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Hello all. I'm PW. I usually hang out on the FIMFiction.net IRC, but this seems like the place to be for FOE:PH discussion.
I love Somber's work, even if this comic (which has been brought up previously) makes me nod and laugh.
And because this message seems rather vacant, I offer my two cents about the fic: BJ's virtue is perseverance, and PH involves using the moon to destroy the Eater of Souls.
I love Somber's work, even if this comic (which has been brought up previously) makes me nod and laugh.
And because this message seems rather vacant, I offer my two cents about the fic: BJ's virtue is perseverance, and PH involves using the moon to destroy the Eater of Souls.
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Hello Professor, and welcome to Cloudsville.
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Heh, yes that certainly is the trick isn't it, and...ketchup504 wrote:You'd want to open one door to get Cake for
Boo, and another to find Boo. The trick is avoiding
Psychoshy.
... this is the perfect solution. Well done, sir. *giggles loudly*Cptadder wrote:I inform the world at large that I have to
much cake and listen to hear which door thuds with the sound of a small
pony body trying to open. I then insult Sanguine to listen for the door
with the swearing then knowing which doors to open I open the cake door
then the Boo door... and then drop a safe in front of the Psychoshy
door.
Ah, definitely not bad choices (how interesting you'd both pick Horse to be Gluttony heh) - I would though like to limit the choices to /just/ Blackjack's party though, so not ponies like Steel Rain.NoodleNugget" and "MrMagma wrote:(God, the sins are so much easier. PH truly is a world of the lesser of two evils.
Also yes, "lesser of two evils" is definitely a good way to describe a lot of PH.
Yes, this is exactly what I meant heh, though I think Psychoshy and Stygius would be acceptable as well.Overlong Analysis Cobalt wrote:Blackjack, Lacunae, Rampage, Boo, Scotch, P-21, Glory. 7 Ponies, 7 Virtues, 7 Sins.
I'm not sure how well I like this list, but it's a start.
It seems like a good list to start with - your reasoning for the sins seems to be fairly solid I'd say.
No worries - and if it were just characters in general that would make it too easy. XPNoodleNugget wrote:Oh wait, Blackjack's party? I thought it was just characters in general. Shoot.
Well, your versions of the characters are still based off the originals with slightly exaggerated traits, aren't they? I'd say it's still legitimate criteria for how you'd organize them on the list. *nods*swicked wrote:...of course, this is all with "my versions" of them in mind...
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if you would like I can explain why I chose them in such a way.
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chastity - Scotch Tape (for lack of a better candidate) <> lust - (Sad to say it) Stygius (Do I even need to explain?)
temperance - P-21 (deals with Blackjacks shit even though he has a little bit of trouble with self control) <> gluttony - Horse (Sweetie Bot, seriously.) Boo (it's a joke but she is a bit of a glut)
charity - Charity(Do I even need to explain?) Stygius (when he could have just bucked and run, he chose to follow) <> greed - the machine(desperate to get Ec-1101) Glory (isn't willing to let go of things. she will sacrifice things for other things but isn't willing to let go. For instance. She wasn't willing to let Blackjack go.)
diligence - Rampage (sticks to her guns no matter what) <> sloth - Goldenblood (Could have done more, could have been better, but was so obsessed with letting others fuck up.) P-21 (refusal to take up the roll as father, Not really a decision maker, but will bop Blackjack upside the head for making the 'wrong one')
patience - Lacunae (getting all the shit the goddess refuses to deal with would kinda lead to this) <> wrath - Steel Rain (he'd probably kill you if you brushed up against him and he didn't give you explicit order to) Rampage (... She is a one person wrecking machine who is probably more than willing to tear someone apart for the hell of it, also that split personality that likes to kill the weak)
kindness - Glory (Very caring character) <> envy - Sanguine (his whole obsession with Goldenblood and ec 1101)
humility - Blackjack (selfless to the extent of suicidal) <> pride - Psychoshy (desperate for attention)
temperance - P-21 (deals with Blackjacks shit even though he has a little bit of trouble with self control) <> gluttony - Horse (Sweetie Bot, seriously.) Boo (it's a joke but she is a bit of a glut)
charity - Charity(Do I even need to explain?) Stygius (when he could have just bucked and run, he chose to follow) <> greed - the machine(desperate to get Ec-1101) Glory (isn't willing to let go of things. she will sacrifice things for other things but isn't willing to let go. For instance. She wasn't willing to let Blackjack go.)
diligence - Rampage (sticks to her guns no matter what) <> sloth - Goldenblood (Could have done more, could have been better, but was so obsessed with letting others fuck up.) P-21 (refusal to take up the roll as father, Not really a decision maker, but will bop Blackjack upside the head for making the 'wrong one')
patience - Lacunae (getting all the shit the goddess refuses to deal with would kinda lead to this) <> wrath - Steel Rain (he'd probably kill you if you brushed up against him and he didn't give you explicit order to) Rampage (... She is a one person wrecking machine who is probably more than willing to tear someone apart for the hell of it, also that split personality that likes to kill the weak)
kindness - Glory (Very caring character) <> envy - Sanguine (his whole obsession with Goldenblood and ec 1101)
humility - Blackjack (selfless to the extent of suicidal) <> pride - Psychoshy (desperate for attention)
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Well, it feels like we've had a lot of delays to get here, but 46 is up! A nice, short chapter at just over forty-one pages. :)
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O. Hinds wrote:Well, it feels like we've had a lot of delays to get here, but 46 is up! A nice, short chapter at just over forty-one pages. :)
I don't see how anyone could consider 41 pages to be 'short', then I look back at previous chapters and I understand how
will read in the morning, need to sleep now
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Hmm Chapter title is Caper?. Well at least it's not called Hijinks or worse Shenanigans, unless it's a Copper Caper.
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I'd be happy to hear your reasoning for them, sir. I'm also a huge slowpoke, so you went ahead and posted them, which is perfectly fine XDNoodleNugget wrote:if you would like I can explain why I chose them in such a way.
And I would say your reasoning seems pretty solid. *nods*
Yeah! Just slightly exaggerated. And I love having explanations of the choices.swicked wrote:Right... SLIGHTLY exaggerated, heh...
Since Cobalt explained his choices, I'll explain mine!
As I said, even with the exaggeration, you can still feel the characters in how you view them, and I think that you definitely made some interesting points swicked, definitely things worth considering.
Yay! All our love to you hard-working staff members and Somber! *squeezes you all in a tight hug*O. Hinds wrote:Well, it feels like we've had a lot of delays to get
here, but 46 is up! A nice, short chapter at just over forty-one pages.
:)
I was supposed to be going to sleep early because of D&D tomorrow but... they'll just have to deal with me being half-asleep. PH is more important! I'm very much looking forward to reading it tonight.
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Oh, by the way...
- Very Minor Spoiler for 46:
- It may only be one line, but I'm hoping for fanart of Blackjack Reynolds.
- Not Really a Spoiler:
- Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
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O. Hinds wrote:
Oh, and...
- Not Really a Spoiler:
Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
- Spoiler:
- You know, I would love to see a little one-sided crush on P-21's part.
He's just so darn /cute/.
And then he finds out BJ already had him and gets grumpy and jealous. XD
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O. Hinds wrote:Oh, by the way...
- Not Really a Spoiler:
Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
I Agree with this wholeheartedly. I mean there is no way it could be cannon and I think it would make more sense if P-21 hated stygius because he is acting too much like the very content stable stallions. And I doubt Stygius would really be able to comprehend to men together like that. But honestly SO ADORABLE IT MUST BE DRAWN.
Sorry I'm kind of a fanboy for cute guy couples
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- Smooze is now Canon...
Somber...
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ScytoHarmony wrote:
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Smooze is now Canon...
Somber...
Heh, yeah, This.
Also:
- Spoiler:
Holy buckets, shit just got real. I freaked the hell out at the part with the "Smooze".
I also freaked out at another part, but I don't remember what it was...ah well...
EDIT: Oh wait, yeah, the room o' stuff.
Soundtrack will be uploaded tomorrow. It's friggin late right now.
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swicked wrote:juleppony wrote:O. Hinds wrote:
Oh, and...
- Not Really a Spoiler:
Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
- Spoiler:
You know, I would love to see a little one-sided crush on P-21's part.
He's just so darn /cute/.
And then he finds out BJ already had him and gets grumpy and jealous. XD
- Spoiler:
...I can't see that happening. P-21 is a lot like Blackjack... sex doesn't matter. You just have sex with everyone. Only he has it worse. While Blackjack can pretty easily decide to now consider sex important and decide not to have it flippantly anymore, P-21 still has his conditioning. While Blackjack originally chose to have it whenever she wanted, P-21 was raped against his will every time under penalty of death. So... really, once he tries to consider sex important he runs the risk of feeling the shame for all of those rapes all over again.
It occurs to me now you were probably just joking around, but given all that we know about P-21 he's more likely just to be disappointed that Styg isn't gay or bi. 99ers just don't get jealous over sharing lovers.
Plus, you know, other than appearances I think they just wouldn't work together on a personality level.
- Spoiler:
- Yeah, mostly joking. I'll be really surprised if this doesn't turn out to be a pretty insane crack ship. That, however, seems to be doing nothing to stop my brain from working on it.
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Poor P-21...swicked wrote:O. Hinds wrote:swicked wrote:juleppony wrote:O. Hinds wrote:
Oh, and...
- Not Really a Spoiler:
Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
- Spoiler:
You know, I would love to see a little one-sided crush on P-21's part.
He's just so darn /cute/.
And then he finds out BJ already had him and gets grumpy and jealous. XD
- Spoiler:
...I can't see that happening. P-21 is a lot like Blackjack... sex doesn't matter. You just have sex with everyone. Only he has it worse. While Blackjack can pretty easily decide to now consider sex important and decide not to have it flippantly anymore, P-21 still has his conditioning. While Blackjack originally chose to have it whenever she wanted, P-21 was raped against his will every time under penalty of death. So... really, once he tries to consider sex important he runs the risk of feeling the shame for all of those rapes all over again.
It occurs to me now you were probably just joking around, but given all that we know about P-21 he's more likely just to be disappointed that Styg isn't gay or bi. 99ers just don't get jealous over sharing lovers.
Plus, you know, other than appearances I think they just wouldn't work together on a personality level.
- Spoiler:
Yeah, mostly joking. I'll be really surprised if this doesn't turn out to be a pretty insane crack ship. That, however, seems to be doing nothing to stop my brain from working on it.
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What I think would be funny is if Styg somehow mistook P-21 for a mare and didn't find out differently until... well, far later than he would have preferred to find out XD
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Hmm, how is everyone? Behaving I hope.
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Confound Skyrim, it causes Us to miss chapter updates. If anypony currently has the chat open from time of release, could they please save it (the chat) to a text document, upload it to Dropbox and provide Us with the link?
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I'm fine. Just kinda hovering around the forums here. I was going to head to bed earlier, but I can't peel myself away from this livestream I'm watching of the 24 hours of Le Mans.Nightfire wrote:Hmm, how is everyone? Behaving I hope.
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Hmm what to say about Chapter 46 since I can do one of those actual reader response things now.
High points
Cerberus is now Robot Charlton Heston I approve of this action as now I'm reading all his lines not in the Fo3 voice but in the Planet of the Apes, Damn dirty apes voice.
Self Conscious Lacunae is adorable in a way that I can only describe as a mixture of Daww and sadness, particularly the line about the Goddess leaving because she could not take genuine happiness. The hopefully inevitable scene when Blackjack visits the Society and has to mingle with all the royal types with her band of degenerate angst commandos get a thousand percent better with the mental image of Lacunae wowing the assemble nobility in with a bit of fancy.
Pre War Ghoul sob story, so we finally found out the Angel of Death's name and how she ended up in Rampage along with the officer. Good to know she did not offer her kid. Now we just need to assemble the line to figure out how each soul got in Rampage in what order and how the Ministry of Image kept moving that orb and those bodies around.
Interesting little team you've assembled Blackjack, You've got lots of backup, supplies and a plan of sorts and Boings not dead. Your slipping Blackjack everything is going well
More of EC-1101's magical nature as now it is directly providing plot downloaded directly into Blackjacks head whenever she unseals something. No Dealer comments which is a surprise but then maybe he's napping.
Smooze and the slime ponies were an interesting enemy but weird.
Okay while I like the descriptions of the Soul Jar experiments I got an issue with them for low points
I don't think Psychoshy should get credit for accidentally bucking Blackjack, it has to be a gun of some kind before you can officially join the group.
Last mention for this chapter, Rarity why did you give up those experiments? Snipes knew so you must have known you could not use Prisoners to make the materials since they turn out psycho, why not vets? I could see any one of a hundred elderly, disabled or dieing ponies stepping up if asked "Hey would you like to live forever helping people? The Stealth suit might have unknown issues but look at Octavia, she turned out okay so obviously you got better at the process at some point.
I seriously hope the way you did not get better was through constant trial and error... but you were using Snipes and Snails as your Oppenheimer and Fermi.... well.... I mean... yeah...
Low Points
World Building
Hello Mr Shears, confirmation your Snipes and apparently visiting Pony Professor on Poney Soulology. Makes me wonder if we had world class unicorns working with Soul weaponry what would
The Soul Sword which I'm referring to from now on as a Zanpakuto is not only a weapon against pretty much everything it's also slices and dices soul cloth and soul armor.
The Zebra Stealth suit! I'm guessing we found the suit of the Zebra infiltrator who tried to killed Rarity for the book in FoE main story flashbacks.
High points
Cerberus is now Robot Charlton Heston I approve of this action as now I'm reading all his lines not in the Fo3 voice but in the Planet of the Apes, Damn dirty apes voice.
Self Conscious Lacunae is adorable in a way that I can only describe as a mixture of Daww and sadness, particularly the line about the Goddess leaving because she could not take genuine happiness. The hopefully inevitable scene when Blackjack visits the Society and has to mingle with all the royal types with her band of degenerate angst commandos get a thousand percent better with the mental image of Lacunae wowing the assemble nobility in with a bit of fancy.
Pre War Ghoul sob story, so we finally found out the Angel of Death's name and how she ended up in Rampage along with the officer. Good to know she did not offer her kid. Now we just need to assemble the line to figure out how each soul got in Rampage in what order and how the Ministry of Image kept moving that orb and those bodies around.
Interesting little team you've assembled Blackjack, You've got lots of backup, supplies and a plan of sorts and Boings not dead. Your slipping Blackjack everything is going well
More of EC-1101's magical nature as now it is directly providing plot downloaded directly into Blackjacks head whenever she unseals something. No Dealer comments which is a surprise but then maybe he's napping.
Smooze and the slime ponies were an interesting enemy but weird.
Okay while I like the descriptions of the Soul Jar experiments I got an issue with them for low points
I don't think Psychoshy should get credit for accidentally bucking Blackjack, it has to be a gun of some kind before you can officially join the group.
Last mention for this chapter, Rarity why did you give up those experiments? Snipes knew so you must have known you could not use Prisoners to make the materials since they turn out psycho, why not vets? I could see any one of a hundred elderly, disabled or dieing ponies stepping up if asked "Hey would you like to live forever helping people? The Stealth suit might have unknown issues but look at Octavia, she turned out okay so obviously you got better at the process at some point.
I seriously hope the way you did not get better was through constant trial and error... but you were using Snipes and Snails as your Oppenheimer and Fermi.... well.... I mean... yeah...
Low Points
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Starkatteri anti-Enervation talismans? Kinda out of left field for those, interesting they were gun shells but the question is why they don't sell to every Hoofington visitor if they are in such a common item as a bullet shell, implies they were produced recently.
The planning meeting seemed all over the place with viewpoint switching and some confusing wording when Blackjack
Wait Silver Spoon? There was time jump in there I missed? An simple "The next day" line would have helped as it seemed like they did no preparation for this run aside from Meatlocker.
I'm really confused trying to follow the slime pony fight, there was not much in the way of establishment of the look of room, they were on catwalks but the Slime ponies were climbing up? Or they were on the floor around pools of slime? I just can't picture this fight in my head as it's described now.
Okay Highpoint/Lowpoint WHY THE HELL ARE THE SOUL JARS IN HIGH TOWER!??! Seriously Rarity I know your using High tower as your baises for experments but what Warden is going to agree to let your eldritch perversions of nature be stored there? That just violates all sort of SCP protocols, storing them together behind a single door when they are known to be hazardous. They should be in a bunker complex somewhere not stored in a single room no matter how high the security. Your keeping prisoners not that far away from the means to free themselves. Who cares if you consider them a failure you have to accept the possibility you missed something and Prisoner Number XX214 might luck out and get turned into the next unkillable Super-poney because he's got one of your suits on.
World Building
Hello Mr Shears, confirmation your Snipes and apparently visiting Pony Professor on Poney Soulology. Makes me wonder if we had world class unicorns working with Soul weaponry what would
The Soul Sword which I'm referring to from now on as a Zanpakuto is not only a weapon against pretty much everything it's also slices and dices soul cloth and soul armor.
The Zebra Stealth suit! I'm guessing we found the suit of the Zebra infiltrator who tried to killed Rarity for the book in FoE main story flashbacks.
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Low Points
- Spoiler:
Wait Silver Spoon? There was time jump in there I missed? An simple "The next day" line would have helped as it seemed like they did no preparation for this run aside from Meatlocker.
- Spoiler:
Based on what Blackjack said before the break ("I got an idea, depending on how much radiation Lacunae's been exposed to"), she did a long-range teleport over to where Silver Spoon was, then back. That would require a large amount of radiation to power. But it can all happen in the same day.
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Another amazing chapter Somber! Thank you and the editing team for creating such a fantastic story!
Well that's all I really have to say, in all it was an amazing chapter and I cannot wait to see how pear shaped the plan is going to get! Keep up the amazing work Somber!
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No idea if this has been said yet but, I loved the reference to Al Capone(At least that I think that's who King Pin was based off of I mean the charges of tax evasion were the only thing that got him into Hightower and tax evasion was what got Al Capone into Alcatraz so I'm just making the assumption that King Pin is Equestria's Al Capone. Please feel free to tell me if I'm wrong.) It was just amazing and,in my opinion, worked perfectly!
Also the all hail Lord Smooze!
Poor Sliver Spoon, I feel so bad for her. but yay she got brought back!
The stealth suit was also awesome.
Carrion is best mercenary. He's just badass.
Well that's all I really have to say, in all it was an amazing chapter and I cannot wait to see how pear shaped the plan is going to get! Keep up the amazing work Somber!
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Well... what can I say other then I enjoyed reading it?
This chapter and the last one brought back the Fallout portion to the forefront for me. Not saying that part's been absent, just that sometimes the chapters read like MLP:FIM in Fallout and others are like Fallout with MLP:FIM. The overall blending of the chapters make it Fallout: Equestria for me.
Not saying a chapter being more one then the other is bad, just that I see it but I enjoy it that way.
Nice nod to the older generation and I will admit I squee'd at the stealth suit because I did fall in love with it in New Vegas.
This chapter and the last one brought back the Fallout portion to the forefront for me. Not saying that part's been absent, just that sometimes the chapters read like MLP:FIM in Fallout and others are like Fallout with MLP:FIM. The overall blending of the chapters make it Fallout: Equestria for me.
Not saying a chapter being more one then the other is bad, just that I see it but I enjoy it that way.
Nice nod to the older generation and I will admit I squee'd at the stealth suit because I did fall in love with it in New Vegas.
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O. Hinds wrote:
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Maybe some of Stygius/P-21 (Pstygius-21, maybe?)? Yes, yes, I know it's almost certainly a crack ship, but... my brain thinks that they'd make a cute couple. [taps hooves together with a bit of embarrassment]
Stop making my brain think things! And stop making my brain like it!
Great chapter. room full of goodies gave freaked me out(guess I've been reading the scp wiki for a little too long). Stealth suit awww yeah. :D Bj didn't kill boing!
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
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Because the only pony who knows how to make them isn't interested in selling, I expect.Cptadder wrote:
Starkatteri anti-Enervation talismans? Kinda out of left field for those, interesting they were gun shells but the question is why they don't sell to every Hoofington visitor if they are in such a common item as a bullet shell, implies they were produced recently.
That was explicitly a cloak, IIRC; I'm not sure where the infiltrator suit came from.Cptadder wrote:The Zebra Stealth suit! I'm guessing we found the suit of the Zebra infiltrator who tried to killed Rarity for the book in FoE main story flashbacks.
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- Great chapter as always guys. Nice way of bringing back some older story points like Silver Spoon.
And let me just say, from the bottom of my heart: Thank you for saving Boing.
I also loved you throwing in the Stealth Suit MKII, it was my second favorite set of medium armor.
There was, however, one thing in this chapter that really kinda bugged me about this chapter, and that was the apparent lack of understanding what Rad-x and Radaway are. For example:
- When BJ and Lacunae walk into the conference room, the story said something along the lines of Graves counting out syringes of Rad-x. Rad-x isn't an injected substance, it's a pill, so it should be bottles of Rad-x.
- During the rest period after, I believe it was, the initial encounter with the Smooze, it was said that Graves and Lacunae were passing out packets of Rad-x for the others to drink. I'm pretty sure you meant Radaway, considering that, as stated above, Rad-x is a pill, not a fluid.
With examples like that, I'd say it might be a good idea to go back through, double check, and revise the instances where the anti-rad medicines are mentioned.
Also one more point I'd like to get across - and know that I mean no offense and am completely aware that canon between two FOE side stories is shaky at best - is that just like the Flim Flam Brothers, Snips was used first by Ten Mihara in his FOE sidefic"The Ditzy Doo Chronicles".
Like I said, I mean no offense and am aware that they can simply be considered two separate but similar universes as well as the fact that two writers can have separate ideas for the same character, but I'm following a lot of FOE sidestories and like to try and mesh them all together into one big headcanon univers, and when seperate stories conflict in a unresolvable way - such as using the same character for two very different roles - it detracts from my experience with both stories.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
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Ah, thank you for pointing out the antirad errors.
Ah, thank you for pointing out the antirad errors.
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No problem, man.
No problem, man.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Full commentary about 46 soon. Right now I just stopped at the preparations part to say that this thing is looping in my head right now.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Pq4p9kwTRQ
Back to the chapter then.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Pq4p9kwTRQ
Back to the chapter then.
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Re: [GRIMDARK] Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons Discussion
Alright actual commentary now.
Once again. Brilliant chapter. Read it while sitting at the edge of my seat.
Loved how we actually had a reasonable authority figure for a change at the beginning. MORE PARTY MEMBERS! A zebra engineer no less. Also Blackjack's special talent has to be rallying allies. Every time she is alone or outnumbered in a hostile area she pretty much rounds up every badass around in less than a day. Even if some of those allies are with questionable motives.
Boing's survival looked like a cheap cop out to keep BJ sane to me but eh. Maybe there is a purpose for her later.
Like I said above I LOVED the preparations part. Don't even know why but I did.
So Shears is confirmed as Snips, nice observation folks. More visions of the past.
Loved the brilliant Checkoffs gun with Silver Spoon. I called it as soon as Blackjack mentioned someone who can control ghouls. Also Somber you officially made a place worse than Canterlot. You made the fucking Smooze terrifying for crying out loud. And that's just the tip of the iceberg.
The insight into what happens to soul powered objects is unsettling. But makes sense. Loved the explanations and the show case of what it does. Petunias terrified face formed in the cloth was heart wrenching.
YAY MODIFIED STEALTH ARMOR! I loved her in Old World Blues. She and her new owner will be a huge asset in the final battle.
And of course it's all controlled by a giant mind tank robot. At least it's not the cyber demon or eater of souls.
Brilliant chapter. Very intense. I loved it.
Once again. Brilliant chapter. Read it while sitting at the edge of my seat.
Loved how we actually had a reasonable authority figure for a change at the beginning. MORE PARTY MEMBERS! A zebra engineer no less. Also Blackjack's special talent has to be rallying allies. Every time she is alone or outnumbered in a hostile area she pretty much rounds up every badass around in less than a day. Even if some of those allies are with questionable motives.
Boing's survival looked like a cheap cop out to keep BJ sane to me but eh. Maybe there is a purpose for her later.
Like I said above I LOVED the preparations part. Don't even know why but I did.
So Shears is confirmed as Snips, nice observation folks. More visions of the past.
Loved the brilliant Checkoffs gun with Silver Spoon. I called it as soon as Blackjack mentioned someone who can control ghouls. Also Somber you officially made a place worse than Canterlot. You made the fucking Smooze terrifying for crying out loud. And that's just the tip of the iceberg.
The insight into what happens to soul powered objects is unsettling. But makes sense. Loved the explanations and the show case of what it does. Petunias terrified face formed in the cloth was heart wrenching.
YAY MODIFIED STEALTH ARMOR! I loved her in Old World Blues. She and her new owner will be a huge asset in the final battle.
And of course it's all controlled by a giant mind tank robot. At least it's not the cyber demon or eater of souls.
Brilliant chapter. Very intense. I loved it.
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