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DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Permafrost Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:19 am
So my first poem that I made by choice...so...yea...
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- Oh Chrysalis
You are my queen
Your the most beautiful thing
I've ever seen.
I feel your pain,
I feel your hate,
We belong together
There is no debate.
You and I
Can take back Canterlot.
We can take on the world
Just give me a shot.
We can take anything
Including Equestria
And no one will stop us
Not even Celestia.
Nothing in this world
Means more to me
Then a smile on your face
I do decree.
Oh Chrysalis
You know it's true
At the end of the day
I really love you.
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Tia Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:21 am
nice poem
i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Formis_Fluttergod Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:07 pm
Shouldn't there be "can't"?RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem
i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Tia Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:18 pm
Formis_Sage wrote:Shouldn't there be "can't"?RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem
i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Permafrost Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:07 pm
RainbowJJP wrote:Formis_Sage wrote:Shouldn't there be "can't"?RainbowJJP wrote:nice poem
i know you love chrysalis but i can let you two take over equestria
yes that should be can't, stupid iphone autocorrect
Awww...oh well...I wasn't really expecting to take over unoppossed anyways...
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Permafrost Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:45 am
bigmikem2000 wrote:dude... u crazy
Dare I ask why?
Though I can think of many reasons...
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by bigmikem2000 Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:52 am
all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Formis_Fluttergod Mon Apr 30, 2012 5:25 am
I don't mind that she's all he thinks about. What concerns me is that Ponies (and others) may get hurt because of his blind love (and her mind-control).bigmikem2000 wrote:all u think about is a wierd thing that looks like it has been shot
OOC: Yes, let's drag our little game into Forum threads. >:D
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Apple Crumble Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:17 am
@FS Yes, Let's.
Love is in bloom. I really like it. ^^
Love is love i guess but no one will take equestria.
On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
(mindblown)
Love is in bloom. I really like it. ^^
Love is love i guess but no one will take equestria.
On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
(mindblown)
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Guest Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:22 am
Good job on poem I love it
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Re: DM's first poem (a Chrysalis poem #1)
by Formis_Fluttergod Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:36 am
Fluttershy found that out the simpliest of ways.Apple Crumble wrote:
On another note, if changelings feed off love, how do they love each other?
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