Pinkie Style!

[aruigus808]

I've noticed that no pony here makes music. I'm trying to(trying is the KEY word) make some music but I'm failing pretty hardcore



That's the first song that I made. I'm trying to make another song but I'm only now learning music theory so it's getting interesting
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aruigus808

[Derpy Hooves]

Is the first line something along the lines of "she's a drunk?"

sorry, just had to comment on that, now I'll listen to the music and give an opinion.

GOT IT its "Grump," I didn't very much like griffon the brush-off so i tuned most of it out.

Well, heres my critique: It's much better than I would have done and I like it, it's not something I'd put on my ipod to listen to every day but its pretty good. Pinkies voice just seems to be more of an extra to the music itself, which is minimal but entertaining, though I personally would like a little bit more going on, that's just the kind of music I enjoy. For some reason I like when there are many many many things happening in a song, sometimes all at once; (though adding sirens to every pop song isn't something I approve of.)