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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:07 pm

So, apparently making Original Characters of all kind is a big Thing (with a capital tea) in this fandom, or at least on this site, what with all the various RP.

Things is, not all OCs are good in concept. To be quite honest, quite a number could be said to be shitty.

What I propose with this thread, is to deliberately create terrible OC names or concept, for fun. Let's see how far we can can go.

Bad taste, political incorrectness (in the limit of this site's rules), dark humor : let's have fun !

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So, I'll start it.

I had this expression in mind : "stranger danger".

So I thought : if we had a character named "Stranger Danger", how could we push the concept behind the name ?

While I try to come up with something able to make angel weep, I'll let you give your own ideas.
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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:11 pm

A male unicorn named "Watch List".

He's on every government watchlist there is, and for very good reason. His cutie mark is a Police Report, his face is always locked with a massive smile and wide eyes, and his special talent is felony offences.
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Post by Kippershy Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:42 pm

Crimson Wings
He's got a red mane, black coat and red wings. I mean, who the hell does that kind've colour scheme? They must have been off their nut when designing something like that.

Aside from that, in the story where he's the protagonist, he's told to go round some nearby villages and it takes him two days to do it because he's too busy fucking mares! Lazy bastard.
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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:45 pm

Kipper, your self-degradation amuses me
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Post by Kippershy Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:56 pm

Funniest thing is, it's all true.
Red mane / black coat is bad enough, I didn't really consider the whole red/black cliche or universal hate towards the mix because how common it is, I like the combo myself - but after it was brought up once, I noticed it in other OC characters that usually had no thought put into them.

Admittedly there was some thought put into the red/black scheme - the original list of names I wrote down started at Cherry Sundae (which I then used for the female, because I thought it was too girlie a name) went onto 'red wings' and decided that was too childish and close to Redeye and then got to Crimson Wings.
I wanted him to have red wings because I liked the idea.

When it came to his coat, the two colours I had come to mind was either ivory white or charcoal/black - and I felt that ivory white would look far too much like Blackjack in a way. Besides, black allows me to add in a perk where he gains stealth points at night (which has been added) due to his natural colour.


...As well as that, I actually was off my fucking nut on painkillers because I had just come out from an operation when I finished up my planning for him.
So yeah, I was flying high as a kite.


As for the lazy bastard thing, I was in the FOE threads over on 4chan - /mlp/ and one person said they were reading my story because I'd mentioned it and one of the things they had to say was that they liked the four villages setting and how they found it highly amusing that it takes him two days to pass on a simple message because he's too busy getting laid.

I laughed, another anon laughed, good times were had.
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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:05 pm

I still need to get around to reading that.... *grumbles*
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Post by Kippershy Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:16 pm

Don't worry so much about it. I'm planning on a rewrite some time soon anyway.
My plan is to get this latest chapter out, which I'm 60% done on, then I'll be going through the whole story chapter by chapter giving it revisions to hopefully make it all the same level of quality that I've reached after this year of writing.
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Post by Stringtheory Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:16 pm

Five Words:

Dark Demon King Ravenblood Nightblade
he's an interior design Alicorn

do I win?
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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:19 pm

So.... So far I'm the only besides Harmony who actually bothered to deliberately make a bad OC
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Post by Stringtheory Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:21 pm

Mister Frost wrote:So.... So far I'm the only besides Harmony who actually bothered to deliberately make a bad OC
your OC could be good if he actually was innocent all those times, that could make a pretty good fic...
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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:23 pm

...I can't do anything right! *weeps*
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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:23 pm

"Road Kill"

He's a bus driver.
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Post by Kippershy Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:32 pm

Mister Frost wrote:So.... So far I'm the only besides Harmony who actually bothered to deliberately make a bad OC

Crimson wasn't an intentionally bad OC, just a poor choice in colour scheme in some peoples eyes.
His personality makes up for it though, definitely.
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Post by Ironmonger Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:35 pm

"Cop Out"

He's an incredibly fat police officer who beats earth ponies.

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Post by Frost Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:37 pm

I'm not saying it was intentionally bad, I'm just saying that bringing up your OC for self-depreciation isn't what this thread is about. No offense intended to you

Ironmonger wrote:"Cop Out"

He's an incredibly fat police officer who beats zebras.

Fixed.
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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:39 pm

Dem Stripes ruined the neighborhood.
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Post by jacky2734 Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:06 pm

Coo Clucksclan - he's a devote advocate of the equal rights for different species.
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:14 pm

Racing Stripe - His special talent is to ruin his pants.

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Post by Guest Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:52 am

A list:

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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:55 am

Fuzzy Slippers - A quite fluffy pony, who incidentally is also a Star of the Equestrian gay-porn industry.
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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:37 am

Overlong Analysis Cobalt wrote:Spider Jerusalem
Spider Jerusalem takes drugs, trips the fuck out, thinks he's a pony in a magical land called Equestria. Scratch that, this is brilliant.
Horrible OC names & concepts DklAE
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Post by Kippershy Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:14 pm

Mister Frost wrote:I'm not saying it was intentionally bad, I'm just saying that bringing up your OC for self-depreciation isn't what this thread is about. No offense intended to you

Ironmonger wrote:"Cop Out"

He's an incredibly fat police officer who beats zebras.

Fixed.

I'm not self depreciating, I'm having a laugh at myself.
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:19 pm

Harmony Ltd. wrote:Dem Stripes ruined the neighborhood.
Sir, you may want to be careful who you say that around Crazy
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Post by Scyto Harmony Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:36 pm

Mark - A pony who leaves scuff marks wherever he walks.
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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sun Feb 17, 2013 2:11 pm

ScytoHarmony wrote:Mark - A pony who leaves scuff marks wherever he walks.
That's what you get for wearing rusty horseshoes.
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Feb 17, 2013 2:21 pm

OH GOD IT'S SOMBRA'S MOM!
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Post by Harmony Ltd. Sun Feb 17, 2013 2:24 pm

CamoBadger wrote:OH GOD IT'S SOMBRA'S MOM!
Talking of bad OCs Spike
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Post by CamoBadger Sun Feb 17, 2013 2:26 pm

Harmony Ltd. wrote:
CamoBadger wrote:OH GOD IT'S SOMBRA'S MOM!
Talking of bad OCs Spike
Hey! Sombra's a bad CHARACTER, he's not an OC Spike
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Post by jacky2734 Sun Feb 17, 2013 10:41 pm

CamoBadger wrote:
Harmony Ltd. wrote:
CamoBadger wrote:OH GOD IT'S SOMBRA'S MOM!
Talking of bad OCs Spike
Hey! Sombra's a bad CHARACTER, he's not an OC Spike
Well, technically, he was an Original Character for the show. Spike

Got another one:
Plot Hole - I'm pretty sure using the description I want of him would get me kicked off the site.
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Post by Frost Sun Feb 17, 2013 10:45 pm

Sticky Sock.

I'll let you make your own inferences
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