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Equestrian tyranny (fanfic)

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Post by WalrusM3 Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:08 pm

Then why have this thread?
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Post by Permafrost Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:39 pm

WalrusM3 wrote:Then why have this thread?

This thread here is more for criticism on the story,where I type it up,etc. while Vengeance's is more or less what will be sent in as the final draft.After reading his its easier to read but here is more of the rough draft,if that makes sense
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Post by XT Vengeance Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:53 pm

WalrusM3 wrote:Then why have this thread?
As Mint said, this is where the rough draft will be, and also this is the place to give your thoughts/criticisms.
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Post by XT Vengeance Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:48 pm

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Post by Permafrost Mon Apr 16, 2012 3:36 pm

And now another chapter....

Chapter 5:Surprise Attack (in progress)
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Post by logmanxyz Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:53 pm

nice work minty. this is gonna be great when it all comes together. can't wait to see what happens next :D
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Post by Permafrost Wed Jul 04, 2012 10:43 am

wow...its been...a couple months...yea sorry this took so long,had writers block badly. If you dont know about this fanfic,please start at the revised edition topic. As for chapter 2 its currently not up...anywhere...so...I plan to fix that soon. Anyways,the conclusion to chapter 5
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Post by XT Vengeance Wed Jul 04, 2012 1:16 pm

Permafrost wrote:wow...its been...a couple months...yea sorry this took so long,had writers block badly. If you dont know about this fanfic,please start at the revised edition topic. As for chapter 2 its currently not up...anywhere...so...I plan to fix that soon. Anyways,the conclusion to chapter 5
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I think I actually still have that. Chapter two that is. Not sure though, I have to look for it.
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Post by Guest Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:33 pm

I can't wait for next chapter :3

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Post by Static Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:15 am

I love the story! Can't wait for more! xd
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Post by WalrusM3 Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:43 pm

Awesome glad you're continuing, I wasn't sure if you'd be continuing it which worried me as it was getting good.
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Post by Permafrost Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:13 am

One thing before chapter 6...I really appreciate all my readers, and I'd like them to help me with chapter 7. By this I mean chapter 7 is mostly about the CMC getting answers to whats going on...however...I feel I've explained a lot of things too well...I'm at a loss for questions for them to ask. So,if you have any question you think would work for this,please PM me them. Thank you for both this and your support on this fanfic.

And as for chapter 6...I feel this chapter is...lacking...I apologize if it is...well,enjoy.

Chapter 6:Seperation
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Post by Permafrost Thu Oct 04, 2012 11:04 pm

UUUUUGGGGGGHHHHH School has been making me keep push this further back on my list! I'm sorry everyone, but I will be putting up chapter 7 as soon as I can. Again, sorry for the long pauses, but I am not giving up at this point!
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Post by Permafrost Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:23 pm

Yay! Finaly have time to put some of this up! Note that I have been taking a writing class so it may seem a little different then previous chapters...

Chapter 7:Getting Answers (part 1 of 2)

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Post by Permafrost Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:49 pm

And here is part two of chapter 7.

Chapter 7:Getting Answers (part 2 of 2)
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