Starmetal Sword Chronicles

[Exodus Hero]

Spoiler Alert! If you haven't read Fallout Equestria: Project Horizon up to chapter Sixty Two, its probably best you read that before coming to this story (although if you don't mind minor spoilers, I'd welcome you to read). You have been fairly warned! Spoilers will probably be in the text below! Spoilers!

The following narrative is intended to be a couple of small chapters highlighting the adventures of a Radroach in his quest to find the Champion of the Starmetal Sword.

I've made this thread in order for people to give me praise to point out the typos and errors that I can't see as the author. Any pointers will help a lot and also hopefully improve my writing in the long run. Thanks for taking the time to read and have a nice day!

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[Admiral Stoic Rum]

seems plausable, how can the rad roach survive in the core?

[Exodus Hero]

seems plausable, how can the rad roach survive in the core?

Survive the enervation or just the harsh nature of core in general?

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Thanks for the comment and reading.

[Rusty Hooves]

Dude, this looks pretty cool.  I'm going to read this asap.  I'll try to provide feedback soon.  <insert relevant smiley here>

[Rusty Hooves]

I've read parts 1 and 2 and I am enjoying so far.  

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I would like to read more of this story, looking forward to the rest of this and I hope we do get to reach Black Jack in the end.
Good luck on your work on this!  /] \_

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[Exodus Hero]

I've read parts 1 and 2 and I am enjoying so far.  

story stuff:

I would like to read more of this story, looking forward to the rest of this and I hope we do get to reach Black Jack in the end.
Good luck on your work on this!  /] \_

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Thanks for reading!

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[Meleagridis]

I love how Slave Willing is basically a samurai. Obey the master even in vileness for fear of dishonor. The dialogue is wonderfully campy, I was chuckling for a lot of this. Judging by the rain and the raider mercy killing, it's in Hoofington, right?

Good luck on your work on this!  /] \_

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Pft!

[Exodus Hero]

I love how Slave Willing is basically a samurai. Obey the master even in vileness for fear of dishonor. The dialogue is wonderfully campy, I was chuckling for a lot of this. Judging by the rain and the raider mercy killing, it's in Hoofington, right?

Good luck on your work on this!  /] \_

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Pft!

Thanks for reading!
The setting is indeed in Hoofington. :)

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