Fallout Equestria:Shining Hearts (Finished)

[alfredofroylan]

Hello there, this's a comic that I wrote and Madmax is doing the art. It's a 10 pages story about Sweetie Bot. I'd love to check some feedback on this one, mostly for the story, thanks a lot!!

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-1-of-10-397237377

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-2-of-10-398916066

[Frost]

I was wondering what was with the Balefire explosion on page 2. I would think that's not something that happens every day.

[Harmony Ltd.]

I like it so far. Curious as to where it is going.

[alfredofroylan]

I was wondering what was with the Balefire explosion on page 2. I would think that's not something that happens every day.

I had a lot of those on Fallout 3, everytime a car explodes you get a small balefire so I wanted to include those in the comic. (but bigger)

[alfredofroylan]

New page for this week :)

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-3-of-10-400333330

[Formis_Fluttergod]

This comic, I like it, another!

[alfredofroylan]

Thanks for the comment Formis, page 4 is up right now.

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-4-of-10-402185240

[cb5]

Ensuing hilarity at 12 o'clock.

Also personally I like how this breaks FoE lore cause the inevitable hilarious antics without a doubt are going to be funnier than if sweetie bot had just found a skeleton.

[alfredofroylan]

Ensuing hilarity at 12 o'clock.

Also personally I like how this breaks FoE lore cause the inevitable hilarious antics without a doubt are going to be funnier than if sweetie bot had just found a skeleton.

Oh, you may never know. Here's the next page so we are going to know the story behind this mess  

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-5-of-10-404324653

[alfredofroylan]

And page 6 is ready, tried to keep the story as close as the FE universe and the Old World Blues spirit, behond the mother of all fails.

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-6-of-10-405585885

[alfredofroylan]

New week and new page :)

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-7-of-10-406654141

[alfredofroylan]

Well we're almost done with the comic, I'd like to post the last 2 pages together because they're really interconnected.

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-8-of-10-408525430

[alfredofroylan]

Yes the comic is finally complete, here you can check the last 2 pages, comments and suggestions would be great :)

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-9-of-10-410277628

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-Shining-Hearts-Page-10-of-10-410278992

[alfredofroylan]

Hi there, finally we started the sequel to this comic. You can check it here:

http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-The-Ghost-of-the-Wastes-Part-1-432356323

[Harmony Ltd.]

Just finished reading the original 10 pages. Very good. I like it.

Keep up the good work!   

[alfredofroylan]

Just finished reading the original 10 pages. Very good. I like it.

Keep up the good work!   

Thanks a lot for the comment   page 2 is up if somebody wants to check it
http://alfredofroylan2.deviantart.com/art/Fallout-Equestria-The-Ghost-of-the-Wastes-Part-2-434869858

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