meaning she'd miscarry around 5-7 months in when she was sexed again, as her body would dispose of the foal in process. Somewhat doubtful they'd bother to make use of it after all, as that'd put her out of work for ~6 months... or well, one hole at least. And she must have been really scrambled on second thoughts, how long was she a mindless drone now again?... I can only get between 1-10 years in my mind, and that's widely different from min to max.
Also: *Whine* Why do stuff rarely ever bother to go my way? Just had 4, possibly 5 now things happen the exact opposite I wanted this week, all of them major...
@EP: (Rampage) Really bad time to reply but: As Rampage shown possibility to have a foal with Priest, it indicates she is fertile. It could be something she only somehow randomly recently got, but if going logic wise, when she was used as a cum dumpster (as no indication was given she ever had to service mares if I recall), given a equines cycle, if I recall it right, she ought to have had quite steady miscarriages around ~2 times a year as I doubt they'd put her "on mares" or pull her out of work during her heat. Meaning she'd miscarry around 5-7 months in when she was sexed again, as her body would dispose of the foal in process. Somewhat doubtful they'd bother to make use of it after all, as that'd put her out of work for ~6 months... or well, one hole at least. And she must have been really scrambled on second thoughts, how long was she a mindless drone now again?... I can only get between 1-10 years in my mind, and that's widely different from min to max.
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I WANT TO SAY FOR THE RECORD
I am so stealing that FYI
I am going to bed with my blood pumping, can't wait for the ocean of posts tomorrow.
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- I FUCKING CALLED IT CUNTS (On the Minecraft Teamspeak chat but still), DUES CAME BACK MOTHERBUCKERS AND HE CHOOSE RIGHT!
This chapter was a whirlwind and I fucking cheered when the reinforcements came. Was Dawn a changeling? That whole segment with her winning was a fantastic smack-down of words. The entire chapter was so intense and got my heart racing like crazy. Oh my god.
THE TANK BATTLE WAS AS BAD ASS AS IT SHOULD BE SOMBER. DO WE WANT TO SEE HER JUST BLOW IT UP OR SOMETHING!? NO! WE LOVE BADASS BATTLES AND YOU WILL NOT FEEL BAD ABOUT WRITING COOL BATTLES MISTER!
Dues better comeback as backup later.
I am just so flabbergasted and blown away by this chapter.
One small criticism is P-21's err sexuality problems If he is bi-romantic I don't have a problem but I do not want to see a "straight for Blackjack" type thing. Doesn't work and has bad connotations. I think that a situation that he "Became gay" because of the abuse would have really really bad connotations.
Otherwise, fantastic chapter. God damn as you get better you keep thinking you are worse Somber.
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I am so stealing that FYI
I am going to bed with my blood pumping, can't wait for the ocean of posts tomorrow.
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